Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed
On Parade on Mar 13, 2010 05:30 pm
a great plot!!
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
On Parade on Apr 25, 2008 12:19 pm
Oh, such torment. A well written chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: tinamarie reviewed
On Parade on Feb 11, 2008 01:24 pm
It must be so hard for Draco...my heart goes out to him but he must face his deamons.
Author's Response: It is really hard for him, but you're right: he has to try if he wants to keep Ginny and Lily.
Name: 0630938 reviewed
On Parade on Jan 25, 2008 04:41 pm
Ohh god he had an axiety attack that's great just great poor guy his dad truly messed things up for him didn't he
Author's Response: It was a hard chapter for Draco. He's dealing with demons he's kept buried for a long time. Thanks for the review!
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed
On Parade on Dec 20, 2007 10:09 am
:o
....... god why did you make it so realistic??
really well written, but kinda depressing... i guess that's not your fault though. PLEASE let james and albus be nice again...
Author's Response: I'm sorry!! No, really, I'm not. The angst is part of the journey. Thanks for the review! :)
Name: Mars reviewed
On Parade on Dec 19, 2007 11:45 am
Wow...That is all I can say: Wow.
And poor Ginny - if only she could help him :(
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. Ginny is rather helpless in this situation. :(
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed
On Parade on Dec 18, 2007 12:12 pm
Dang poor Ginny and Draco. I think that they just need to move back and get out of the stress. I can't believe that Ginny's family would act like that no matter who the father Ginny and Lily are still family. Can't wait to read more. :)
Author's Response: Everything is sucking right now. I would love for them to go back to Prague, but running away from their problems isn't the answer. Things with the Weasleys are going to be tough just like everything else. Thanks so much for yet another review!
Name: shaded reviewed
On Parade on Dec 18, 2007 11:06 am
Wow. I can still feel the charged atmosphere between Draco and Ginny in that last scene. Very powerful. Finally we get a glimpse of what Draco has been dreading would happen, what has been hounding him ever since he agreed to move back to England. Although it seems that what's been left unsaid will remain eating away at him for some time to come. I can't wait to see how this will develop.
“Nor is it mine.”
With that last line comes a whole sense of hopelessness, helplessness, despair. I can just picture Draco and Ginny both staring at each other in the silence that follows.
I love how your writing has me caught up in the emotions of the characters. The angst is especially done very well. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
Also, I hope that Scorpius can try to cheer Lily up in the Summer hols, so she doesn't have to feel alone without James and Albus.
Author's Response: Aw, such a long and lovely review. I tried to make the tension in that scene as palpable as possible. I'm glad that Draco's demons and the strains they put on the marriage have been appropriately apparent. Thanks so much for your appreciative comments, shaded. Scorpius will indeed be visiting over the summer hols. :)
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
On Parade on Dec 18, 2007 10:21 am
this was really good! update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try my best! Finals are this week, so I'm lagging behind a little.
Name: Kizei reviewed
On Parade on Dec 18, 2007 04:17 am
Wow. This keeps getting better and better with every chapter (even though this chapter is sad). I love this story.
I loved it, I feel for everyone, its a shame that Draco, Ginny, and Lily got affected badly in this one chapter. Stupid James and Albus for making Lily feel that way...but im glad Draco seems like hes starting to open up about whats bothering him! And poor Draco...20 years later, and all of what had happened in the war still following him so much. It is really quite heart wrenching, all the pain that their going through, but whats a D/G story with out a little angst?
Keep up the good work, and a big THANK YOU for the regular updates. I usually don't read WIPs, but this one caught my attention from the very beginning, like I said in my last review.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks. I'm so glad you've been enjoying it. Everyone has been struggling lately. I try my best to update regularly, thanks for noticing! :)
Name: LadySalmon reviewed
On Parade on Dec 18, 2007 12:16 am
Jesus.
This is really magnificent, you know.
Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Name: kitchenelf reviewed
On Parade on Dec 17, 2007 08:15 pm
oh dear... pain all around. but with their situation, it would not be believable if they have it easy. i feel for lily the most (makes me want to smack james & albus for taking it out on her... gits!)
i have a feeling things will get worse before they get better. i know draco is a mess and ginny is miserable, but please don't make them break-up!
the way you presented their pain is brilliant. that scene at the jokeshop (ironic, come to think of it) where people were unforgiving, draco's anguish, ginny's tears, and that line of draco's at the end... heartbreaking!!!
you're awesome, thanks for the update. oh, pls excuse my 'lower case' review, i'm just a text junkie. also, a shout-out to ur beta Embellished (see, a capital letter just for her), you both rock!
Author's Response: Such a long, thoughtful review. I appreciate every single one of your comments! Lily did suffer some hardships this chapter, and you'll see how this affected her a little later on. Things are getting messy, and none of my characters are happy right now, much to their and my dismay. Thanks so much for recognizing Embellished as well. She certainly deserves a lot of credit.
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
On Parade on Dec 17, 2007 05:47 pm
Oh no! Please dont tell me that they are going to break up because of this?! What about Lily? what about a confrontation btw Ginny & her family with Draco close by. I think they need to see for themselves that they are happy and that they are going to try to get along? Awesome story. So looking forward to the next great chapter.
Author's Response: Troubled times await our favorite couple. Lily was with George during this confrontation, but hard times are coming for her as well. I appreciate you leaving a review again. Keep reading!
Name: DanRadcliffesgrrl reviewed
On Parade on Dec 17, 2007 05:22 pm
Wow. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks! I will hopefully get one up before the holiday break.
Name: Nakita reviewed
On Parade on Dec 17, 2007 03:07 pm
This was so sad. I really hope they don't break up, I am rooting for the Unlikely here. Please let them pull through. Great story though, update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks for such a sweet review. It's nice to see you care so much about my poor, tormented characters. Stick with me!
Name: rebel_angel reviewed
On Parade on Dec 17, 2007 03:02 pm
AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! That was my scream of absolute delight for the update!
Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad. I was a day late, I'm sorry. I have finals this week, and studying has been a nightmare. Thanks for the review!