Reviews For Fleur de Lis
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed Written in the Stars on Apr 25, 2008 11:55 am
Wow, great chapter, full of emotion, I loved it.

Author's Response: Thanks so much.
Name: arabella reviewed Written in the Stars on Dec 10, 2007 02:48 am
AWWW. I love your descriptions of the characters. They're so simple, but they'r also so cinematic as well, and evocative of such a poignant image in this last scene. Awesome!

Author's Response: Well, thank you. I've tried to keep the readers really in the story. I appreciate you leaving another review.
Name: seegrim reviewed Written in the Stars on Dec 03, 2007 12:39 am
Wow. The end?  Totally floored me.  I love the fact that you weren't afraid to have Draco show his emotions. 

Author's Response: Not the end. Was going to be originally, but the story continues. Thanks for another reivew!
Name: Eleoopy reviewed Written in the Stars on Nov 24, 2007 05:20 pm

Ahhh....you are slowly killing me with this story!!  I love every single seconds of it...*sigh*  I dont want to see what happen next with all the anger from Harry and Weasley family >_<

Love your chapter, please update soon! 



Author's Response: All of that drama is certainly on its way. Thanks for such a nice review! I hope you continue to read!
Name: raven_dark reviewed Written in the Stars on Nov 21, 2007 09:45 am
I soooooooo loved this chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad!
Name: sweet gurl reviewed Written in the Stars on Nov 20, 2007 05:06 pm
MORE!!
plz cant wait PLZ

Author's Response: I'll do my best! Haha. Thanks for an enthusiastic review!
Name: shaded reviewed Written in the Stars on Nov 20, 2007 11:58 am
NO! You can't just stop it there!!! You can't! :(
Although I am very very glad that you didn't leave the cliffhanger ending on Ginny leaving. That would be too cruel.

A great chapter, though. I liked how you portrayed Draco's insecurities; how he stopped short of expressing himself fully, as it would cause him unmeasurable amounts of pain to have her leave him afterwards.

Author's Response: Oh, believe me, I considered stopping there. Thanks for the lovely review. I'm glad everything I tried to portray came across to you. I appreciate you leaving your thoughts.
Name: ronlover reviewed Written in the Stars on Nov 20, 2007 07:47 am
I love it! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll do my best.
Name: Betterthanyou reviewed Written in the Stars on Nov 19, 2007 09:50 am
oh.
i love it.
promise

Author's Response: Well thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed Written in the Stars on Nov 19, 2007 08:18 am
oh i need MORE
lovely, can't wait to see how Draco interacts with his daughter.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you. Next chapter, you'll get a taste of it.
Name: TwistedPixie reviewed Written in the Stars on Nov 19, 2007 07:54 am
oh my good lord!! that was so beautiful.

i had a super silent squeal fest when the chappie ended. aaawww i cant stop smiling...aaawww.

seriously. that was so cute. well done. and thanks for the mention btw, i really love your story, thats why i review every chapter.

gosh, i have to go and re-read this chapter again. it was lovely well done!!
xx

Author's Response: Oh, I love your reviews. They're just fantastic. I'm glad you enjoyed reading the chapter. I certainly loved writing it.
Name: LadySalmon reviewed Written in the Stars on Nov 19, 2007 01:59 am
Excellent. You're really talented. I'm hooked on this story :)

Author's Response: Oh, thanks. I'm glad you're started reading this story after you read Frozen. I hope I continue to impress you. :)
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed Written in the Stars on Nov 19, 2007 01:27 am
Well, I am glad that they are with Draco, but I really want to know how Harry took to her leaving. Good Luck can't wait to read more! :)

Author's Response: All is to come, thanks for another review. Harry will provide interesting plotlines for this story.
Name: Mars reviewed Written in the Stars on Nov 18, 2007 07:44 pm
YAAAAAAY!!!!! Thank God she went back to Prague!!

Nice choice using the Charles Bridge. I'll be thinking of Draco and Ginny on those carriages and at the clock the next time I'm in town. Downtown Prague will never be the same again :P.

As always, a great chapter. And a great way to start the morning :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, considering you live there. My beta and I combined what we knew from our visits to Prague. The only picture of myself I've ever liked is of me in one of those carriages. Thanks again for reading and reviewing.
Name: nikisasilverrain reviewed Written in the Stars on Nov 18, 2007 07:01 pm
wow. Just in the nick of time Gin!

Author's Response: Certainly, she was cutting it close. Thanks for the review!
Name: sundials reviewed Written in the Stars on Nov 18, 2007 03:31 pm
aw :) that is such a cute and suspense filled ending to this chapter. i can't wait to see draco interact with lily!

Author's Response: Draco and Lily have interesting interactions coming up. I hope you continue to read and review!
Name: shans12342002 reviewed Written in the Stars on Nov 18, 2007 03:03 pm
Excellent job!! I luved it!! I'm so glad you posted a new chapter!! And that she came back!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Name: takinglifeasitcomes reviewed Written in the Stars on Nov 18, 2007 01:55 pm
I can honestly say that the only thought I had after thoes last few lines was "awwww" and small smile. It was so sweet, bitter sweet yet light and floaty. I loved it =)

Author's Response: I tend to write things bitter sweet. It is a sweet ending though. Thanks very much for the review.
Name: slygal reviewed Written in the Stars on Nov 18, 2007 12:56 pm
ooohhh... I so want to know what happens next! Don't take too long to update!

Author's Response: I'll try to update as soon as possible. Thanks for the kind review, and I hope you keep reading.
Name: Indiainksky reviewed Written in the Stars on Nov 18, 2007 12:24 pm
yay!!! i don't know if ginny is staying, but i was afraid she wasn't going to come back at all. lovely chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks very much for the review! It is nerve wracking, waiting to see what she does next. I hope you stick around to see what happens.
Name: DanRadcliffesgrrl reviewed Written in the Stars on Nov 18, 2007 12:01 pm
Wow. I didn't expect her to actually leave. What about her sons? What are they going to do without her, or what are they going to do when they found out their sister is really just a half sister? Can't wait for your next update!

Author's Response: I'm glad everyone recognizes that it's much more complicated than her just deciding to leave. There is lots of baggage coming with her decision. I hope you keep reading and reviewing!
Name: dgloves70 reviewed Written in the Stars on Nov 18, 2007 10:50 am
Oh I am so happy that she went back to Draco and brought Lily with her!
I am curious as to what has happened but I am looking forward to how he will know Lily and what Ginny did before she came. I was getting just as nervous as Draco waiting to read what is next.
Oh it was just like their love affair in the beginning. beautifu;lovely fantastic!
Kuddos! Thank you for the "shout out" I loved it.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for continuing to review chapter after chapter. I love seeing your reviews each time. It was an anxious chapter, and I'm glad I could accurately portray that to the reader. I'm so happy you enjoyed it, and I hope you continue to stay with me.
Name: rebel_angel reviewed Written in the Stars on Nov 18, 2007 10:42 am
That was so heart-wrenching to read. I really thought for a mintue that Ginny wasn't going to come. AND then when she came I thought Harry might have kept her children. AND then when the daughter was revealed form behind her I thought......I think too much. LOL!

Very good, love cliffs, especially ones that don't really seem like cliffs until you get to the edge!

Author's Response: It was very heart wrenching. I was anxious just writing it, because Draco's anxiety kept building. Thanks so much for the lovely review, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Name: Truthiness reviewed Written in the Stars on Nov 18, 2007 10:36 am
Yay! Happy ending, if just for now. And after so much angst. Of course there is a lot more involved with their lives so is doubtful that it will be that simple or that easy. But it's a nice respite and to see Ginny finally actively commit to Draco.

Small note for correction, you have: "Draco caught sight of a stooped old man in a striped flat hat, holding the reigns of a carriage-tethered horse." The correct word in this case will be reins, not the one with a "g." Those tricky homophones.

Other than that, keep up the good work.

cheers!

Author's Response: Nothing is ever simple or easy with Draco and Ginny. I'm glad you've recognized that their troubles aren't over. But for now, things seem happy. Thanks for the correction, I appreciate it. Thanks so much for leaving such a nice, long review!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Written in the Stars on Nov 18, 2007 10:20 am
good! she's finally making sense! haha! update soon! i love it!

Author's Response: That she is. Thanks for the review!
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