Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed The Presentation on Jun 15, 2010 05:59 pm
I am rereading this story and am again amazed at your storytelling abilities. Your plot draws in the reader, and I can almost feel myself turning the "pages" of your wonderful book. Your dialogue flows so well, and your character depth is spot on! LOVE IT
Name: shaded reviewed The Presentation on Mar 29, 2008 06:26 am
A very intense ending to this chapter. I can't wait to see how Ginny and Draco's relationship will progress in future chapters.
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed The Presentation on Mar 24, 2008 01:38 pm
Ahh, too much tension between them. He isn't making it very easy to get close to him....Ugh, and Ginny & Harry makes me vomit a little in my mouth....

Nice dialogue and flow for your story. You do a wonderful job. Thanks for another lovely chapter.
Name: harrypotterchick4ever reviewed The Presentation on Mar 23, 2008 05:07 pm
loved it as usual
the dance should be good!!
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