Reviews For Hesperides' Apple
Name: Renna reviewed 29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Aug 11, 2008 11:01 pm
Wonderful story. I love the close attention you pay to the little details. So many writers just skim over the small things that make a story truly believable. Excellent job.
Name: indigoeeyes reviewed 29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Jul 31, 2008 08:54 am
think this is the only story ive read 5+ times..xDD it says not completed but since you havent updated in months..i guess its completed xDDD
Name: silver rose reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on Jul 24, 2008 04:14 pm
you have no idea how many times I've read this....hahaha...please update soon...I'm so desperate for the ending..seee!...my sad face ;(..soon to be x_x....(lol)
Name: Safira33oo reviewed 29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Jul 10, 2008 02:29 am
please , please take a update soon . please .
Name: cindy reviewed 29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Apr 14, 2008 05:51 am
its been almost 7 months since the last update..plz update it soon..
Name: erskie reviewed 9. Of ice and Wood on Apr 05, 2008 04:53 pm
The All Blacks perform a haka, not a dance- please don't get the two mixed up! A haka is a Maori war cry, designed to call the ancestors spirits up out of the ground into their bodies and prepare them from battle- as well as intimidate the other side.

other than that I love your story!! Its fantastic!
Name: ophelia bedelia reviewed 29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Mar 23, 2008 10:09 am
oh no! where is the next chapter? don't say its the end?!! I just discovered this story, and have not been this engrossed since I read Kirichi's 'A Tale of Two Matchmakers' last year! I love your writing style, and I love this story! Keep up the good work!
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed 29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Mar 15, 2008 01:46 pm
I liked it, read it on a whim...and thought it was good. You have exquisite story telling abilities. I was a bit unsure of the plot, but it grew on me. I would love to see a follow up...I wanted more romance, and happiness...but I guess this one was more canon, lol. Thanks for entertaining me.
Name: tinamarie reviewed 2. A journey of discovery... on Mar 12, 2008 02:10 pm
I have a feeling that Ginny's not going to be able to keep her facade up for long.
Name: tinamarie reviewed 1. Ashes to ashes, the past relinquished on Mar 12, 2008 01:33 pm
OMG this is written beautifully I can't wait to read on!!!
Name: tinamarie reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on Mar 12, 2008 12:42 pm
Oh my gosh, this sounds like it is going to be a fantastic literary ride! I can't wait to click on next!!!
Name: cherrypit8 reviewed 29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Mar 09, 2008 10:40 am
This story is amazing! I love the interaction between D and G! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Name: pixiedust reviewed 29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Feb 18, 2008 08:00 am
this is such a great fic!! please update!!!! i have to know what happens next!!!:)
Name: darkness_faerie88 reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on Feb 05, 2008 02:09 pm
I love this story but I noticed that it's not completed...please update!!
Name: darkness_faerie88 reviewed Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on Jan 21, 2008 08:51 am
This is such a great story. I love it!!
Name: selene_blackwell reviewed 28. Persephone's change of mind on Jan 02, 2008 06:11 pm
OH HOW BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!
HOW INCREDIBLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!



wow.
Name: selene_blackwell reviewed 27. Old friends on Jan 02, 2008 05:53 pm
BRILLIANT!
And how adorable! A Remus jr! :D That makes me so happy!!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WRITING!
Name: selene_blackwell reviewed 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse on Jan 02, 2008 05:38 pm
loved it! loved it!
Name: selene_blackwell reviewed 25. Getting back in the game on Jan 02, 2008 05:28 pm
OH MY GOODNESS GRACIOUS THIS WAS SUCH AN EXCELLENT CHAPTER! I am so addicted to your story! And to think that PANSY of all people is in on it to help Ginny get back with Draco all safe and sound! Well...at least...that is what I am supposing!
BRILLIANT!
BEAUTIFUL!
and keep writting.
Name: selene_blackwell reviewed 24. Narcissa Black Malfoy on Jan 02, 2008 05:12 pm
how sweet...and horrifying!! I hope it all turns out well. I really like how you portrayed ALL the characters in this story. You really are an amazing writer.
Name: selene_blackwell reviewed 16. A happy couple on Jan 01, 2008 03:43 pm
brilliant. but this looks to be quite bad when he finds out about her. ooh my goodness!
Name: chocolate_snow reviewed 29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Oct 17, 2007 11:11 pm
AWESOME!!!
Beautifully Written
Name: emenem10 reviewed 5. The willing bride on Oct 10, 2007 11:00 am
Hey, just a comment about your Latin. I know you gave a shout in the beginning of your story that you would improve. I don't mean to be picky... But for future reference: "Tela subrideo" cloth is a thing, so it is 3rd person singular. Your verb ending would change then. Instead of "subrideo" you should have "subridet." At least, I'm pretty sure. I can't seem to remember or find the parts of the verb in either my book or the web that I need to back up my statement. Oh, no wait, here. Yeah, that’s right.
Fabulous story though!! I really enjoy the different important parts. Your foreshadowing and your intensely woven and planned plot make my head spin! This is worth my many, many reads. I can't remember if I've reviewed your story before. If not, I am ever so sorry! I try, I really do. But as you probably know, there just aren't enough hours in a day. =) ~Emily
Name: oyoshi527 reviewed 29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Oct 03, 2007 10:27 am
I've been quite taken by this story and have been following it for some time now. Keep up the good work! :)
Name: cindy reviewed 29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Sep 28, 2007 11:03 am
I LUV THIS FIC?!!!THIS IS SOOOO DAMN NICE!!!KEEP UP THE GREAT JOB AND ME WAITING EAGERLY FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER..
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