Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Nov 16, 2008 04:47 am
Wow, I am speechless, you painted a very vivid picture, rocked with emotion. Poor Draco, no wonder he is haunted. Very intense chapter.
Name: Angel_girl reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Aug 02, 2008 03:47 am
hi
i hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Hi! I'm working on it!
Name: Rosy Denz reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 28, 2008 11:18 am
Wow. I'm sorry for the late review but that was an amazing chapter, that I think very accurately grasped what might have happened after the 7th book. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks for the review. I appreciate them all, no matter when they come in. I'm glad you think I got the portrayal right, I'm a stickler for staying with correct characterization.
Name: Lemon Juice reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 21, 2008 11:17 pm
You can't just end it like that! It's summer, real life isn't important :)!
Author's Response: I'm sorry! :) haha, I'm working on the next chapter. It will be up soon.
Name: livvyharris reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 21, 2008 10:31 am
yay, you're back!!
fabulous chapter, so sad to see what Draco has gone through. I hope he and Ginny can work through their problems now.
can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: I AM back! Thanks for the review, and more is on the way!
Name: TwistedPixie reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 21, 2008 08:44 am
I've missed you too! It's been ages!
What a sad lovely chapter. i love it that Draco let Ginny take his hand right at the end, and how upset he was. It was really sad but also very good because it shows us why Draco had been acting the way he's been acting lately. Loved it.
It's nice to have you back, good luck with the next chapters
xx
Author's Response: Ah, it's good to see a review from you again! I'm working on the next chapter, so the wait won't be too too long. :)
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 21, 2008 05:29 am
Well, at least now Ginny understands. So glad that you finally got the chance to update. Can't wait to read more. Good Luck! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words, as always. I'm working on the update.
Name: wandap1016 reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 21, 2008 03:51 am
Hi there, I was so happy to see you've updated the story! Wow this chapter was very intense. I was holding my breath the whole time I was reading it. I'm so glad Draco is finally sharing his demons with Ginny. God poor Draco, his childhood was a complete nightmare! After watching all those horrible memoires she will definitely understand why he has been acting so withdrawn. I'm hoping this will bring them closer and that Ginny will finally tell Draco she's pregnant!
As always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: It was a very intense chapter, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Keep your eyes out for the next chapter, it should be up shortly with some of the things you are looking forward to! :)
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 21, 2008 03:46 am
wow. draco's life sucked. no wonder he's having troubles. lovely story! update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, it really did. Thanks!
Name: babyangel reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 21, 2008 02:58 am
Brilliant!! please continue!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm working on it!
Name: Mars reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 21, 2008 01:22 am
Yay! I'm so glad you updated and that you're continuing this story.
This chapter is amazing; the effect of losing the war on the Malfoy family dynamic- and especially on Lucius- is portrayed so convincingly and the characters perfectly. Love it :)
Author's Response: Oh, thanks for the review. I have missed hearing from you. Next chapter is on it's way!
Name: pens82 reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 20, 2008 07:08 pm
great story so far update soon
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm definitely working on the update.
Name: Iliana_r reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 20, 2008 05:08 pm
It was sad. Sad to see how the lack of communication can break two people apart. Sad to see how hatred can model young minds and kill someone who is looking for the welfare of her beloved ones. And sad how two lovers can forget that they have to give each other some berth to figure out how to keep loving each other. It was a great chapter and is turning to be an excellent piece of writing.
Iliana
Author's Response: This is such a thoughtful review. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Writing this chapter was hard for me, but I'm glad I finally made it through.
Name: hillie121 reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 20, 2008 03:26 pm
so glad u updated this story its wonderful
!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Ah!! Thanks!
Name: Julia Evans reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 20, 2008 01:02 pm
Wow. The details in this chapter really made it enjoyable to read. Good work!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I really appreciate the review.
Name: shaded reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 20, 2008 10:58 am
Ah, what a cliffie! Poor Narcissa, poor Draco; what a horrendous chain of events. I hope that there'll be a new chapter up soon. This revelation must change Draco's relationship with Ginny and I can't wait to see in what ways that will be.
Author's Response: I know! It's a big chapter. Thanks, as always, for the review, and stick around. More to come. :)
Name: aizak reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 20, 2008 10:45 am
oh goodness. I feel like crying! Poor Draco! What he had to gio through! I hate that piece of s---, lucious! ugh! but this was a great chapter and most definitely worth the wait!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it, although it was definitely heart wrenching.
Name: arabella reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 20, 2008 08:49 am
this was a great chapter! i'm so glad that you finally updated. the ending was great, and you built it up to the climax extremely well, and i love the way you express the emotions of the characters.
hope to read another update soon!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I'm so glad you guys are still interested in reading after my extended break. I'm working on the update!