Name: yunnage reviewed
Chapter 3 on May 18, 2008 07:36 pm
do you know how disappointed i was when there was no next button on this chapter? =[
great job and btw, I LOVE THAT DRESS
Author's Response: Its only one chapter at a time..isn't it?? :D I loved that dress too...more pretty dresses to come..
Name: Akt5us reviewed
Chapter 3 on May 18, 2008 06:09 pm
You always leave with a cliff hanger! I can't wait to see who it is! :D
Author's Response: yeah i know its a BAD thing to leave with a cliff hanger..I hate it too when other authors do that :D... so I'm trying to get over this habit of mine. Hope you don't mind them till I get over this habit... :P
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Chapter 3 on May 18, 2008 04:06 pm
draco? haha. update soon!
Author's Response: I'm not going to answer that...
Name: burnlake reviewed
Prologue on Apr 05, 2008 01:46 pm
Well, I understand that some readers like to see the photo of Hrithik to see the similarities, so it's just a matter of opinion. =) All in all, I really like your story!
Author's Response: yeah..it really is just a matter of opinion. I'm just glad that you hold that out against me or my story :D
Name: burnlake reviewed
Chapter 2 on Mar 06, 2008 11:51 am
I like your style and plot very much, but perhaps you should've left out that photo and allusion of Hrithik... Don't get me wrong, nothing against him, but for a reader it might be better if she or he could imagine the appearance of a character. I've seen some of Hrithik's movies, and now it's a bit hard for me to see Draco as Draco anymore... Hopefully you understand what I mean?
Author's Response: Sorry for not replying to this earlier..seriously I have me exams goign on..serious ones -So couldn't reply earlier. Reading your suggestion against including Hrithik's photo, well I agree with you not being able to imagine Draco now that I've put in a photo of Hrithik. I just wanted to drive in the point of Hrithik looking like Tom Felton and vice-versa. I've no aim of blocking one's imagination to only one person. Infact, some people asked me to inlude a pic if possible of how I imagined Ashton aka Draco..hence the reason I put in him over there. I understand your point.. and lets see if I can remove the pics after consulting with my friends and beta-readers.
Name: emenem10 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 30, 2008 12:22 am
Alright, now that you've tied me in knots I think I'll go back to my school work I still have to finish. Still no clue, but if you've managed this long without me hitting it on the head (people yell at me when I get it like the first chapter, lol) this will be a story to read. Much Love, Emily
Author's Response: Sorry for not replying to this earlier..seriously I have me exams going on..serious ones -So couldn't reply earlier. And lI'm really happy to see that you like it so much..keep in tuned..update is on the way (I hope its not returned to me many times)
Name: emenem10 reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 29, 2008 02:19 pm
Oi, love. They must've gotten tired of you sending in this chapter again and again. lol There's a parenthesis but you didn't close it. But if the baby was just Teddy, that's depressing. I got all excited over nothing! lol. MAJOR cliffhanger! Please update soon! This is stupendous and an enjoyable read! Much Love, Emily
Author's Response: oh...about the baby...well.. if you keep up the time line... teddy was THREE years at the time of Prologue. So he can't be called a baby, can he? Darn..I said too much *cursing*..keep guessing who the baby is..(though reading the first chapter, you are already seeing the baby in a grown body *wink wink*).... I know its a major cliffhanger. And I'll be updating it. So do keep a tag of it.
Name: emenem10 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 29, 2008 02:00 pm
Everyone else seems to use hit wizards, so if they're not, oh well. Baby? Where's the baby? lol. Alright... Good part, you kept me engaged. To the very end of the chapter my face didn't leave the screen. Bad part, I can't really think of one. You set the scene, gave the characters personalities, and left room for personal interpretation. Fantastic start!!! Much Love, Emily
Author's Response: Sorry for not replying to this earlier..seriously I have me exams goign on..serious ones -So couldn't reply earlier.rnWell.. baby, now thats one part I... hang on -you are talking about the baby in Hermione's arms..aren't you? of course that little Rosie in her arms.and I'm so elated that you were "glued in " to your seat till the end of the chapter...thats encouraging. I still have many characterisations lined up, you'll see in the next few chapters.. they might get boring somehow, but ultimately they ARE important.rnrnKeep tuned in.. for I just sent in my chapter to my beta -and hope it will be uploaded soon.
Name: emenem10 reviewed
Prologue on Jan 29, 2008 01:44 pm
*snort* So I umm.. have a habit. I start a story, love it, forget about it, and then kinda lose it. Then I find it again. So here I am, finding you again! Once again, great start! I can't wait to see where this leads. ~Emily
Author's Response: Oh...it happens a lot with me too *smirk*. I am happy that you reviewed for all three chapters...
Name: NicholePotter86 reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 14, 2008 11:14 am
Hey! I cant wait to see how Draco gets away from this situation. Im really excitied to see what your plans are for this story so please update again soon. until then, Byes :P
Author's Response: thanks :D
Name: daydreaming readhead reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 13, 2008 07:06 am
I'm a bit confused...why did you switch from Vic to Guy? Draco's in some massive trouble now that his cover's been blown within a few hours of arriving. I hope he thinks quickly enough to convince them otherwise!
Author's Response: Actually..Vic's name in the original drafts was Guy, guess I didn't change all of them correctly...now thats corrected now, I edited the chapter. I'll give you a hint as to your next comment... its just a minor glitch, it will be cleared out pretty soon and pretty quickly *wink wink*
Name: Dark__Angel reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 12, 2008 05:30 pm
Nice cliff hanger!!!
Author's Response: I hoped so *sniggers*
Name: Padfootedmoony reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 12, 2008 01:28 pm
awesome so far
Author's Response: thanks...
Name: raistlin89 reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 12, 2008 09:51 am
whose Guy??
'Guy laughed again and looked '
'Guy brought their dishes to them.'
do u mean Vic?? i was kinda confused so i was jus wondering. good job though, i luv their banter ( draco and ginny's)
Author's Response: Yeps..he's VIC, I kept Vic's name as Guy before...but Vic totally refused the name *hee hee*...so I had to change the name. But I made the mistake...Damn. M glad that you liked their banter, it will only grow as the story proceeds
Name: Nyx reviewed
Prologue on Jan 11, 2008 01:58 pm
Interesting twist.... Good movie plot opener.... Shall read on now.
Author's Response: did you read it by now?? how did you find it??
Name: tinamarie reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 11, 2008 11:01 am
Draco is H-O-T! Not like he's already hot but let me just congratulate your imagination on a job well done. Still confused (aren't we all though) so I guess we'll just have to wait and see with the upcoming chapters. My only compaint (and its minor)is that I think Ginny is a tad too immature but then again she is interacting with Draco and he's not the easiest guy to converse with sometimes. Can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: I totally agree with you on Draco being HOT!! Remain confused...but try finding out things after the next few chapters, I am starting to drop hints as to what the chapter is all about *smirk* Yeah...I made Ginny immature right now (living with Ron like brother who's only an year older DOES rubs off on you:D) and yes, Draco is in no-way a easily conversable guy...So their banter goes much like Ron and Hermione ones, thogh they were totally childish, this one is more equally witted, snappish banter...
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 11, 2008 11:01 am
great job. i love the story, but did you change vic's name to guy halfway thru their convo? i got confused... i may have read it wrong, its just something i picked up on tho. great job. i love the story, and can't wait to see where it goes from here!
Author's Response: Yeah..I made the mistake of changing Vic's name from Guy (original drafts) to Vic AFTER I wrote the complete chapter...*URGH*.. But thanks for dropping in your comments still!!
Name: laylaelaine reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 11, 2008 10:23 am
I really like this. Watching for the next chapter!
Author's Response: it should be there in a week or too, depending on my beta's exams!! thanks
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 11, 2008 03:03 am
That was good, I can't wait to read more. Good Luck! :)
Author's Response: thanks...
Name: joey101 reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 11, 2008 02:00 am
update soon....really nice chapter!
ps. I LUV HRITHIK TOO!! he bought sexy back in dhoom 2
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.. I love Hrithik too... though I disagree on the fact that he INTRODUCED sexy in Dhoom2 :D
Name: KimiWeasley reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 11, 2008 01:54 am
Hey! I see you're Indian?... Yeah, I could be your neighbor...on the east side ..If you're Indian, that is. I can't imagine Draco as Hrittik, but you're idea of the disguise was very good. Okay I need to say this, since the 1st day I read you're fic, I've been coming back to it everyday to see if you've updated it, only to be disappointed. It's that good! I'm so glad you wrote another chapter. Way to go girl! Oh I guess I was one of the few who didn't think the Prologue was odd...It gives a sense of mystery to the story...makes you think that something really complex and interesting is on it's way. You showed the vagueness perfectly. I hope you keep writing, and give us something good very soon! Hope you don't keep us waiting for too long because I can't wait to read the whole of it . Best of luck!
KimiWeasley.
Author's Response: Yep..I am an Indian, Indian born, living in India Indian... So you're in east. East where? Myanmar sorts? or Bhutan? anyways...M glad I found a neighbour *hee hee*. No, Ever since the third part, I suddenly started noticing the similiarities between Tom Felton (the ultimate Malfoy) and Hrithik, leaving aside the hair. Really, I am so surprised and happy to see that you are daily coming to check the update, but I wish I could update it daily. the mods here are VERY picky, so I have my chapters returned back by an average of3-4 times. AND I am in 12th standard...and have my college entrance exams going on...so sorry...can't update faster than this. If you want to be saved from disappointments, just save the story in favs, so that you get the update notificaion automatically.rnrnAnd I am double glad that you didn't find the Prologue too confusing, I took the idea from Sidney Sheldon boks!!
Name: Kalira reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 10, 2008 06:59 pm
The end to that chapter was interesting, I wonder what gave him away. Though cleverly he never said he'd answer truthfully.
Author's Response: yeah..thanks
Name: Akt5us reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 10, 2008 06:47 pm
I love the chapter! Just so you know, you labeled this chapter, chapter 2, as you did with the previous one...something really trivial i thought that i would mention....
Also, at the end of this chapter, you started typing Guy rather than Draco i think.....I'm not exactly sure though...
I just love how you added Hrithik in there and couldn't help but start laughing at that part! Has he been in any movies since Dhoom 2? I'm Indian, but i rarely ever watch any Indian movies....but I have seen Dhoom 2...
I can't wait to read more! ;D
Author's Response: oh no..Guy's not Draco...GAWD!! what a blunder I made!! Actually, Vic's name originally was Guy, I changed it..I guess I left that one out while correcting. I did the correction for chapter1. thanks for pointing those out. I just couldn't resist putting Hrithik in the story...just my whim actually:D No, he hasn't had a new release after Dhoom, though his new release is due in Feb, its a preiodic movie, but he's looking awesome in the trailers....rnrnUmm...The next chapters may take a bit of a time. Actually both my beta reader and I have our exams going on..So we decided to take a little time off. But it won't tke months at least..a few weeks
Name: Kalira reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 10, 2008 06:36 pm
I really like the way you've written Neville. He was always one of those characters that I thought didn't get enough time in the book, but it's nice to see him as a fairly influential character now and again. I like the rest of the chapter as well, no one seemed particularly out of character. Good job!
Author's Response: Yeah..I really wanted to write Neville in a very serious and influential way after HP7, he grew up so well in that book, finally. But really, I don't have much role from him (you'll see him once more quite shortly believe me), but the story's now going to revolve around Hogsmeade and the Auror head just can't interfere with the undercover work of other Aurors. Though laer, I want to add him up...which I surely think I will. thanks for your other comment... I really had to re-write it four times before I wrote what I exactly wanted.
Name: joliefille reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 02, 2007 10:25 am
Okay, I really like this chapter. It makes sense! I get where everything is going, except I still don't understand what happened in the prologue. Obviously, the war's still going on, but is Harry dead? And I'm happy for Neville, he's so grown up now.
Author's Response: uumm..I think you didn't see that the strory complies with ALL HP books except the Epilogue. So yes, the war has finished. And yes, Harry's dead.. he died THAT night, 7 yrs ago. except Harry's death, everything is bright as daylight!!!