Name: Moonyk reviewed
Chapter One on Sep 20, 2006 07:17 am
Does the girl (Im assuming its Ginny) know the guy? I cant tell much from this chapter other than the obvious fact that he's hurt badly. Can't wait for an update!
Name: Kisou reviewed
Chapter One on Sep 19, 2006 09:48 pm
You have a lovley voice to your writing. It flows very naturally, but it also has the feeling of aa very different reality that I look for in a story like this. It's very good. I'm completely lost, as it is, but I have the feeling that's how it's supposed to be. Just make sure it doesn't end that way. That's frustrating.
Name: Angelique Collins reviewed
Chapter One on Sep 18, 2006 05:40 pm
are these two chapters going to make sense in relation to each other eventually
Author's Response: good point! i guess it's not clear enough that draco was remembering back to when everything started? thanks for the idea: i'll put a sort of time frame...or maybe i'll just put a note explaining that draco was reminiscing in the prologue to the beginning of their story (which was chapter 1). :D
Name: pixie reviewed
Prologue on Sep 18, 2006 12:04 am
oooohhh very interesting i love it, great start, cant wait for the next update
Name: DanRadcliffesgrrl reviewed
Prologue on Sep 15, 2006 10:19 am
I love how you write! I think that this story will be very good! Please update soon. Thanks!
Name: wcoast_girl reviewed
Prologue on Sep 14, 2006 09:16 am
Ooooh, I'm intrigued. This is very promising and I'd like to know more!
Name: Rashonda reviewed
Prologue on Sep 13, 2006 09:44 am
I've already gone ahead and put this on my favorites. You write with such eloquence. How did Draco come to the conclusion that he owned her? Looking forward to reading more.
Name: tara87 reviewed
Prologue on Sep 12, 2006 12:30 pm
theres something very otherworldly about your writing something that leaves you breathless for more. you write with such passion that for a moment i forgot that i was reading something fanfiction lol. keep up the excellent work, cant wait to read more. p.s-- i also love your other story thats posted on this site
Name: Katrina_M reviewed
Prologue on Sep 12, 2006 11:26 am
wow, that was beautiful. I loved it so far, very nice prologue. I just can't wait for your next addition.
Name: Moonyk reviewed
Prologue on Sep 12, 2006 04:05 am
OH MY OH MY!!! Brilliant start I say! And heaven heard. That line just touched me. Wow, fantastic writing! I will keep a lookout for this one.
cheers!
Name: dragoncharmer79 reviewed
Prologue on Sep 12, 2006 02:16 am
Good prologue. I can not wait for the next addition to this story.
Name: r_k_bubblez reviewed
Prologue on Sep 11, 2006 03:00 pm
This is great. I love how you ended this chapter. I hope u write more soon.
-kay