There were a few minor spelling/grammatical errors still in there, so you might want to go through the chaps again. Slow work, I know. And I'm pretty sure last chapter you said they had a Honda Civic, and in this one you mention their Benz on the driveway. Free car? Draco's so sweet, upgrading it for them. Some of the story seems a bit far-fetched, but I suppose there could be background tidbits we don't know. Maybe Lucius told Draco about the attack in NY, and Draco's really not a DE and so packed up w/ the trio and hightailed it to LA? But how did they know that's where she was? Especially if she's dyed her hair (I missed that bit)

Author's Response: thanks for mentioning the car thing. I fixed that.

This is very good cant wait for an update