Name: joliefille reviewed
Prologue on Dec 02, 2007 09:49 am
"only you and Hermione are the two people who really have the iota to do that" ?? That doesn't really make sense. Maybe you meant audacity, or nerves, or something along those lines?
*What* is going on, I'm so confused. Is Draco putting Harry's soul into the baby? Whose baby is it?
Author's Response: iota...means "A tiny or scarcely detectable amount" I actually meant... capability..sorry -wrong choic of words..but it still fits suficiently I think :D Hmm... I'm sorry I can't the question reagarding Harry's soul, it would just spoil my whole story, you know. and that baby -you're to meet her in the next chapter. and her.... I won't say more *giggles*
Name: princess sarah reviewed
Prologue on Dec 02, 2007 12:33 am
i really like your story. hope you update soon :) looking forward to it. :)
Author's Response: thanks..I will update.. don't worry!
Name: Amanda Mancini reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 01, 2007 09:07 pm
This is a great start, keep writing! :)
Author's Response: sure..your words always help!! :)
Name: Padfootedmoony reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 29, 2007 08:44 pm
awesome job so far
Author's Response: thanks...
Name: ronlover reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 29, 2007 02:58 pm
I love it! Update as soon as you can!
Author's Response: thanks...
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 29, 2007 01:29 pm
~I am not very clear on what was going on in Chapter one. Any clearification?~
Author's Response: oh I think you are confused as you are trying to link between the prologue with the first chapter. What I suggest is that you just forget about the prologue and read the first chapter as a new story, as you reach the fourth to fifth chapter and proceed forward, think of the Prologue and try to think what is happening, may be that will help :)
Name: vreggli reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 29, 2007 12:52 am
hej!
your story's really wonderful! looking forward to read more of it...
Author's Response: I'm also lookinf forward to post more and more!!
Name: Teller of Tales reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 28, 2007 11:24 pm
Loving the story so fair and can't wait to see what is going to happen next so please update soon.
Author's Response: Next chapter will be there as soon as my beta readers hands it over to me back!! I'm glad though that you liked the chapter.
Name: sweetpop reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 28, 2007 10:53 pm
oh, this was a great 'first' chapter, liked it a lot how you included more characters we've read about from Harry Potter, but yes, the Prologue did get me quite confused, but if that's the way its meant to be, so be it! Can't wait for the next chapter! x
Author's Response: Oh I'm so glad..and yes *nods frantically* the prologue will make sense, you just have to process the clues the right way. And even more characters are going to be there....more and more and more..
Name: nick13 reviewed
Prologue on Nov 28, 2007 09:01 pm
hey loved it, im totally intrigued by the prologue and definitely want to know what happens next..... i really hope you can get the next chapter out soon!
Author's Response: the first chapter is online.... read it and for now, forget about the prologue, just read the first chapter afresh.
Name: twilights_pride reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 28, 2007 06:27 pm
I like it! I was thoroughly entertained by the entire spectacle, although I don't fully understand the promise made in the prologue.
Author's Response: I will suggest you something I suggested another reader. Just forget about the prologue and read the first chapter as a new story, as you reach the fourth to fifth chapter and proceed forward, think of the Prologue and try to think what is happening, may be that will help :)rnrnAnd I'm glad you liked the story still :D
Name: 0630938 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 28, 2007 06:10 pm
Again what is happening?
Author's Response: hhmm....I am sorry. I suggest, just forget about the prologue and read the firt chapter as a new story, as you reach the fourth to fifth chapter and proceed forward, think of the Prologue and try to think what is happening, may be that will help :)
Name: 0630938 reviewed
Prologue on Nov 28, 2007 06:01 pm
What in the world is happening you got me hooked!
Author's Response: well, sorry for not replying earlier...but I hope you get your reply from my response in the first chapter review.
Name: D_Rad_88 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 28, 2007 04:31 pm
Haha, this is so great. This just made me laugh my ass off. All that teasing and sarcastic remarks between Draco and Ginny are so great. Great start! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much..I'm waiting to post the next chapter too!!! :D
Name: 4everdandg reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 28, 2007 04:16 pm
wow! a new Neville... =) hahaha... the next chapter(s) soon, i hope... thanks!
Author's Response: I know Auror Neville does not match with Professor Neville of Jo's, but even then,I chose him only because even Jo has shown him gaining enough confidence, and I did it too, though I showed him as an auror head. I loved it. Next chapter will bethere as soon as my beta readers hands it over to me back!!
Name: raistlin89 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 28, 2007 03:00 pm
this is good so far. but im confused about the prolouge. is there gonna be more elaboration on that?? and im anticipating the fun in this story. good job
Author's Response: the elaboration on the Prolgue is not yet there in the near future..though as you read the story further, there wil be enough clues pointing out what the Prologue is actually about..so stay tuned, you'll get the hints pretty soon!! And the fun part is coming soon!!
Name: LuvWabbit reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 28, 2007 01:58 pm
I can tell this is going to be such a fun story. I can't wait to see how they can handle living together. Great job!
Author's Response: well, obviosuly they can't take it easily enough to live together, there's got be fight and stuff *squeals* wait, please don't read that line, I wasn't supposed to write that LOL...but I'll make that exception for you :D I am going to now write those very chapters about them settling in, and I have all these so minutely detailed in my mind, I can't wait to just type them on my MsWord.... Thanks so much for encouraging me!!
Name: tinamarie reviewed
Prologue on Nov 28, 2007 01:36 pm
Ok so I just finished chapter 2 and the prologue still doesn't make any sense! I am eagerly awaiting the next installment of your tale, the plot thus far has the makings to be quite exciting! :)
Author's Response: I suggest, just forget about the prologue and read the first chapter as a new story, as you reach the fourth to fifth chapter and proceed forward, think of the Prologue and try to think what is happening, may be that will help :)
Name: Funnykido reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 28, 2007 12:46 pm
This was so fun to read! I love the dynamics between Draco and Ginny, and the story has so much potential! (I think the plot is especially good!)
Author's Response: The plot is still left to reveal itself :D.... though I'm glad that you like the story even at this stage you know, because many authors muck up things after a few chapters (hopefully I will not be among them) making the characters totally OOC. Thanks so much.
Name: joano reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 28, 2007 11:32 am
this is looking really good. I've only got two mini things.
the sentence when ginny steps out of neville's office really needs to have either no 'As' at the beginning or 'she was' both without the comma to scan fluently
"As Ginny strolled back out of Neville's office whistling to herself and clutching the files in her arms *she was* acutely aware that she was the focus of the attention of the office"
the other is even smaller- must you use 'possess' when talking about a wife and child? perhaps a slightly less patriarchal 'have'would be a neutral alternative?
Author's Response: Thanks that you like it. and regarding the points..thanks so much for pointing them out. While writing them and reading them myself, I confess that "possess" didn't seem somewhat wrong to me, but when you pointed it out to me -Yes, then I realises that it seemed harsh, patriarchal. I'll try and keep that in mind. And then that of *she was*, I think if it was "she became" in its place, it would have been exactly correct, otherwise the sentence is in perfect sense... Thanks still for bringing them to my notice -these things do help in the long run.
Name: TwistedPixie reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 28, 2007 10:11 am
aaawww, come one!!! i want more!! please...it sounds very good so far. just. need. more!
xx
Author's Response: Yes, you'll be getting more..stay tuned :D
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 28, 2007 09:13 am
great job. i like it so far. tell me if it's ever published. i'm still confused by the prologue but i'm okay with that. haha. update soon!
Author's Response: Oh..I'm too small to get it published. but yes, If its finished as well as I want it to be published, I'll definitely tell you. The prologue should be clear enough when you start processing the clues the right way. Glad that you like it :)
Name: crazykay254 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 28, 2007 07:24 am
wheeeee! the only thing that will be difficult for draco and ginny is the fact that they'll be polyjuiced and look like different people! this is going to be fun!! please update soon!
Author's Response: Oh, it won't be difficult for them, as they won't be taking Polyjuice Potion...oops, wait!! I shouldn't have typed it !! LOL..well you get to read it in the next chapter anyways. Though still I promise its going to fun, I'm certinly enjoying writing it on my part -I just hope you do too. Regarding the updates, well I'm very sorry to say, my beta is really quite busy and I to have my 10+2 papers going on, which are really going to effect my future and colleges, so we are quite busy, though don't worry at all, I have four more chapters typed and we'll be updating on a regular basis. Just with a bit of gap. Hope you'll still read them :)
Name: tinamarie reviewed
Prologue on Nov 28, 2007 06:55 am
Ok this whole prolgoue has got me really perplexed, there is so much secrecy and ambiguity that I really have no idea what to expect! I am looking forward to reading the rest and uncovering this thick shroud of mystery!
Author's Response: sorry for not replying earlier, my beta got fixed in a problem..now that it is solved and the next chapter posted, I think you'll undertand more, though I suggest, just forget about the prologue and read the first chapter as a new story, as you reach the fourth to fifth chapter and proceed forward, think of the Prologue and try to think what is happening, may be that will help :)
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 28, 2007 05:33 am
Well, this is great but I still can't wait to figure out the prolouge! It is agrivating....that makes the story really good! LOL! Good luck with the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: I know how much mystery makes a story even more exciting to read, being an avid reader myself LOL!! And yes, I'm not going to solve the prologue in the near future, YOU have to solve it on your own as you go with the chapters. Though thanks so much to let me know that you are waiting for the mystery to unfold, it surely helps in my determination to write more and more and makes me believe that somebody is out there, waiting to see what happens in my story..LOVE YA!!