Name: Iliana_r reviewed
Dark Horizons on Feb 22, 2008 06:12 pm
The story is really great. I've just started to read, and I have taken down the whole seven chapters. Let see what comes and keep on writing.
Iliana
Author's Response: I'm glad you're taking the time to start reading it! Thanks for the review!
Name: 0630938 reviewed
Dark Horizons on Jan 25, 2008 04:18 pm
IIIIEEE, ouch this chapter is a bit weird. I mean he says that his shit at this father thing yet he has scorpius and he seemed like a fit dad in the first chapter...Then Harry not liking Lily and Lily liking a man she has only known for a month more then him is soo unlikely even if he is her biological dad. Harry thought he was her real father and well I think you understand what I mean. But there is the sentence that you wrote about beauty that blew me away litteraly I copy pasted it in my fav. quotes.
Author's Response: First chapter, we did not see Draco interact with Scorpius at all. In fact, we find out Celia took Scorpius away from Draco when he was less than a year old. The boy comes to visit Draco for a month every year, but he has never had to be a full time day - a real father. Harry has always been distant towards Lily. Ginny explained that in the last chapter. But try to imagine, from Harry's point of view, that you find out your wife slept with your worst enemy, and he fathered who you believed to be your child. I believe that Harry would be repulsed by that, and wouldn't know how to treat Lily. Additionally, Draco is winning Lily over like he won Ginny over in Paris. But I always appreciate your thoughts and opinions - they make me into a better writer. So keep reviewing!
Name: DanRadcliffesgrrl reviewed
Dark Horizons on Nov 27, 2007 11:39 am
Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Next chapter will hopefully be up by the end of the week...
Name: laylaelaine reviewed
Dark Horizons on Nov 25, 2007 09:19 am
I love this story!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm so glad!
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed
Dark Horizons on Nov 25, 2007 04:25 am
gah...
poor James and Albus... will Draco be good with them?? will Harry even let them visit???????/
need more
fab chapter though
Author's Response: There will definitely be some adjusting with the kids. But you'll see soon enough. Thanks for another review! :)
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
Dark Horizons on Nov 24, 2007 07:49 pm
Oh what a great set-up, I am so looking forward to the meeting btw Harry, James, Albus and Draco.
I wonder when Ginny is going to meet with Scorpius? What is the family situation is going to be like for them all when they arrive back during the Easter Holidays?
How will the family Weasley react when they meet with Draco?
Exciting and nervous and totally excited. Fabulous how they have become a family in such a short time. I love it, their family dynamics that is.
Thank you for the early gift!
Author's Response: The Easter hols are in a couple of chapters, and I can guarantee there's going to be some family clashing. Can't say between who though. :) I have enjoyed writing Draco and Lily's dynamics, and I'm glad you've enjoyed reading it. Thanks for another great review!
Name: Eleoopy reviewed
Dark Horizons on Nov 24, 2007 05:32 pm
please update!!! it's killing me!!!
Author's Response: I will try to soon!! Thanks for the review!
Name: silvermay reviewed
Dark Horizons on Nov 24, 2007 05:10 pm
I love this. I like that it goes along with everything in the books but still conforms to the DG ship. Really good stuff here.
Author's Response: Thanks very much. I thought long and hard on how to write a D/G story that was intermingled with JKR's plot.
Name: desperate_ballad reviewed
Dark Horizons on Nov 24, 2007 04:21 pm
Wow, you scared me. For a while(up until this chapter) I thought that chapter 6 was the last chapter of the story. Man am I happy that you posted this. It's lovely.
Author's Response: Originally, that was supposed to be the end of the story. Or, at least that was how I imagined the story in my head. But I decided early on to extend it. Thanks for such a nice review!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Dark Horizons on Nov 24, 2007 02:31 pm
great job! i love the story! its great! update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for a great review. I will update as soon as I can. :)
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed
Dark Horizons on Nov 24, 2007 11:45 am
That was a great chapter. I love it when you update. I can't wait to read more. I am glad that Lily took to Draco so well. Good Luck with the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, as well as Draco and Lily's interactions. :)
Name: TwistedPixie reviewed
Dark Horizons on Nov 24, 2007 10:47 am
*sobs* depressing, but lovely i must admit.
so cute that draco and lily are getting on so well, but makes me sad that she has to go home to 'the other family' lol.
good luck for the next chappie! cant wait
xx
Author's Response: It is very sad. Sad for all three of our darlings, but Ginny in particular is having problems adjusting. I think Lily could do alright just about anywhere. Anyhow, thanks so much for another lovely review.
Name: Mars reviewed
Dark Horizons on Nov 24, 2007 09:42 am
Wow...a very intense but great chapter! As always! How do you find the time to write so much and so well??!? Well, however you do it, keep it up because I love the story and hope you update soon!!
Author's Response: Ah, I love this review. It is so thoughtful. I write when I can, it tends to calm me, and my beta edits when she can, although we are both extraordinarily busy. It was intense, and I'm glad you like it. Trouble's brewing for our happy couple...
Name: rebel_angel reviewed
Dark Horizons on Nov 24, 2007 08:13 am
I sense trouble brewing. With Draco going back to England....(if he decideds to stay)who knows what will happen!
Author's Response: There is a lot coming for the two of them. And England has a lot of Draco's demons. I hope you continue to read and review! Thanks for leaving your thoughts!