Name: die Loreley reviewed
Chapter 1 Letter on Nov 14, 2006 04:33 am
I can't wait to see more -- what happened to Ginny? And how did they get together in the end? Poor, poor Draco.
Author's Response: All in good time. You will find out soon how they got together though. Maybe in the next couple of chapters.
~Kenzie
Name: Bitter_thymes reviewed
Chapter 1 Letter on Sep 25, 2006 02:08 am
Well crafted! Anxious to see the past details flesh out.
Only correction in the writing I saw so far was in the second paragraph, 7th sentence - should be "lose" rather than "loose."
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment and the correction. I am currently looking for a beta reader so it is helpful when people point out some of the errors I may have missed.
~Kenzie
Name: Moonyk reviewed
Chapter 1 Letter on Sep 23, 2006 05:52 am
Brilliant. Especially the last paragraph. You can see now that not only does Draco have to walk through his pain, he needs to help his children too. It's sad that his 9 year old daughter has to take care of things because he's too messed up. I have no idea where this story is heading which is oh so refreshing. And I'm loving it! You're just making me care about every single sentence, every word.
It's rare cos I usually read through chapters so fast I miss some lines but not this though. *claps* And personally, I really liked the little background you gave on D&G's relationship. Hope to read more.
cheers!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I'm always so nervous to hear what people think and you left such a nice comment for my last chapter as well. You make me want to sit down and finish up another chapter.
~Kenzie
P.S. I'm the same way with stories sometimes. Reading fast and not catching some of the lines.
Name: Xazou reviewed
Chapter 1 Letter on Sep 22, 2006 09:52 pm
WOW, I really love this story.
I never tried to be a beta reader before, but I can give it a try if you want.
Author's Response: It would be wonderful. I am always looking for a beta-reader. I,m glad you enjoyed the story so far.
~Kenzie
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