Name: shaded reviewed
Visions of Red on Feb 16, 2008 07:18 am
No! You can't just stop there! That's a terrible cliffie to end on. What's happened to Scorpius?
What an action-packed chapter. We finally gain an understanding of why Draco's having problems with being back in England and there's the looming news of Ginny being pregnant! Oh, how on earth will the children deal with that? I can imagine Scorpius and Lily being okay with it, but James, and even Al to some extent, would be uneasy, I think.
And on to the more pressing matter of Scorpius' injury; I just really hope that Draco can keep his rage in check by remembering that James is not Harry; that he shouldn't attack a child for what appears to be an unintended accident. I'm thinking that James wanted to scare Scorpius with a spell, but it went farther then he ever wanted it to go. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I hope that it's up soon. :)
Author's Response: I love your reviews, have a told you that? Don't worry, there's plenty to come next chapter. Your point about James not being Harry is very perceptive of you, because that will be something Draco struggles with greatly in upcoming chapters. Thanks again for your awesome review, and the next chapter should be up within the next half week or so. :)
Name: Shwadi reviewed
Visions of Red on Feb 16, 2008 12:12 am
oh bugger!! he didnt sceptumsempra him ay?? bllleeeddding hell. I'm hurting for draco and lily i reallly am. xxxx cant wait for the next chappy xxxx
Author's Response: Ah, wait and see. Things might not be as bad as you think. Thanks for the review!
Name: malvia reviewed
Visions of Red on Feb 15, 2008 08:12 pm
Cruel cliffhanger!
Author's Response: Sorry! Thanks for reviewing!
Name: arabella reviewed
Visions of Red on Feb 15, 2008 12:46 pm
Whoa. dramatic there. and such a total cliffhanger too! can't wait until you update! scorpius will get his finger back, right?
he's my favorite! =D
Author's Response: It's very dramatic, yes. I'll be updating soon! Thanks!
Name: TwistedPixie reviewed
Visions of Red on Feb 15, 2008 11:40 am
OH NO!! NOT SCORPIUS!!! i love him! ah man, he cant die. is ginny pregnant? amazing chapter well done, i loved it! cant wait for more!!
xx
Author's Response: Oh, well on both counts, you're going to have to wait for the next chapter! Thanks for reviewing, as always.
Name: ElspethBates reviewed
Visions of Red on Feb 15, 2008 08:09 am
Wow! Awesome cliffie!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: yomoedmb reviewed
Visions of Red on Feb 15, 2008 03:30 am
Stupid spawn of Potter!! He is the exact same as his father, casting spells he doesn't know the results of. I loved this chapter. Question mark on the whole Ginny is pregnant thing.
Author's Response: I'm glad you loved this chapter! And James is very much like his father, which is a great struggle for Draco.
Name: wandap1016 reviewed
Visions of Red on Feb 15, 2008 03:12 am
BRAVO! Girl that was an amazing build up to that evil cliff hanger! You did a wonderful job making us feel all of the tension and anxiety that was building up in the house. . I can't wait for Draco to open up to Ginny about his nightmares and fears. Ohhhh I really hope Ginny is pregnant! I'd love to see Draco doting over her.
James is such a punk! I do like Albus, he seems like such a sweetie. I still can't believe Mrs. Weasley plaid them against their own Mother…argh that just pisses me off to no end. I love me some Scorpius, he's such a little Draco! Poor Lilly, she's trying to hard to make her brothers get along. She sounded horrified by whatever happened to Scorpius. James better pray Draco is able to hold on to his temper!
PLEASE update soon : - )
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! The tension in the house is building, and it could only end badly. I'm so glad you love Scorpius, I have the best time writing him. Thanks so much for such a long, awesome review!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Visions of Red on Feb 14, 2008 09:43 am
oh crap! i like scorpius, he's mad better than james and albus, the bums. great chapter! update soon!
Author's Response: Scorpius is definitely the man, in my opinion. :) Thanks!
Name: shans12342002 reviewed
Visions of Red on Feb 14, 2008 08:18 am
OMG!! I love this story!! Great job!!
Author's Response: Ah! Thanks!
Name: Caroline reviewed
Visions of Red on Feb 14, 2008 07:03 am
Oooh! Flashback to HBP!!
Somebody needs to loose their temper and sit down and tell these children how to behave! Seriously. You do not leave the dinner table before everyone is finished, you do not talk to your mother like that! Argh... Good writing on your part, of course, getting me all angry at your characters... Update soon please?
Author's Response: It is very HBPish. I know! It made me angry to write it. But the boys will definitely have what's coming to them sooner or later. :) I'll work on the update, I promise!
Name: Mars reviewed
Visions of Red on Feb 14, 2008 05:56 am
I'm speechless - or, rather, wordless. As always: brilliant. I love the way you described this particular chapter from Draco's point of view. A great choice. Keep it up :)
And what could Ginny possibly have? ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for such a touching review. And Ginny, well, she's definitely suffering from something. :)
Name: Kizei reviewed
Visions of Red on Feb 14, 2008 05:50 am
NOOOOO you are an evil evil person for leaving us with another cliffhanger!! Haha, don't worry I'm obviously kidding.
Besides that, you are AWESOME for getting another amazing (and long!!) chapter up so fast! That made me so happy, seeing this chapter up already, because like i've said before, this is the first story I look for every time I get on here.
Poor Draco...I really hope he overcomes those demons fast, with those and the Potter boys there, must be so hard for him.
I love Lily and Scorpius's relationship. LOVE IT!! But…stupid…James. I don't like him at all. I'm sure he was the one who cursed Scorpius, too. Who better be alright! I'll probably cry if hes seriously hurt.
Hmmm…Ginny's pregnant!! Lol or so I think! That would be so awesome, Draco and Ginny having another kid together, and them being able to raise it together! (hint hint lol)
YOU ARE AWESOME!! Lol keep up the great work :)
Author's Response: Thanks for such a long, awesome, thorough review! You are all making my Valentine's Day much brighter. It is hard for Draco, but he's definitely making progress. And I really enjoy writing Scorpius and Lily's relationship. Thanks again for such an awesome review! Keep your eyes open for the next chapter!
Name: ChickbabeC1 reviewed
Visions of Red on Feb 14, 2008 03:57 am
What a cliff hanger!!! ohhh update fast!!
Author's Response: I'll try!! Thanks!
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed
Visions of Red on Feb 14, 2008 02:44 am
Oh what did James do now??? I can't wait for you to update. Good Luck! :)
Author's Response: Oh, James. He's in a good deal of trouble. Thanks for reviewing!
Name: Bronte44 reviewed
Visions of Red on Feb 13, 2008 11:38 pm
Oh No. Ginny's pregnant and please tell me Harry kept the old potions book locked away. I'd hate to think James learned and then used Sectumsempra on Scorpius. Or worse Harry taught him. Oh the horror.
Author's Response: Well, we'll find out what really happened to dear Scorpius at the hospital. But thanks for the review!
Name: kitchenelf reviewed
Visions of Red on Feb 13, 2008 06:36 pm
boy, i had about two minutes of seesawing emotions while reading this. at first i was 'yay, a midweek update!' then, what's up with the chapter title? no way that it could be a prelude to valentines. then, i wanted to smack james for being such a prat, but i'm glad that at least albus is trying. poor draco, dealing with his demons while bearing all the stress about the boys, not wanting to burst ginny's bubble. and then i was starting to feel a little smug when my suspicions about ginny was about to be confirmed... but then, scorpius! no, you're not that cruel...... are you?
and to think i thought i prepared myself for cliffies after your warning. gahh! this is getting so 'unputdownable' - so let's just say, i'll be checking back this weekend. thanks :-)
Author's Response: I love your reviews so much. Yeah! Proud of me for getting the chapter out several days earlier than I would have usually. And, your pregnancy suspicions (you were the first one to call it, by the way) are on their way to being confirmed or denied. Next chapter. I am pretty cruel. But I guess it's a question of how cruel I really am, huh?
Name: Julia Evans reviewed
Visions of Red on Feb 13, 2008 05:02 pm
Oh my goodness! This is easily the best suspense-filled story I've ever read! So James pulled a Harry,did he? At least Harry had enoug sense to curse Draco in a bathroom- much easier to clean!
Author's Response: Wow! What a complimentary review, I'm so happy you're enjoying it. And James' actions are a bit like Harry's, but things might turn out differently. :) Keep reading.
Name: crazykay254 reviewed
Visions of Red on Feb 13, 2008 04:31 pm
OH MY GOD!! scorpius can't be dead! stupid potter boys. gahh please update soon!
Author's Response: Ah! Keep reading! I'll update ASAP.
Name: crookshanksg reviewed
Visions of Red on Feb 13, 2008 03:59 pm
AHHHH!!! CLiffy!! No fair!
I am really liking this story. I mean, I liked it from the beginning, but it's getting even better! Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Ah, I'm sorry! That makes me so happy, I'm glad it's getting more and more interesting.
Name: KG1 reviewed
Visions of Red on Feb 13, 2008 03:34 pm
omg!! It's amazing. I can't believe you are ending the chapter with another cliff hanger!!! (mock anger) Please, write more often. I was so excited when I saw that Fleur de Lis was updated. I only just started reading it but it is becoming one of my favourites!!
Author's Response: I'm sorry about all the cliffhangers. I don't really mean to write them in, they just sort of add themselves. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so much, as well as leaving reviews!
Name: Amanda Mancini reviewed
Visions of Red on Feb 13, 2008 03:28 pm
Oh &$^@ what an effing bonding experience!
Author's Response: It was kind of a bummer. Thanks for reviewing!
Name: IluvCaptainJack reviewed
In the Distance on Feb 12, 2008 07:35 pm
I've seen your story the last few months on the recently updated list and haven't had the time to read it, but now that I have I hope to see it up there a lot more!! stupid cliffy :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you finally took the time to read it! The next chapter should be up shortly!
Name: PrincessJessica reviewed
In the Distance on Feb 12, 2008 05:08 am
I'm really enjoying this one! Thank you, especially, for not making Ginny and Molly make up oh-so-perfectly - the tension makes better plot.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much for such a nice review. I'm really glad you appreciate the realistic nature of the plot.
Name: kumydabookworm reviewed
In the Distance on Feb 11, 2008 03:27 pm
I missed a couple of chapters in this, but I've just caught up. This is so interesting and engaging. The kids come alive and practically bounce off the page. I can't wait to see what happens next, so update as soon as you can! :) Thanks for another lovely chapter.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for such a wonderful review. I will update as soon as I can! I'm really glad you're enjoying Lily and Scorpius. They're the hardest but most fun for me to write. :)