Reviews For Hesperides' Apple
Name: Akt5us reviewed 8. Kindling suspicion on Jul 31, 2006 05:12 pm
Loved the chapter! I just dying for Draco to catch on! You know way too much for your on good! lolz! With the 1,2,3,4! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Name: WG reviewed 8. Kindling suspicion on Jul 31, 2006 04:46 pm
An update - O JOY!! Cant tell u how much i am enjoying our story... great writing and amazing pace.

Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm enjoying your reviews as well. Errr I hope to keep up the pace, since my beta is doubling in speed and I unfortunately have less time to write. (Maybe a few days for the next chapter?) Cheers!
Name: CaesiiOculi reviewed 8. Kindling suspicion on Jul 31, 2006 04:43 pm
This story just keeps getting more and more intricate! I love it!
Would you mind if I used the "reperio" spell in my story? I'd most definitely cite you, of course!!

Author's Response: Please, go right ahead. I'm not even sure the spell's entirely mine (as in, I looked it up in the Latin dictionary, but I doubt I came up with the concept). Either way, feel free to take whichever spell you want. And thanks a lot for the (constant) review(s). They make my days happy!
Name: Moonyk reviewed 8. Kindling suspicion on Jul 31, 2006 03:59 pm
The owl has such a boootiful name though I'm not sure how to pronounce it. And urgh, Draco suspects something! I'm scared!!!

Author's Response: Trust Hermione to give her owl an outlandish name... What does Draco do when he suspects something? He spies. (Or gets people to spy for him. Hmmmm... Who could he put in charge of that...) I'm happy to see you're into this enough to be scared. Thank you for the review!
Name: ronlover reviewed 7. Magical Brazil, bittersweet England on Jul 31, 2006 01:15 pm
Update soon!!! Did Draco really do that? OMG. Update!!!!

Author's Response: Good question!!! :D DID he really do that... hmmmm... thanks for the review!
Name: shs reviewed 7. Magical Brazil, bittersweet England on Jul 31, 2006 07:56 am
Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter! Can't wait for the update! Keep up the fantastic work..
Name: WG reviewed 7. Magical Brazil, bittersweet England on Jul 31, 2006 03:09 am
OO crap - this does explain a lot...

Love the way u mix the past and the present. Great writing!
Name: Mollie reviewed 7. Magical Brazil, bittersweet England on Jul 31, 2006 01:55 am
Oh, I am starting to understand. Excellent chapter. Please update soon.
Name: Akt5us reviewed 7. Magical Brazil, bittersweet England on Jul 30, 2006 07:12 pm
Love the chapter! I can't wait to read about when Draco find's out who she really is!

Author's Response: Yes, things won't look too great when he finds out. And trust me, he will... (dum dum dum duuummmmm) Thanks a lot for the review!
Name: That Iz I reviewed 7. Magical Brazil, bittersweet England on Jul 30, 2006 06:25 pm
Wow. This chapter explains a lot. Of Draco's story and of Ginny's. I never looked too deeply into Draco's actions and hatred towards Potter. Now that I read the story, I understand what he means; what you mean, per say. My sympathy goes to Percy. He thought he was being heroic. Sadly, he was mistaken. Great chapter!
Thanxxx, Isabelle

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!! If you're into looking deeper into Draco's actions, you could (if you want) take it a step further by wondering: he wasn't able to kill Dumbledore. How capable would he have been of sentencing the Weasleys to death? What would his motives be, and could they even be sufficient? >:] Too bad we can't go into the past and find out--oh wait, we can! Maybe in a few chapters or so. :)
Name: Akt5us reviewed 6. Until death do us part on Jul 30, 2006 01:21 pm
Love the chapter! Can't wait to read chapter 8!

Author's Response: You're in luck: Naycit was extra quick with that one and it should be up shortly. Thanks for the review :D
Name: Mollie reviewed 6. Until death do us part on Jul 26, 2006 11:14 pm
I am very interested to see where you take this. Where does the Percy/Hermione bit go in the story? I also wonder what Ginny's thoughts and plans are for Draco. Please update soon.
Name: Sara reviewed 6. Until death do us part on Jul 24, 2006 12:12 pm
OMG, I can't wait for more!!!!
Name: That Iz I reviewed 6. Until death do us part on Jul 23, 2006 02:15 pm
I'm speechless, and I have you to blame for it! *Points accusingly* I'm not much of a nagging person so I'll put 'pressure' on you. Update soon. Fast. Quickly. Accelerate! Okay, I'm done. The story is starting to piece together. I like how you just give pieces of the past. Although, that can be somewhat annoying sometimes...Anyway, Thannxxx a trillion!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the wordy review. I definitely enjoy this speechlessness of yours ;) I understand that pieces of the past are sometimes annoying, particularly since it would make it all so much easier if we already knew everything. Hopefully this serves to kindle some curiosity? Cheers!
Name: ronlover reviewed 6. Until death do us part on Jul 23, 2006 09:29 am
Interesting...update soon!!!!
Name: CCC reviewed 6. Until death do us part on Jul 23, 2006 08:47 am
Write more quickly! I love this story.

Author's Response: puff puff puff I'm doing what I can!!! Working does not help with the creative process, either... But thank you for the enthusiastic review!
Name: Phaedra7veils reviewed 6. Until death do us part on Jul 23, 2006 07:34 am
Now that it has progressed from the fluffy, showy society matron preparation scenes to this very intense and dark oath-taking chapter, I am hooked on this story. I love its plunge into the shadows. Ginny's desparation is palpable. Really good work.

Author's Response: Thank you very much :) I felt as though every "fluffy, showy society" has darker roots, and here they are. Why else would a Weasley, brought up in a healthy and balanced environment like Ginny was, ever go for Malfoy's twisted world? Unfortunately, she's playing with fire and cannot escape unharmed--if she can escape at all.
Name: CaesiiOculi reviewed 6. Until death do us part on Jul 23, 2006 06:35 am
a sort of odd chapter...I'm interested to see where this is going, though.

Author's Response: mmh this mirrors another review I just had. I'd be curious to know what makes it odd. is it what it reveals, the way it's written, the perspective? thanks a lot for the review!!
Name: Embellished reviewed 6. Until death do us part on Jul 23, 2006 06:01 am
The first wedding ceremony is quite fascinating, as was Ginny's hesitation.

The scene with Hermione and Percy seems a little out of place, considering that the rest of the story is written from Ginny's point of view, but it raises all sorts of questions about what happened in the past.

I'm looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response: It's true that I have a natural tendency to write from Ginny's perspective, the fact that I'm a woman limiting my capacity to efficiently write from Draco's point of view. I do try to include thoughts from everyone, however, in an attempt to dilute Ginny's impact on the story. As to the scene with Hermione and Percy, Hermione told/showed it to Ginny, as will become obvious in the next chapter. I'll just call it a uneasy mix between memory and retelling of a memory. Thank you very much for your review. Critiques are always useful!!! :)
Name: ellie reviewed 6. Until death do us part on Jul 23, 2006 04:04 am
woah, that was sinister...
i'm var pleased that you wrote this new
chapter though, and even more worried. what has ginny got planned??
ach, i need the whole story, but you know that...
well done and all that
can't wait for the next chapter.
Name: Akt5us reviewed 5. The willing bride on Jul 21, 2006 09:04 am
I love the story! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Name: ellie reviewed 5. The willing bride on Jul 17, 2006 03:07 am
this is AMAZING
i really like how you brought them together and i kept getting worried
that ginny was going to slip up
yet...
*way too involved*...
well done, i guess
it very well is vvv fabby.
Name: That Iz I reviewed 5. The willing bride on Jul 16, 2006 07:37 pm
I loved your story. Absolutely phenomenal. Ginny's gracious plan (if it's the plan I think it is) might just backfire if she keeps going at the rate she is. Ahh, the webs we weave for life. Though, I'm still curious to see what exactly is Ginny's plan. I'm leaning towards plan a): To break Draco's heart and find information out of him. Making him into the fool on the king's court. Or to do all of the above, just without the public humiliation. Ginny will just pretend to be the innocent, angelic, devoted wife? I think not. Thannnxxx

Love for Eternity
Name: WG reviewed 5. The willing bride on Jul 16, 2006 12:38 pm
Poor Ginny...
Name: ronlover reviewed 5. The willing bride on Jul 16, 2006 12:18 pm
I really liked this chapter. Please Update soon. Good work!!!
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