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201712.14chenjinyan
Good chapter. More insight into Draco's situation.
You have written such a well developed Ginny! I know this chapter was about Draco's dream and her reaction to it, but my favorite part was the few short paragraphs where Ginny was having a mini-tantrum on the way up the stairs. Spot on for her!
Author's Response: Thank you! I enjoyed writing Ginny's 'mini tantrum', so I'm glad you enjoyed reading it!
I think its so cute that her relationship with Fred and George is so strong. Once again great chap!
Author's Response: I like the idea of the three of them a lot. Ever since the 'war' dance around the kitchen in the fifth book, I've always imagined her as their protegé.
~Poor Draco. I hope ginny makes him feel better.~
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! And I'm sure she will.
~Poor Draco. I hope ginny makes him feel better.~
Author's Response: Aaaaannnnnnnndddd I have a gutter brain. Haha. We'll see, we'll see.
“His father advanced on him quickly and with more strength than he'd expected. Draco felt himself losing his slight edge and looked to his mother, silently pleading for her to leave. Lucius took advantage of his son's distraction. "Avada Kedavra!"
I take back what I said in my review for chapter two. Lucius is an evil Death Eater!
Author's Response: Yes well...in his defence (though I'm not sure why I'm really bothering) this was well after the majority of the biggest dad/son bonding things...and after Azkaban - who wouldn't be twisted after Azkaban?
Totally absorbing. The cuts from his dream to reality, SO well done. Great Great chapter. Ginny's muttering was very real - paints her in exactly the picture that I think she is meant to be - my only complaint is that now Ron seems to have reverted into Harry's whipping boy -- giving Ginny dark looks instead of the supportive Ron he was a few chapters back. But yeah -- I have really really enjoyed this. Totally a classic in the making!
Author's Response: Again, thank you for the review! I'm glad you find the changes in pov well done - I was worried that they were choppy / confusing. As for Ron, I try, I just don't seem to hit that balance very often - like with Hermione. He's Ginny's brother, and yes, if she's upset he's upset and by golly, someone is going to pay - Harry or not... but when it's secret-trio-business, I suppose I feel like he feels that Ginny doesn't really have any business there anyway. Perhaps I should work on clarifying that.
... you can not leave me hanging like htis! Please dont! I am leaving on monday! No internet accesss for 5 days please update! I really am facinated by Draco in this and ginny! I love them!
Author's Response: I went ahead and posted Chapter 4 just for you. =D
I was happy to see this update. I hope there will be more soon.
Author's Response: Thanks!
You know, I really, really like this story. It's an underappreciated gem. It's quietly getting everything right-- Draco's reactions, Ginny's inner life, Harry's attitude, everything. I truly believe that this is the way things would have gone if HBP had had this ending.
Now, if you want more reviews... a word to the wise... think about upping the rating a tad. Just a suggestion. ;) You know, more D/G smut in the world is always a good thing...
Author's Response: Thank you, so much. Haha. There is plenty of time for D/G smut to come, no worries.
WHAT a cliffhanger. Great chapter, the flow from the dream to reality was nicely done. Thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you! I was really worried about that, so I'm glad to see that it was understandable and worked well.