Name: Embellished reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 03 on Jul 05, 2007 03:36 am
I absolutely love the interactions between Ginny and Ron--they are exactly what I would expect from the two of them. And of course, the snogging made me sigh happily. I'm worried about what is going to happen to Draco, but at least Remus has given me hope along with Ginny!

Author's Response: *smiles* Draco is going to have a rough time of things....
Name: SabrinaR reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 03 on Jun 30, 2007 07:18 pm
oh man... way too ominous and horrible for my liking yet I cannot seem to tear myself away from this story... I will be back when later chapters come in. That was an excellent chapter. Cheers!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!rn
Name: Hajra reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 03 on Jun 29, 2007 02:18 am
That was intriguing I'm dying to know what Remus meant! I loved the build up to the kiss, the release of that tension between them! Also I love the idea of Ron having a secret sweetheart - so cute!

Author's Response: All will be revealed in good time :)
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 03 on Jun 28, 2007 12:54 pm
ach, their love is so beautiful... I love how realistically you've shown all the character's feelings. Its's impressive? Very lovely, but I really can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: Hopeless reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 03 on Jun 26, 2007 05:14 am
oooo, that was a good one!

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: Grneyedminx reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 03 on Jun 25, 2007 05:46 pm
Remus rocks! Fantastic story! I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Remus knows there is more than meets the eye and he will reveal all eventually...
Name: MK Richie reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 03 on Jun 25, 2007 04:05 pm
Cute! I'm hoping Draco doesn't get Azkaban and only gets sentenced to house arrest with Ginny ; ) I was soo glad to see you updated, and the kiss was well worth the wait! Please update as soon as possible, I'm looking forward to it!!

Author's Response: Thanks. That kiss was a long time in coming for those two and it was too little too late...
Name: INDYCICURN reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 03 on Jun 25, 2007 11:50 am
Rain- I always love your work, and this one is no different. You always make the characters believable and true to character. Your imagery is always superb and you draw your readers into your story. I wait with anticipation for the next chapter. I have one criticism for you, this chapter needed some editing. There were a few places that had inocrrect or missing words, as if you were on a roll and thinking faster then you were typing. Overall, a fabulous story. --Kristine--

Author's Response: Thank you. I took care of the problems. Apparently my beta was excited when she read it too :)
Name: Bitter_thymes reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 03 on Jun 25, 2007 09:15 am
Oh please keep this one going. Your character treatments are so sharp.

Author's Response: Thank you. I plan on finishing this.
Name: smprsgrrl reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 03 on Jun 24, 2007 06:00 pm
I loved the part in the middle where Gin was trying to separate her feelings for Draco (somewhere between love and hate) because I think that's so accurate most of the time. I'm so glad to see this out! And I'm looking forward to more from you.

Author's Response: She's not sure what she feels for him or even if she truly does. *pats* She'll figure stuff out eventually.
Name: Nokomis reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 03 on Jun 24, 2007 05:22 pm
*beams* Oh, this story fills me with JOY.

ESPECIALLY when Draco and Ginny finally act on some of that tension they've been nurturing between them. They were so sweetly domestic over breakfast, and I love that Draco finally made a move. Granted, it was a bit belated for anything fun to happen before he was taken away, but, still!

So what all *does* Remus know? He was very cryptic and knowing in this chapter.

Also, Harry is a jerkface.

And who is Ron's secret sweetie? *wants to know* He and Gin were very sweetly sibling-y in this chapter. He's being very civil about the whole situation, by Ron-standards.

And poor, poor Gin! The story of her attack was sad, and her frustration about Molly keeping her locked way is palpable. Hopefully she'll manage to break away from her cottage.

*happy sigh* I am so happy you're writing this. It's a fantastic story, and I eagerly await the next update. Until then, I will happily be squeeing over the Draco/Ginny smooching you so wonderfully provided in this chapter. Fantastic job!!

Author's Response: *snuggles* I'm so glad that I could make you happy with this chapter. Do you know how hard it is not to share the details of the story with you? It'd damn hard, but your reactions are so worth it!
Name: angelhorn26 reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 03 on Jun 24, 2007 05:18 pm
Excellent! I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm hard at work on the next installment!
You must login (register) to review.