Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
She Walked Into Mine on Apr 25, 2008 11:50 am
AHHHH so much heartache!!! I can barely stand it!!! The plot flows nicely, great job.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Name: tinamarie reviewed
She Walked Into Mine on Feb 11, 2008 12:15 pm
Oh man...
Author's Response: Definitely an Oh man moment. Thanks for the review!
Name: seegrim reviewed
She Walked Into Mine on Dec 03, 2007 12:32 am
I thoroughly enjoyed the Casablanca reference--and this chapter. I love the way you describe the physicality. Their actions and descriptions are so clear in my mind-I can see them. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks very much, seegrim. I'm glad you picked up on those things. I always love to hear your thoughts!
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed
She Walked Into Mine on Nov 19, 2007 08:08 am
she knew???
Author's Response: She's figured it out by now, yes. Thanks for leaving another review!
Name: 0630938 reviewed
She Walked Into Mine on Nov 08, 2007 01:21 pm
Ok this is good...for the most part
I like the fact they didn't fall into each others arms and had crazy rabbit sex, I like the fact you portraid Draco as a man that can hurt and be hurt...
I don't like the mega melo-drama at the end with the crazy hair and red face...she's not mad...she's drunk.
And ok sorry but you made the most cheeesy thing ever with Scorpius like a 10 or 11 year old...in a bar that can bartend and ehh be an mazing player...??? ok first his hand are not nearly big enough to like handle the bottles and then the playing thing is possible but do you really think that an attorny after a divorce would let the father take the child knowing that he is the owner of a club...I don't think so...it's not proper child care...but hey it's fiction and it's cool I guess
Author's Response: A very thoughtful review, I thank you. I will proceed to defend myself, firstly because I'm defensive and secondly because I think answers are warranted for some of your questions. She is mad. She's mad at herself for not realizing it sooner because it was too hard to realize and she's mad at Draco for being insensitive and so obviously still in love with her. Scorpius, to me, is just the man and to have him be an exceptionally good card player and bartender (he made up his own tricks for his small hands, and when I said good I meant efficient and intuitive). And as for that last concern, it makes me laugh, for we're in a wizarding world. Things are quite different. And I can't imagine Draco Malfoy not getting what he wanted even if it did come to lawyers. Thanks a MILLION for the great review. I hope you continue to leave such thought provoking ones. :)
Name: Amanda Mancini reviewed
She Walked Into Mine on Nov 06, 2007 02:56 pm
Oh, what a chapter ending! Things are going to get messy!
Author's Response: Very messy, indeed. Thanks for the review!!
Name: abby reviewed
She Walked Into Mine on Nov 06, 2007 10:29 am
It's getting HOT now!! I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed
She Walked Into Mine on Nov 06, 2007 05:56 am
Oh that was just mean! *Shakes head in disbelief* What a cliffhanger that was! GREAT thought! I loved this chapter I so can't wait for the next one! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! It was the teeniest bit mean. But next chapter's on its way!
Name: TwistedPixie reviewed
She Walked Into Mine on Nov 05, 2007 07:53 am
ooooohhhhhhh nnnnoooooooo!!! oh my gosh! quite a funny LOL chapter. but sad all the same. well done, im really liking this story so far. cant wait for more!!
xx
Author's Response: Thanks so much for anther review. I hope you continue to read!
Name: Mars reviewed
She Walked Into Mine on Nov 05, 2007 05:14 am
Aahhh cliffhanger!! Poor Ginny - well, poor Draco though I suppose that news will sober him up pretty quick!
Congrats on another great chapter :)
Author's Response: Yes, it was a cliffhanger. I apologize. Everyone's pretty low, I must say. Stick around! Thanks for the review!
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
She Walked Into Mine on Nov 04, 2007 07:35 pm
I thought it was Casablanca!
I always loved the lines before he goes off into his dialogue. Brilliant and I so cannot wait to know what is going to happen in the next great episode.
I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! It was inspired by Casablanca. I hope you continue to read!
Name: thenilaughed reviewed
She Walked Into Mine on Nov 04, 2007 04:12 pm
Ahhh the fated line.. Le sigh.
Does Shane play the piano? Of course, it's hard to capture piano playing, but, oh.. the fundamental things apply as time goes by.
Author's Response: No, no. Shane cannot play the piano. Can't steal the storyline entirely. He is, however, extraordinarily good at playing poker. Thanks for leaving a review, and for always noticing the references.
Name: shaded reviewed
She Walked Into Mine on Nov 04, 2007 02:55 pm
I knew it! Ginny's child must've been Draco's. But you can't just leave us on this awful cliffie! It's just cruel. :(
Draco had better go running after her! I don't care if he's blind drunk; he can't just let her leave without talking to her. Though I suppose him being rooted to the place in shock is also a distinct possibility.
I wonder, how did Ginny work out that her daughter was Draco's? Was it some clear physical attribute, like grey eyes or blonde hair? Because I would imagine that Ginny's relationship with Harry would be extremely strained if it were so.
I love your descriptions of Ginny & Draco's actions. This one, for example: "His mind was blissfully blank from whiskey and tears and simply being close too her, but his lips parted slightly at her outburst. Its weight nestled into his brain and all he could muster was meeting those chocolate eyes with his own." I could almost hear his heart breaking all over again.
I love this story; please update soon.
Author's Response: This is such a wonderful review. Reviews like these just make my day completely. Draco is very drunk. And the next chapter will be from Ginny's POV, and hopefully up by the end of this week. I'm glad you're enjoying the story and the descriptions. Please keep reading and reviewing!
Name: nikisasilverrain reviewed
She Walked Into Mine on Nov 04, 2007 01:40 pm
*flail* AHHHH! *flail*
Really. Very good. Now, onward, please, because flailing for long periods of time isn't really good for me...
*flail*
Author's Response: Oh! Don't flail around for too long. Next chapter will be up within a week, I believe.
Name: shans12342002 reviewed
She Walked Into Mine on Nov 04, 2007 01:18 pm
OMG!! I can't believe you stopped there!! I can't believe she told him!
Continue soon, i can't wait to read what happens next!
Author's Response: It is unbelievable of her. Thanks for a nice review!
Name: sweetpop reviewed
She Walked Into Mine on Nov 04, 2007 12:40 pm
*sniffs* It's not nice to see either of them so sad =( maybe I should go quell my sadness by drinking something... I think I'll have to stick with water, since I don't like too much alcohol. Water will dampen my sorrows! (and make me really want to go to the toilet) Nice chapter, more please!
Author's Response: Water is by far the best option. I'm glad you liked the chapter and left a review! More is on the way.
Name: ChickbabeC1 reviewed
She Walked Into Mine on Nov 04, 2007 12:07 pm
EVIL! WHAT AN EVIL CLIFFHANGER!!! Awesome story, the characters emotions are really coming out now. Great plot!
Author's Response: I'm sorry! It was incredibly mean and awful. But Draco isn't coherent enough to give us any really good headtalk. So we'll just have to wait until next chapter. Thanks so much for leaving a review!
Name: laylaelaine reviewed
She Walked Into Mine on Nov 04, 2007 11:38 am
O, I love this. I should have cleaned, or done the spanish homework the prof. assigned, but no, I read your story. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Oh, thanks. I, for certain, understand reading a fic instead of doing the homework. I really appreciate the review!