Name: Sub reviewed
29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Sep 14, 2007 11:31 am
Yay, another chapter!
I love your work and I do hope you'll write more soon.
How was Europe? I hope you enjoyed it!
As always, I am looking forward to reading more of your story,
all the best, Sub
Name: Dex reviewed
29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Sep 12, 2007 01:05 pm
I love this story...
PS. That little parentheses, wrinkles metaphor was absolutely brill! Love this so much.
I noticed a few spelling mistakes. ie, you spelt facade faade, and a couple other things.. Just thought I should point that out. Please update soon.
Name: Pipperstorms reviewed
29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Sep 05, 2007 05:32 pm
yet another great chapter :-)
Name: Melauris reviewed
29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Sep 05, 2007 01:37 pm
Great chapter, the same as the fic! Love every word u write! Update ASAP
Name: FrecklesForever reviewed
29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Sep 05, 2007 12:22 pm
That was awesome. This story is SO great. I want it to continue for always...even after the kids are born. Update soon. You know I love it!
Name: citrusabby reviewed
29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Aug 31, 2007 05:27 am
The Cyrus/Serafina thing left me oddly comforted... Hmm...
Name: missa reviewed
29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Aug 30, 2007 05:10 am
Wonderful. Thank you so much for writing this story.
Name: Mollie reviewed
29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Aug 29, 2007 11:11 pm
That was a really good chapter. I can't wait for you to update!!!
Name: joliefille reviewed
29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Aug 29, 2007 10:39 pm
Wait, who's Leo again? I loved all the bits at the Mediwitch's office, it was funny and enlightening and endearing. And picturing Blaise "cooking" icing, lol.
Name: darkloveangel reviewed
29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Aug 29, 2007 09:16 pm
I love this story, please write more..and fast! haha
thanx theresa
Name: ExquisiteBeauty reviewed
29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Aug 29, 2007 07:59 pm
I loved it!
Wonderful!
Name: Cathryn Aeiran reviewed
29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Aug 29, 2007 07:31 pm
Draco will claim the cake! It is his destiny.
Name: Fergalicious reviewed
29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Aug 29, 2007 05:20 pm
Love the story---please keep updating. It's awesome!
Name: Blueeyedbrunette reviewed
29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Aug 29, 2007 04:00 pm
love it!
Name: CCC reviewed
29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Aug 29, 2007 01:27 pm
I was happy to see an update. : )
Name: Persephone33 reviewed
29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Aug 29, 2007 10:44 am
Wonderful chapter! I thought this passage was particularly lovely:
The smell of warm, nearly dry grass, and dirt moist with the remnants of desiccated streams permeated the air, lightly, softly, like the whisper of the summery landscape unfolding before their eyes.
Just beautiful! Thanks!
Name: ZSF reviewed
29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Aug 29, 2007 10:19 am
Great chapter, as usual!
Name: Moonyk reviewed
29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Aug 29, 2007 08:34 am
OMG!!!! AN UPDATE AN UPDATE!!! HAHAHAH WONDERFUL!!! -CLAPS JOYFULLY-
Oh how far they've come, especially with the banter and flirtation thing. Oh I LOVE the flirtation things! It makes my insides all aflutter! But you have pointed out some very good points that all is not well and dandy and they still have a lot to get through.
I liked the part where Draco wishes Ginny would forgive him. It's just so real and so THERE. So wow. Okay cheerio and omg please update soon so I dont hyperventilate when I see a new chapter!!!
Peaceout.
Author's Response: Oh no, I'm sorry I left you hanging... I'm happy you liked the chapter, and I'll really try not to take THAT long to update again. Thanks for your enthusiasm!
Name: oxymoron8 reviewed
29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Aug 29, 2007 08:27 am
Great chapter. I really liked it and cannot wait for you to update. So, Bella is away and not feeling well... I loved this "softer" side to Draco and hope that we can see more of it. I really hope that those babies are borned soon, so we can see how he reacts to not being in control of what is happening. Again excellent and great writing of this chapter....How long do you expect it to be? Will they be any sequels?
Author's Response: Yes, Bella is away >:] Hopefully she'll stay that way. I have another two chapters planned (maybe three?), plus an epilogue, and that'll be the end of my DG writing career. I had other plot bunnies, but I must really focus on getting into medical school (i.e. getting the grades to get there!), as well as writing stuff that isn't stolen from JKR. But hopefully the end of the story (and its rewrite, with more goodies interspersed here and there) will leave you satiated.
Name: enoimreh reviewed
29. Unexpected surprises of the pleasant sort on Aug 29, 2007 08:22 am
"Apparently, despite rather obvious hints, the fact that one does not actually heat the icing completely eluded the poor boy."
^^ quite possibly my favorite line!!!
glad to see you haven't deserted us! wonderful, as usual (more dg action?)
Name: MissMarie66 reviewed
Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on Aug 13, 2007 09:20 am
i looovee this story!! what happens next......?
Name: Sub reviewed
28. Persephone's change of mind on Aug 09, 2007 08:54 am
Hello there! I am not quite sure whether you remember me or not, but I used to read your amazing story at schnoogle. Sadly, the site doesn't work for me, so I came here to read on. It has been a while, I was quite busy for months, but finally I could read on.
I've told you again and again how amazing and marvellous this is, I just love your writing style, your imagination and your skills of making this one of the best D/G stories I have ever read.
I won't review chapters 22 to 27 in detail, the general flow is thus: bloody brilliant. You are a genius.
I can see that you still write and update from time to time-- I am truly glad you didn't abandon this and are still with us. So: keep on the fantastic work and update soooooon! ;)
All the best, Sub
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed
28. Persephone's change of mind on Jul 14, 2007 08:56 am
I love how you show both sides of the 'story', with Pansy's murder tale... Also, it's a fabulous characterization of Pansy in D/G who wouldn't give in and cry in Ginny's arms. Well done and the DG action was appreciated ;)
Name: Lewis reviewed
Prologue: Laws of Blood Purity on Jul 12, 2007 09:25 pm
wow...you have clearly delineated how the world (even HP) isn't black/white. I've always appreciated the HP world as a lighthearted read where the good guys always win but this brings the characters into a completely different light. Great development.
Name: Lewis reviewed
23. The terrible doings of Draco Malfoy on Jul 12, 2007 08:14 pm
oh no...poor poor Dean:(