Name: Embellished reviewed
Evacuation on Oct 03, 2006 03:12 pm
I'm glad to see you updating this story. I love the contrast between all of Ginny's emotions in this chapter. She had a hell of a day, didn't she? I'm looking forward to finding out what comes next, now that Ginny and Draco are on their own. Thanks for the new chapter!
Name: Katie reviewed
Roses on Sep 10, 2006 04:17 pm
Kim darling why are you so amazing? I cannot wait for the next chapter!! And i especially cant wait til Draco and Ginny get all HOTT for eachother [cause we know they will..] haha keep up the good work, im hooked!!!!
p.s. our two month anniversary is coming up. just thought id put that out there. hahahahahaha ohh K&K
Name: wcoast_girl reviewed
Roses on Sep 09, 2006 01:16 pm
Im dead tired so this review won't be long but I wanted to say that I am really enjoying this. Like Malfoy's characterization and I look forward to more.
Name: CCC reviewed
Roses on Sep 09, 2006 11:21 am
Wow, what a great twist. I like it. Write more soon.
Name: Shattered_Dreams reviewed
Roses on Sep 09, 2006 08:35 am
I can't wait for the next chapter! This is the first story i've read by you and i just started reading it, when you've already had three chapters up so i don't know your update speed or any of that. anyway, hope you update soon!
Name: Shattered_Dreams reviewed
Natural on Sep 09, 2006 08:14 am
Great story so far! i'll continue to R&R! and i just had a chocolatechip cookie thank you much.
Name: Mockingbird reviewed
Natural on Sep 09, 2006 03:19 am
This is fantastic! Keep writing :)
Name: Lottie reviewed
Roses on Sep 08, 2006 07:34 pm
Lol! I love how he goes through his thoughts. Very realistic. Good Job!
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
Roses on Sep 08, 2006 06:25 pm
Still, "Sorry to disappoint you. I thought cooperating might be more obnoxious that giving you the pleasure of abusing me.” that line cracks me right up! This chapter was brilliant. You know I love it, I gush enough when I send it back to you... but yes... brilliant! ;)
Name: Embellished reviewed
Roses on Sep 08, 2006 05:55 pm
I have a feeling I am really going to like Remus and Arthur in this story, and probably Charlie too. Their handling of Draco was perfect. Thank you also for the information about what happened that night. I'm looking forward to finding out how Ginny reacts when she hears what happened. Thanks for the update!
Name: CharmedLife19 reviewed
Roses on Sep 08, 2006 05:41 pm
haha And now what can Draco say to that? Arthur's got a point.
Wow, we finally know what happened that night. I can't wait for Gin's reaction when she finds out that Draco saved her brother. Great job! Can't wait for more!
Name: Katie reviewed
Natural on Aug 31, 2006 10:57 am
So i just finished chapter 2 now. Amazing. And you bettttttttttter put up chapter 3 ASAP or i might die. Thank you.
Name: Katie reviewed
Little Boys on Aug 31, 2006 10:39 am
Kim my love i absolutely LOVE it so far! This is definitely some of your best writing. Not nearly as good as storms though...haha just kidding. But i love love love it and im moving on to chapter 2 right now!
Author's Response: Katie, darling, I love you. I simply love you.
Name: Lottie reviewed
Natural on Aug 28, 2006 08:29 pm
Aw! She's a softy at heart! It's great! I hope you update again soon! I wonder what he did that changed Arthur's view of him.
Name: Momster reviewed
Little Boys on Aug 28, 2006 03:20 am
The first two chapters are very well done! I only wish that I had found this later, so that I could read more at once! I want to read more, now!! Good job! I like that GInny has to revise her opinions, when she sees Draco sleeping. It is true, children look so angelic when they sleep, so that you keep them after they have done awfull things!
Name: CCC reviewed
Natural on Aug 26, 2006 07:05 am
Update soon. I really like your story.
Name: Embellished reviewed
Natural on Aug 25, 2006 06:04 pm
These two chapters are a promising start. I am looking forward to seeing what Draco did to gain Arthur and Moody's trust, and to see what happens when he wakes up!
Name: Kattycat reviewed
Natural on Aug 25, 2006 07:51 am
Wow, great chapter. I'm eagerly waiting to get to read further. Is there anything else that you have written online? I'd love to read more of your fics, if there are.
Author's Response: I have written a few very terrible fics in my ignorant youth, but whether they still exist or whether you would want to read them is a mystery. I do have a journal in which I keep all my original writing at http://shortcomings.livejournal.com/. It's a friends only journal, but I'm glad to add ANYONE. I really don't care. Also, I have a public journal for my Draco/Ginny fanfic100. There are no fics written yet, as I've just joined a few days ago, but there will be in the near future. It's http://evacuate-ing.livejournal.com/ if you're interested. Does that help?
Name: Persephone33 reviewed
Natural on Aug 25, 2006 06:56 am
What vivid imagery, the description of Draco while he slept... and Ginny's reaction to it.. I like this very much... (and am happy that the title has nothing whatsoever to do with the plot) Thanks for the chapter!
Name: Kattycat reviewed
Little Boys on Aug 25, 2006 05:18 am
You wrote such a mysterious summary, that I just had to see the fic behind it.
I love the way you don't tell us everything immediately. Every paragraph leaves more questions than answeres them. That's a proper way to hook a reader. I'm off to read that next chapter!
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
Natural on Aug 25, 2006 05:00 am
I know I said it all ready... but I adore Charlie here. He is really the kind of Big Brother we all need! And I am right there with Ginny. It would be really tough to accept a horrible git into your house... but seeing him at his most vulnerable would certainly change how you thought about him. Anyway, I'm preparing to have the ground I walk on kissed... I wish you could convince my husband to do the same! ;)
Name: WG13 reviewed
Natural on Aug 24, 2006 06:19 pm
O yey an update!!
again, fantastic writing...
Name: Cheyenna reviewed
Little Boys on Aug 18, 2006 07:31 am
Why is it named Oedipus.
From what I understand n : (Greek mythology) a tragic king of Thebes who unknowingly killed his father Laius and married his mother Jocasta; the subject of the drama. Draco doesn't marry his mom or something right. Thats just to sick.
Author's Response: No, nothing like that happens. I swear to all the Gods in Greek Mythology, the name Oedipus as in Oedipus Rex will have no bearing on the plot. Meaning Draco will not marry his mom or stab his eyes out or have his children exiled and tortured so that they can have great Greek Tragedies of their own.
I choose the title Oedipus because it signifies a king and the true meaning of royalty and kingship is a theme that will run through the course of the story.
Does that ease any misunderstandings out there?
Name: Lyndsie Fenele reviewed
Little Boys on Aug 16, 2006 11:09 am
Great job! I love the atmosphere that you have created, and the interaction between Fred and Ginny is endearing. Looking forward to more.
Name: Alexandria Malfoy reviewed
Little Boys on Aug 16, 2006 10:25 am
Absolutely fabulous beginning! The whole premise sounds interesting and I can't wait to see how the rest of the story plays out. Great job! xoxox