Reviews For Fleur de Lis
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed In the Distance on Apr 25, 2008 12:31 pm
Oh man!!! That was a cliffhanger!!! Nice job again!

Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: IluvCaptainJack reviewed In the Distance on Feb 12, 2008 07:35 pm
I've seen your story the last few months on the recently updated list and haven't had the time to read it, but now that I have I hope to see it up there a lot more!! stupid cliffy :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you finally took the time to read it! The next chapter should be up shortly!
Name: PrincessJessica reviewed In the Distance on Feb 12, 2008 05:08 am
I'm really enjoying this one! Thank you, especially, for not making Ginny and Molly make up oh-so-perfectly - the tension makes better plot.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much for such a nice review. I'm really glad you appreciate the realistic nature of the plot.
Name: kumydabookworm reviewed In the Distance on Feb 11, 2008 03:27 pm
I missed a couple of chapters in this, but I've just caught up. This is so interesting and engaging. The kids come alive and practically bounce off the page. I can't wait to see what happens next, so update as soon as you can! :) Thanks for another lovely chapter.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks for such a wonderful review. I will update as soon as I can! I'm really glad you're enjoying Lily and Scorpius. They're the hardest but most fun for me to write. :)
Name: tinamarie reviewed In the Distance on Feb 11, 2008 01:58 pm
Hello Potter as in Harry Potter? Who invited him to the party?

Author's Response: The very one. He was definitely NOT invited. :) Thanks for the review!
Name: Kizei reviewed In the Distance on Feb 11, 2008 02:40 am
arg! You have got to be kidding me...you can't leave us like that!

Anyway, loved the chapter as usual :). The overly-red room for the boys made me laugh, when everyone was commenting on it. I'm so so so happy that Scorpius is going to look out for Lily, being the big brother, its awesome that they're getting along so well now! WOW Harry showed up?? Thats...odd. Hopefully Albus and James will be good....

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm sorry. I know this cliffhanger is bad, but *sneak peak!* wait for the next chapter. You're all going to hate me. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and left such a long, awesome review. Harry did show up, unexpectedly, unannounced, and definitely unwanted. :)
Name: laylaelaine reviewed In the Distance on Feb 10, 2008 12:54 pm
YAY! A

Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: Crrritina913 reviewed In the Distance on Feb 10, 2008 12:43 pm
a cliffy! almost flew off my chair! hurry can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: I'm working very hard on the next chapter, I promise! Thanks for the review!
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed In the Distance on Feb 10, 2008 02:18 am
:o
NEED more...
such a cruel cliffhanger...

Author's Response: Sorry! There will be more up soon!
Name: Bronte44 reviewed In the Distance on Feb 09, 2008 11:46 pm
Oohh poor ginny. PLEASE update soon!

Author's Response: I will do my best, and fastest. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed In the Distance on Feb 09, 2008 11:07 pm
Please tell me it's not gonna be forever till the next chapter!

Author's Response: It is NOT going to take forever. I promise. Next chapter should be up soon. Thanks for reviewing!
Name: BeautySpot88 reviewed In the Distance on Feb 09, 2008 08:51 pm
I love this story, especially how scorpious is such a great big brother to lily. Patiently waiting for the next add xXx

Author's Response: Aw, I'm so glad! Thanks!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed In the Distance on Feb 09, 2008 06:11 pm
well... harry's cool...? great chapter! update soon!

Author's Response: Oh, yes. Very cool. Thanks for the review!
Name: wandap1016 reviewed In the Distance on Feb 09, 2008 05:03 pm
WOW talk about tension! I loved how Draco and the kids were teasing Ginny and were trying their hardest to put her at ease about the visit. I also loved the little talk between Lilly & Scorpius.

As always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: It is going to be a very tense household for a little while. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. The next one should be up quickly.
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed In the Distance on Feb 09, 2008 04:25 pm
Well, I feel sorry for Ginny, her sons not being nice to her. She found love in another.....OH well, I can't wait to see how this goes. Good Luck! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement, as usual. Ginny has been dealt a difficult hand, but she will have to learn to play it. :)
Name: kitchenelf reviewed In the Distance on Feb 09, 2008 11:14 am
uh oh... he's not supposed to be there! a cliffie!!! you are so mean, lunaeyes! ok enough with the exclamation points... i think ginny's pregnant. i used to just cry all of a sudden during tv commercials and newscasts when i was... lol. scorpius being protective of lily makes me feel better. 'only i can do that' - so cute!

can't wait for the next chap. great job meanie! ;)

Author's Response: I do love your reviews. They always make me smile. Usually, I try to avoid cliffhangers, but I've got a couple coming your way, so beware. I'm so glad everyone loves Scorpius as much as I do. And as far as your suspicions about Ginny go, you'll just have to wait and see. :)
Name: LilyLove reviewed In the Distance on Feb 09, 2008 11:08 am
oh snap! the sh** is about to hit the fan

Author's Response: For sure. No better way to say it. Thanks for reviewing!
Name: Caroline reviewed In the Distance on Feb 09, 2008 10:59 am
I'm really like the way you are potraying Scorpius. He sounds fun=)

Update soon, that was one cliff hanger you left there...!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like Scorpius. He is by far my favorite to write. I will update really soon, and I'm sorry for the cliffhanger. Hopefully the next chapter will make up for it. :) Thanks for the review!
Name: blubberguts reviewed In the Distance on Feb 09, 2008 09:58 am
i really do love this story write soon love how he ends up coming to the door and how anxious ginny gets and at the start what scorpius says k byby

Author's Response: Thanks so much for such a sweet review. I'm glad you liked so many elements of the chapter. :)
Name: shaded reviewed In the Distance on Feb 09, 2008 09:42 am
Ooh, Harry turns up at Draco's house; surely he's not expecting to be welcomed with open arms is he?

Ginny's fluctuating emotions were very well expressed in this chapter. There's her anxiety about being accepted by her sons, worry about whether the four children would be able to get along and wondering whether Albus and James would be able to feel comfortable in their home for the Summer. All very understandable thoughts and feelings for someone in her situation. When reading about Ginny's nervous actions, I felt that anticipation come through and it made me want to read faster and faster to see the outcome of her sons' arrival.

I was rather curious about how amused Draco seems to be about Ginny's heightened nervousness. (Because in previous chapters he seemed ill at ease in general and had to forcibly keep his head above water, so to speak.) Is it just that he's able to hide his feelings of being uncomfortable with life in England, or just that he has bouts of depression that he is able to overcome? Or maybe Ginny has just got other things on her mind, so she's not noticing it.

Anyway, I thought I'd just add that it was so very heart-warming to see Scorpius pledging his protection of Lily. *hugs Scorpi* That's just adorable. :)

Can't wait for the next chapter.. I'm sure it'll be a rather eventful one.

Author's Response: God, I love you. You are my favorite. This is such a long, awesome, thoughtful review. Harry always causes more than his share of drama, and we'll definitely see some of that next chapter. I'm glad you enjoyed Ginny in this chapter, and Draco's lack of anxiety is simply so that she didn't feel more worried as it was. Fear not, his insecurities will be fully expressed during his POV in the next chapter. Yes, I just love Scorpius. I'm glad someone else does too. Well, thanks again for the review. You're simply amazing.
Name: Mars reviewed In the Distance on Feb 09, 2008 09:38 am
*gasp* Noo!!! You can't leave it there!!! What happens, what happens???

(obviously loved this chapter, as per usual, and cannot wait for the next one :)

Author's Response: Oh, thanks. I can always rely on you for a nice review. :) The next chapter will be up soon, and will probably be a good deal longer, so smiles all around. Right? :)
Name: Nakita reviewed In the Distance on Feb 09, 2008 09:28 am
Boo, a great chapter was ruined with the appearence of Harry Potter. Oh well that just means I will have to wait and see what happens next chapter... which I hope will be very soon. Great Job.

Author's Response: Harry does tend to appear at the most inconvenient moments, but next chapter should come just as quickly as this one, if all goes as planned. Thanks for much for a review!
Name: Julia Evans reviewed In the Distance on Feb 09, 2008 09:28 am
Ooh I hope there's drama! THis is really good, I like the boys' room. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Oh, don't worry about the drama. There's plenty to come. Thanks so much for the review!
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