Name: Mynuet reviewed
Chapter 7 Saying Goodbye To The Past on Aug 09, 2006 06:26 pm
PS - Feel free to add a paragraph to your next update along the lines of, "Mynuet, the site's owner, has officially declared this story has more than enough D/G to be archived here, and so any complaints about it not qualifying can be taken up with her." It's a friendly oligarchic dictatorship around here, and I'm HBIC. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks so mucy Mynuet--I believe I will! **Claps and whistles for the HBIC!** ;-)
Name: ferretlover reviewed
Chapter 7 Saying Goodbye To The Past on Aug 09, 2006 02:32 pm
Hoorah for Greg standing up to Draco & Snape! And for Ginny and Hermione (and the wives) for telling Harry and Ron how it's gonna be. Greg and Luna are adorable, I'm glad that one of our couples is having a fluffy time of things. But I can't wait for the next ball... and Snape and Hermione's dinner before hand. (I wouldn't mind if they never made it to the ball) ;)
Author's Response: Thanks ferretlover! I know--I have to have one happy couple and I also think it's time for Greg to stand up to Draco and become his own man... ;-) More up soon!
Name: jen reviewed
Chapter 7 Saying Goodbye To The Past on Aug 09, 2006 11:59 am
okay i understand the whole other ship things and its a really good stotry but for this website u really should have lonfger draco/ginny sections. it seems like your more intreseted in snape/hermione and they are the main characters. if so this is not the website for you.
Author's Response: Thank you Jen! I sent the story to an admin and she assured me I had enough D/G. I have more of them in other chapters... I promise! Just hang in there!
Name: Caroline reviewed
Chapter 7 Saying Goodbye To The Past on Aug 09, 2006 11:07 am
I absolutly love this story! I have never really liked Hermione/Severus ship but this story is an eyeopener!! I think this is a really funny and good written story, and the ships are easy to follow! keep up the good work. can't wait for the next update=)
Author's Response: Thanks Caroline! Glad you like it and my Hermione/Snape! ;-) More coming soon!
Name: mischievous_lozz reviewed
Chapter 7 Saying Goodbye To The Past on Aug 09, 2006 06:48 am
Wooh! That was a great chapter I'm so glad that Harry and Ron have had a good talking to by Hermione and Ginny. I do hope we see the lunch with Piper, Samantha, Ginny and Hermione soon. It promises to be very interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks mischievous_lozz! Yep, I think Harry and Ron needed a talking to! ;-) More coming soon!
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
Chapter 7 Saying Goodbye To The Past on Aug 09, 2006 05:18 am
I am glad that the girls confronted Ron and Harry, what jerks. Now about Ginny and Draco, I hope that you will add more about them soon. I so want to see when they are going to go out on a real date and know one another! Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks dgloves! I will have more of Ginny and Draco coming up, but a heads up--they will have a major fight before the dating starts. Don't worry though, it will start! ;-)
Name: beckysue2 reviewed
Chapter 6 Without Change, Something Sleeps Inside Us, And Seldom Awakens. on Aug 09, 2006 04:09 am
I'm glad that it got straightened out with Ron and Harry. And I'm really glad Goyle stood up for himself and Luna. That made me smile!
Author's Response: Thanks beckysue2! With all the angst between DM/GW & SS/HG, I wanted one happy couple! teehee So I am glad Greg put them in their place too--and that Ron and Harry was put in theirs!
Name: Mynuet reviewed
Chapter 7 Saying Goodbye To The Past on Aug 09, 2006 03:17 am
I'm really enjoying this story - the combination of the three couples is handled really well, and I like how each is at a different stage of (denial) progression. And thank goodness that they finally had it out with Ron and Harry (stabnation! Assholes.) I could get to like their wives, I think.
Author's Response: Thanks so much Mynuet! I am so happy you like it! This was my first attempt at focusing on more than one major couple and it's hard trying to balance them all, but very fun making the different stages! Yes, I agree that Ron and Harry needed to be told--wankers!
Name: wish reviewed
Chapter 4 Something Cannot Emerge From Nothing. on Aug 06, 2006 09:06 pm
the dinner was great
Author's Response: Thanks so much wish!
Name: wish reviewed
Chapter 4 Something Cannot Emerge From Nothing. on Aug 06, 2006 09:06 pm
the dinner was great
Author's Response: Thanks so much wish!
Name: malini reviewed
Chapter 6 Without Change, Something Sleeps Inside Us, And Seldom Awakens. on Aug 05, 2006 06:01 am
this is a really great fic. i haatee harry and ron. they're like soo full of themselves. n e ways, i was wonderin if u could add a little more of draco and ginny interaction?? thxx
Author's Response: Thank you malini! I will have more D/G, but remeber, I have three main couples so I will have all of those. ;]
Name: Hajra reviewed
Chapter 6 Without Change, Something Sleeps Inside Us, And Seldom Awakens. on Aug 05, 2006 03:55 am
I'm really enjoying the Draco and Ginny interaction, and the Severus-Hermione by-play...and I just have to say that Luna and Greg are so adorable!
Author's Response: Thanks Hajra! So glad you like--even the sappy LL/GG! ;]
Name: ferretlover reviewed
Chapter 6 Without Change, Something Sleeps Inside Us, And Seldom Awakens. on Aug 04, 2006 01:53 pm
I completely agree with Southern. I can't wait for things to start heating up. This is officially my new favorite story. I loved Draco's reaction... and Pansy's! and I especially love the speedy updates, so THANKS!
Author's Response: Thanks ferretlover! YAY! I am someones favorite! More up soon!
Name: adorame reviewed
Chapter 6 Without Change, Something Sleeps Inside Us, And Seldom Awakens. on Aug 04, 2006 12:27 pm
Good chapter! I loved the D/G interaction. Another kiss too! Thanks. I like how H/S are going too. I think this is the first story that I liked them together in! L/G are cute in this too, they seem to be the only pair that have it together! I can't wait to see what you have planed for them all next! Keep up the good work and please put in more D/G with Harry nearby!
Author's Response: Thanks adorame! Glad you like it and my SS/HG! I think L/G can be sappy... But I wanted one couple without angst! LOL More up soon!
Name: Slytherin Wolf reviewed
Chapter 6 Without Change, Something Sleeps Inside Us, And Seldom Awakens. on Aug 04, 2006 11:08 am
Love the story so far. The reactions of Ron and Harry are so typical. Weird pairings that's for sure. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you like this so far! More up in a couple of days.
Name: beckysue2 reviewed
Chapter 6 Without Change, Something Sleeps Inside Us, And Seldom Awakens. on Aug 04, 2006 06:22 am
I really love this! But, where the heck did Pansy show up from???
Author's Response: Thanks! Pansy is the back up person he takes when he doesn't have the time or inclanation to look for anyone else, although she has other thoughts which we will see further in the story.
;-)
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
Chapter 6 Without Change, Something Sleeps Inside Us, And Seldom Awakens. on Aug 04, 2006 06:08 am
Okay, I am seriously waiting for the dating to begin. I am so looking forward to seeing the characters actually go out - maybe even as a group. So when are Severus and Hermione to date? When are Draco and Ginny going to go out? Even better when are the four of them going to be on the cover of the Prophet and gossiped about? I can't wait and hope that it will happen soon! Yes, I love the chapters and I am so affected that I do hope that Harry and Ron choke on their jealousy and hope that their wives say a thing or two about their immaturity.
Author's Response: They will date, but not for a chapter or two. ;-) Ginny plays a mean prank on Draco and he will retaliate, then things get going. Oh, don't worry, the wives will have their say, along with Ginny and Hermione!
Name: katie moffat reviewed
Chapter 5 The Proximity of a Desirable Thing Tempts One To Overindulgence. on Aug 01, 2006 04:44 pm
i am totally in love with this fic! more now please.
Author's Response: Thanks so much katie! More coming soon!
Name: Ringo reviewed
Chapter 5 The Proximity of a Desirable Thing Tempts One To Overindulgence. on Aug 01, 2006 03:12 am
Can't wait for the ball! It's a great continuation but I think that the dialogue of this chapter was not smooth enough and rather unnatural. Just some advice, when I write conversations, in order to check if they sound realistic I read them out loud. Sounds silly but it works for me. Keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: Thanks Ringo! Glad you liked it! I think you will really like the ball!
;-)
Name: AshleyM reviewed
Chapter 5 The Proximity of a Desirable Thing Tempts One To Overindulgence. on Jul 31, 2006 05:28 am
Love it! and I cant wait for the next chapter and the ball!
Author's Response: Thanks Ashley! It's coming up soon!
Name: ferretlover reviewed
Chapter 5 The Proximity of a Desirable Thing Tempts One To Overindulgence. on Jul 30, 2006 06:38 pm
Yay, an update! I can't wait for the ball. I love Luna and Greg (glad that he realized that she doesn't like Looney), they're too adorable. Perfect Draco/Ginny, now he knows who her dinner date was with - she lost her leverage. And you've made a special place for Hermione/Snape in my heart... who would have ever thought it possible, but so far I'm liking them most. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks so much ferretlover! I am so glad you like it and my SS/HG!And my LL/GG! ;-) Yep, Draco knows now! Just wait until the ball...
Name: ferretlover reviewed
Chapter 4 Something Cannot Emerge From Nothing. on Jul 27, 2006 03:28 pm
I love Fred and George's little matchmaking scheme. I am addicted to this story already, but I guess I can wait until Aug. 1... just 5 more days. I think I'll make it. I love Draco/Ginny, and now I'm also excited about the Luna/Greg developments. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: THank you! I may try to update later today... In my humble opinion, D/G are the hottest couple in this fic.
Name: ferretlover reviewed
Chapter 3 Kindness Is The Beginning Of Cruelty. on Jul 27, 2006 03:26 pm
I love it!! I love how Hermione and Snape worked out, and the Virginia Weasley bit! I was a late reader of the HP books, and so also a newer reader of fan fiction, so I've always known her as Ginevra and I just can't imagine her as Virginia.
Author's Response: LOL I know! I did that because most people wouldn't automatically assume Ginevra. Glad you enjoyed!
Name: ferretlover reviewed
Chapter 2 Enemies Make You Stronger, Allies Make You Weaker. on Jul 27, 2006 01:43 pm
Ok, I admit that usually the idea of Snape/Hermione makes me cringe... but this works. You set it up perfectly, that entire scene at the end, fabulous. and I even like the idea of Luna and Greg too.
Author's Response: I am glad you thing SS/HG works here. Of course, all my fics have angst--but I am a firm believer in happy endigs!
;-)
Name: ferretlover reviewed
Chapter 1 He Who Can Destroy A Thing Can Control A Thing on Jul 27, 2006 01:40 pm
Great first chapter! It explained a lot, so it was a lot to take in, but I loved it. Thanks for putting the rules in there.
Author's Response: Thanks ferretlover! You're welcome! I always put the rules at the bottom of the first chapter so that readers won't have to go look up the challenge. ;-)