This was a very interesting premise, and it was well written, but the ending doesn't feel like an ending at all! You shouldn't have stopped. I don't see why this should be a one-shot! Bah!
Anyway, ranting moment over. I did like this fic, and I have to say, I was perplexed by the thought of Crabbe reading a newspaper over breakfast. LOL. ^_^ Nicely done.
huh... what does she mean by 'i had to get your attention somehow'?
does she really like him(scoff), well of course she does. this i-s a Draco/Ginny archive!!!
hehe hi hunny im here lol i so remember the story behind this one and love it lol and i love u even more hugs and kisses lol
Author's Response: You make almost no sense at all, but I still love you goofy! You're Invisible!
Actually hasn't done anything terrible to her has he? *thinks* Anyways I loved this, it was entertaining and well written.
Well, you left me wanting more.
It could have been much longer.
Wonderful. I was especially taken with Pansy's role in this tale.
Aw! I'm glad I added you to my author alert list! This was a cute little fic-let :-)
Please make a sequel. Very good. Short and sweet. :)
Author's Response: I'd thought of making it chaptered, but never of a sequel. Now that's something I might think about. Thanks
You should probably put a couple spaces between your author's note and the actual text of the story.
Also, I don't see Ginny sending something like that. Call me whatever you like, but smart girls don't send guys stupid, over-the-top love notes written on pink paper. Not if they're really interested. Be careful with your characters. It's easy to get caught up in the story and forget it's about two characters that we already should know quite well. Ginny isn't shy. And Draco isn't nice. Keep that in mind as you continue. Good luck.
Author's Response: Thanks for the heads up with the formatting, I didn't mean to make it like that. It's fixed now. I agree and disagree with your comments. I totally understand about the characters havign a start in Canon, but I also think it's the author's choice to expand on that character however they like. I didn't write Ginny or Draco as they would usually be seen. I totally get that and eighty percent of it was intentional. Draco appears much nicer for the majority of the fic mostly because I have him talking to his friends and fellow Slytherins. I personally think that he is a very different person under that kind of situation. Now Ginny, is a different all together. You're probably right because she doesn't spend much time in this fic I didn't think of her very thouroughly, but then again I wrote the entire fic knowing she had written the letter. What I did try to do with her though was make her seem michevous and a bit of a prankster. She didn't mean anything in the letter, she was just looking for something outrageous to catch his attention. So that's my piece and I'm sorry for rambling. I mostly just wanted to get that down for myself. I did have reason behind the mess. So thanks for your comments it helped me with the formatting and made me think about the characterization again. Oh and by the way, I know a lot of smart girls who have done stupid things for guys. Two of them are my best friends.
Your Ginny is a very winsome young lady. I love that Draco doesn't have the slightest idea what hit him.
Author's Response: No idea whatsoever! lol
Ooh, fluff! Guess his eyes are going to be burning into someone now. I enjoyed your characterization of Vin.
Author's Response: I like what I did with Vin, too. I was trying to make them act as Draco would see them instead of Harry.