Reviews For Newlyweds
Name: AuntAnnie reviewed Chapter 1 on Nov 28, 2007 05:21 am
You know this could really have alot of potential. The Prologe is still a mystery, (you could clear that up - hate mysterys like that) any way please update soon, you have me hooked.

Author's Response: Yeps I know this story has a potential..and I have quite a fair bit of the main story line plotted out in my mind. But I have a bit of a problem regarding the secondary plot, which I am sure I'll be able to sort out quickly enough. I'm glad that I have you hooked, lets just hope that I maintain it :) THe prologue is supposed to be mystery which will be cleared out quite late in the story, BUT, I wil be handing out clues quite generously during the course to help the readers figure out themselves as to what is actually happening out there. And yes, I will be updating, hoping that my beta reader adjusts to the picky nature of this site (she's new to this site, you know :D)
Name: sly_princess reviewed Prologue on Nov 06, 2007 05:37 am
Hey! What happened to the story? The first chapter's really interesting you know. Please update!

Author's Response: well..I got a beta, we checked my next chapter (THAT one is first..this one is the PROLOGUE)..got the chapter back quite rudely two times. and then my beta (poor girl) nearly had a nervous breakdown because she wasn't able to cope-up with her studies. I've found a new beta (just two days before) and hope we'll be good now!rnrnJust for ur information..I've already finished 4 chapters. they just need editing.
Name: ablaze reviewed Prologue on Sep 01, 2007 02:21 pm
This is such a suspenseful opening...I honestly have no idea what just went on there. Please keep writing! I really wanna know what happens!

Author's Response: thanks so much...but my examinations are going at present, so I'm not writing much over here at present. But I've hadned over my already typed chapters to my new beta -hope she'll be fast enough :)rnrnbut be assured..I'm NOT going to abandon this story in the mid-way...
Name: rasbery1298 reviewed Prologue on Aug 23, 2007 08:23 pm
Please update soon! I really want to know what happens next!

Author's Response: Well..i really sorry, but there's this HUGE problem of a beta-reader for me. I can't find any beta-reader, and without a beta reader -I am just getting my chapters back. So hopefully -I'll get a beta reader soon and from 7th, I'll be back again with a bang. I wrote 7th bec I have my first term exams right now from monday!!! Thanks for reading the story though!
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed Prologue on Aug 15, 2007 05:17 pm
What are they talking about????? This is going to drive me mad! Good Luck! :)

Author's Response: well, you'll get to know what they are talking about...thought it will quite later -till then you have to guess. thanks for your wishes
Name: emenem10 reviewed Prologue on Aug 14, 2007 08:42 am
Wow... This is a GOOD start. Really, REALLY GOOD. I do hope you explain the situation soon though. There's only so much suspense I can take! GREAT start!!! Much Love, Emily

Author's Response: Dear Emily, I just posted the first chapter...hope you are happy! And I say it once more that I think your doubt won't be cleared at least until you've read the second chapter too, though I think even after that it may be confusing. But actually I WANTED the Prologue to be such that all the while the story is moving, you read it again and again to guess as to its relation with the ongoing story. So, please bear with me!!!!rnThanks for review, by the way!
Name: ExquisiteBeauty reviewed Prologue on Aug 14, 2007 02:20 am
Wonderful!

Author's Response: thanks.
Name: Teller of Tales reviewed Prologue on Aug 13, 2007 07:36 pm
How could you leave us with a huge cliffy like you have? What in the world is happening? What is going to happen next? Please post the next chapter soon. Pretty please!

Author's Response: I just posted the first chapter...hope you are happy! And I think your doubt won't be cleared at least until you've read the second chapter too, though I think even after that it may be confusing. But actually I WANTED the Prologue to be such that all the while the story is moving, you read it again and again to guess as to its relation with the ongoing story. So, please bear with me!!!!rnrnAnd I promise..its going to be better and better.
Name: dgloves70 reviewed Prologue on Aug 13, 2007 04:18 pm
I want to venture a guess here, is Harry asking Draco to kill him? And is he also asking that Draco take care of Ginny when he is gone?
I am hooked, I want to know what is going on and how did it get to this point? What did Harry say to Ginny that she is crying at his side?
Curious and so looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Well....you have put me in a dilemna. Neither can I kill any wrong presumptions nor can I affirm any correct guesses *grins sheepishly*. So, sorry -I can't answer your questions right now..but later on you'll have pretty good instances to set your theory on, I promise. I'm really glad that you're hooked with this story from the prologue itself, and I just hope that I convince you with enough material to keep you like this till the end.AND ON A SIDE NOTE..i JUST POSTED THE FIRST CHAPTER..SO ENJOY!
Name: liquid glass reviewed Prologue on Aug 13, 2007 04:14 pm
Okay. I like the way you don't reveal the plot right away, but I was very, very confused. But that makes me want to keep reading. Just don't do it to much.

Author's Response: I promise not to do it much..the story will be pretty straight-forwardfrom now, the only thing being whether you know WHEN to be confused.... *wink wink*. This is a sort of link to many of the actions/reactions we'll see our favourite characters giving in the story from now. Keep reading and reviewing!!
Name: SGenevieve reviewed Prologue on Aug 13, 2007 02:51 pm
very very interesting.. the suspense, the drama, the humor!! i love it so far. i'm very excited for upcoming chapters. post fast!! haha

Author's Response: Thanks you, thanks you! Glad that you liked the sarcastic humuor in there. the drama element hasn't been introduced yet, and it will be quite later. but yes, the suspence, the humuor and action will be still there..
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Prologue on Aug 13, 2007 02:19 pm
what the heck is going on?! update soon! can't wait!

Author's Response: I just posted the first chapter...hope you are happy! And I think your doubt won't be cleared at least until you've read the second chapter too, though I think even after that it may be confusing. But actually I WANTED the Prologue to be such that all the while the story is moving, you read it again and again to guess as to its relation with the ongoing story. So, please bear with me!!!!
Name: i_heart_penguins reviewed Prologue on Aug 13, 2007 02:00 pm
Is the baby Ginny's?

Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: I hate to say so..but I can't really tell you. NOW I know how Jo felt when she couldn't tell a plot to the readers....*evil smirk*
Name: ablaze reviewed Prologue on Aug 13, 2007 01:54 pm
What is going on here? I really want to know! Keep on writing!

Author's Response: Well, I have just posted the forst chapter...so read it and try to GUESS whats happening!!
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed Prologue on Aug 13, 2007 01:36 pm
~What? What is going on?~

Author's Response: Believe me, I'm grateful that you took the trouble to even post your confusion over here. This shows that you are interested in this story. I know the Prologue is VERY confusing right now -with lots of double meaning sentences. I think your doubt won't be cleared at least until you've read the second chapter too, though I think even after that it may be confusing. But actually I WANTED the Prologue to be such that all the while the story is moving, you read it again and again to guess as to its relation with the ongoing story. So, please bear with me!!!! I've just posted the first chapter also, please do continue reading my story.
Name: joey101 reviewed Prologue on Aug 13, 2007 12:17 pm
interesting....do update soon!

Author's Response: I just posted the first chapter...hope you are happy!
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