I think you meant, "generic" where you wrote "genetic".
It's cutely done, but could use some beta'ing. Of course, I'm writing this years later, so it's a pretty worthless thing to say, isn't it?
Wow, you made me laugh. You should be a comedian!
Aaaaaw! it's great! i love it. i like the way that Draco is the one behaving like an arse, not Ginny. And i love the way you write him too. Keep up the good work!
Aww so cute! Draco's so not smooth. But now we need to see how her wins her over! Because he will, eventually- he's Draco Malfoy, Slytherin Sex God, and even if he does spaz out and fumble things beyond all recognition, he has to get the girl in the end somehow. Sequel! NEEEEED sequel!!
oh my gosh... lol. i just cant get over the fact of how funny this story is. i love it to death. it was great.
"WARNING: GAME TO WIN SAID GIRL OVER, ABORT PLAN IMMEDIATELY - LIVE TO FIGHT ANOTHER DAY" i absolutely LOVE that! you put the most amusing lines into your story. one of the funniest and entertaining stories ive ever had the pleasure to read.
"(insert carefully planned insult regarding rosy pink lips: "you have stupid lips" - good one!)" and "the point is that he saw her openly giving the deformed one a smile and a hug." that was highly amusing to me. i loved this chapter. what a great way to open a story. i love how he considers what theyre going through a war. it's just so funny.
Quote "Now all he needed was a good wank" Um, i think I love you? THIS IS SO GREAT! *SQUEE* So funny, write more!
I absolutely LOVED it. I've got to say, I laughed the most I ever have in 3 chapters. You captured Draco really well, and although I'm a bit disappointed that they didn't end up together, it made the story better. It was all very wise and well done, and hopefully you make another? Doesn't have to be a continuation, just as long as it's D/G though =]
*giggle* Oh that is too much. Though I don't quite see Draco falling for Ginny like that, you've got his character down so well that I simply cannot complain. I love the way he twists the conversation back on her in the last chapter--wonderful job.
Ack. I practically had to stop reading because I was so embarrassed for him! But I prevailed, and read the whole thing, embarrassment regardless, and loved it so much. I really hope you write a sequel to this or something, because Ginny ought not to be with Harry. In fanfic, anyway. Because really, they're rather boring together and Ginny/Draco is so much more fun, and I think you really brought out the...er...fun-ness! ^_^ -Lisa-
Poor Draco. I love the way you've captured him. Only poor Draco. I get so used to thinking of him as this misunderstood fanon god... oh well. Please write more. Will Ginny end up hurting Harry because she did indeed like the kiss? I'd love to find out?
Poor Draco. I love the way you've captured him. Only poor Draco. I get so used to thinking of him as this misunderstood fanon god... oh well. Please write more. Will Ginny end up hurting Harry because she did indeed like the kiss? I'd love to find out?