Name: Brittany reviewed
His Girl on Oct 03, 2006 02:50 am
Ooooo..this is soo great :D:D Can't wait to read more :D:D
Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter should be here soon. Hope you keep reading! Lunaeyes
Name: hummie reviewed
His Girl on Oct 02, 2006 09:14 pm
I love it. I don't know where this plot line is headed toward, but hopefully it won't be something overdone. This fic is such a fresh breath of air in its composition and style. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks for your wonderful comments in your reviews! I appreciate them. I hope everyone enjoys where this plot ends up.
Name: hummie reviewed
Noticing on Oct 02, 2006 08:45 pm
YAY! So wonderful. You really have a great writing style :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I love writing, I'm glad that I turned out to be semi-good at it.
Name: hummie reviewed
The Beginning on Oct 02, 2006 07:46 pm
Ohh excellent. I've yet to read a DG with these snatches from Draco's perspective. LOVE IT.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I love writing Draco's perspectives, especially those little snatches from cannon.
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
His Girl on Oct 02, 2006 04:15 pm
Hmmm, it's getting hot in the room with those two going at it. Awesome chapter and I so cannot wait til the next meeting when they define what they are to one another. What goes on with Draco and will Harry make an appearance or send a note to Ginny with something about his love for her? What goes on with Draco and his father? Narcissa & Severus? Oh, I look forward to more from the next chapter! Love it!
Author's Response: There are a lot of possibilities and unanswered questions, aren't there? :) Thanks for the review!
Name: Sam reviewed
His Girl on Oct 02, 2006 02:21 pm
I think you should continue with this story. it was really good Honest! it can go far to become really really good!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I appreciate such kind words in you review. i will be continuing with it. So stick around to see what happens. :)
Name: PenelopeWeasley reviewed
His Girl on Oct 02, 2006 02:03 pm
This is getting so good! Please keep it coming!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm going to begin work on Chapter 10 this week.
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed
His Girl on Oct 02, 2006 01:05 pm
That was really good. Can't wait to read more. Good Luck! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter. Thank you very much for the review. ~Lunaeyes
Name: fallenwitch reviewed
Striped Scarlet and Gold on Sep 11, 2006 10:37 am
Huh? What's going on with that door? Is it locked or not? It locked and then neither Draco nor Ginny could open it. I'm assuming Draco couldn't because you said previously, "Draco motioned with his wand at the door, but it remained the same." I read this twice last chapter, to make sure you meant he tried to "Alohomora" it. Then in this chapter, Ginny tries what looks like the same spell and the door opens? WTF? Does a little nookie work to unlock a door? Why bother even having the door lock? At this point, they are both so hormonally drawn to each other, wouldn't it make sense for them to kiss without that external push? Especially when she is able to just waltz right out and it feels as though the reader was manipulated into expecting them to have to deal with the consequences of their physical interaction right then and there without an easy out.
If I put that issue aside (which may not be an issue b/c I might have missed something), I thought the chapter was quite sweet and evocative. Thanks for the update, as usual!
Author's Response: Ah, haha, I was wondering if you were going to catch that. It was poorly explained, I know, but it was for a reason. All will be explained next chapter, I promise that was no mistake. Thank you for your kind thoughts. You always keep me on my toes. Lunaeyes
Name: Persephone33 reviewed
Striped Scarlet and Gold on Sep 10, 2006 09:05 am
Nice chapter! I love that she gave him something to remember her by. Fun. Now how's she going to get it back?
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Hmmm, how will she get it back? You'll have to wait and see, but I promise that it'll be interesting. Lunaeyes
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
Striped Scarlet and Gold on Sep 10, 2006 07:28 am
I loved it! This chapter was filled with a lot of passion and I so cannot wait to see what lies ahead with the two lovebirds! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! Lots lies ahead, both fun and trouble, and it'll be interesting to see how they handle it. :) Lunaeyes
Name: fallenwitch reviewed
Before the Storm on Sep 09, 2006 03:50 pm
Oh, my. Oh my, yes! Thank you very much!
Author's Response: Are you truly at a loss for words? Haha, you're welcome. I value your opinion, I do believe, and I'm glad you enjoyed that chapter. Lunaeyes
Name: Deridre_OKelly reviewed
Before the Storm on Sep 08, 2006 02:28 pm
AH! Update! Quickly now!
Author's Response: Ha, thanks for the review. I'll try, I promise. But the real world beckons too. Lunaeyes
Name: you know it by now reviewed
Before the Storm on Sep 08, 2006 01:51 pm
"gravelly voice" Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh sexy. That's just hott. I love that, and I don't even like the Malfoy-type. but gravelly is sex-AY!. Other than that, the writing was pretty amazing too, lol. thanx so much, i did enjoy. Gracias!
Author's Response: Ah, thanks to my greatest fan. Gravelly makes it all worth it, eh? Thanks for the review! Lunaeyes
Name: Lottie reviewed
Before the Storm on Sep 08, 2006 01:22 pm
Oooo! The tension then the kis...so great!
Author's Response: Thanks! The tension is high, but the kiss was even better. :) Lunaeyes
Name: Persephone33 reviewed
Before the Storm on Sep 08, 2006 04:41 am
Nice cliffie. I like Draco's gradual rationalization of his feelings, and Ginny's denial of hers.
I like it all very much.
Author's Response: Ah, thanks! It's great fun writing this stuff, I love it so much. Thanks for the kind review! Lunaeyes
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
Before the Storm on Sep 08, 2006 04:32 am
Intense! Finally a kiss to save them . I am so excited and glad that they are going to be stuck in a room and sort out their feelings. Great chapter and I look forward to another one soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! Definitely what i was going for. And yes, they have some things to work out, both together and alone. Thanks, I hope to have another one out soon enough. Lunaeyes
Name: Moonyk reviewed
Before the Storm on Sep 08, 2006 02:56 am
GAH!!!!! OMG OMG OMG!!! Hahahaha can I just say Malfoy is so so hot?! His eyes, his eyes! Okay update soon! cheers!
Author's Response: Oh, thanks. I love all the reviews I'm getting. I'll review soon, I promise! Thank you! Lunaeyes
Name: trupii reviewed
Before the Storm on Sep 07, 2006 05:15 pm
UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE!!
I love this story! only will you please please please please please please please please please please... keep it clean? please please?? i would love you forever if you did!!
Author's Response: I really appreciate this review! I will certainly update when I have the time, and I never let more than five days go by without updating, so it won't be too too long. As for keeping it clean, I must tell you that this story is taking me, not the other way around. I have a vague idea, but I don't know where its going. It has a mind of its own. But I know that I won't make it all the way naughty. It might bump up to definitely naughty (for teens and older), but nothing beyond that. Hope that's ok!
Lunaeyes
Name: fallenwitch reviewed
Dreams and Denial on Sep 02, 2006 03:25 pm
This chapter threw me for a bit of a loop. I didn't get what either one of them was going on about when it came to Draco carrying Ginny to the Hospital Wing. I mean, what else was he supposed to when she was injured like that? Leave her to die? I don't think so, too many house points deducted for that sort of thing!
It might have been more effective if Draco had rationalized his actions. "Of course he saved the bint. He was Head Boy, after all, but that didn't mean he wasn't still thoroughly committed to his original plan...blah, blah, blah" And I think that his dream following that defensive intellectualization of the situation would have been spectacular! (Of course, the dream was fairly spectacular all on its own!)
Those were just a few thoughts, which I hope you will feel free to blow off b/c only you know where this ride is headed! Anyhow, I enjoyed this chapter and, as usual, loved Draco's snarky head-talk immensely. (Sections I and III were my favourites!) Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: This is really awesome stuff, I have to tell you. Part of me if really wishing I used it, haha, yet I saw it a bit differently. You see, Draco and Ginny would see this very rationally, if they both hadn't felt something as it happened and got over defensive. Draco would have been, 'whatever', but he was breathing hard and his heart beat was up and he knows something is there, so he isn't sure what to do. And we can't forget that Draco did almost kill Ron in HBP, so Ginny porbably doesn't see it as too far of a stretch for him to leave her there. :) I always look forward to these reviews!
Lunaeyes
Name: PenelopeWeasley reviewed
Possession on Aug 28, 2006 06:48 pm
It's getting fun! Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll be working on it!
Lunaeyes
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
Possession on Aug 28, 2006 06:01 pm
Hmm, I like it. I wonder what becomes of the situation and when will Draco make more moves towards Ginny! Loved this chapter and look forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Thanks! It's going to be interesting, that's all I can say! :) Lunaeyes
Name: fallenwitch reviewed
Possession on Aug 28, 2006 05:37 pm
Well, this was a nice transition from the last chapter, wasn't it?
I loved seeing Ginny mentally ditch Harry (who sounded like a prat anyway) after Draco held the door for her. Imagine what she would do if he snogged her?
It was fun watching Draco’s confusion about his reactions to Ginny. I guess this is where that Peeves-induced accident comes into play, isn’t it? Will it be the catalyst that allows Draco to see that his reaction toward Ginny 1) isn’t primarily driven by his need to best Potter and 2) isn’t merely some hormone-based phenomenon, either? Will it let him see that he does indeed have a heart, even if the damn thing's a bit frosty?
Or was the accident more for Ginny’s benefit than Draco’s, as he seems to have a bit more insight into his feelings for her than she does for him? Will it let Draco show her that he’s not 100% git, and that he cares for her, in spite of himself and her? What girl wouldn't fall for that?
I hope to hear the sound of their defensive denial towards each other falling in the coming chapters – sooner is always better than later, but I’ll take whatever you dish out!
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Ah, I love these kinds of reviews. They just make my day. I have to say that my favorite part is when Ginny is getting angry with Harry, as well. Goodness, you'll just have to wait and find out what she's going to do if he snogs her. :) The Peeves induced incident is my not-so-subtle way of giving them a healthy push, because they are btoh so damn stubborn that it might take a while otherwise. Draco might just surprise, who knows, but you can definitely exect that healthy dose of defensive denial. Lunaeyes
Name: fallenwitch reviewed
Enduring the Silence on Aug 19, 2006 05:24 pm
Oh, so that's how Draco became Head Boy. Hmmm...I'll have to stew on that one for awhile. I have to agree with Draco, "What a load of rubbish." But the bits and pieces of history that you're giving us here are falling into place and making sense - even if it's not the whole picture by any means.
And I adored the way Draco finally shocked Ginny into silence. Good for him - one step closer to Potter's girl.
I have a weakness for Draco POV stories so thank you very much for giving me my fix!
Author's Response: Yes, it's still a little shaky as to how Draco became Head Boy, but we'll see a little more of that. I suppose it's like a puzzle,and I'm only giving you a few pieces at a time.
Thanks for the long review, as usual. I look forward to your thoughts on the upcoming chapters because you provide such insight and feedback. Yes, hee, it is good for Draco. It took him a little while to figure it out though. Oh, and you're very welcome. I love being inside his head, it's such an interesting place. ~Lunaeyes
Name: dragoncharmer79 reviewed
In the Dark on Aug 17, 2006 01:17 pm
It is getting good. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter four should be up within the next couple of days.
Lunaeyes