i must say, i really dislike reviewing things. i have to log in, and then find the story again, and all this stuff, which basically explains why i almost never leave a review. However, once in a while, if I read a story that really compels me, I will get off my lazy ass and do it. And once I leave a review, they do tend to be very long and rambly. so here goes.

1) I love Ginny. She is fiery and fiesty, and an exact replica of the JKR's original Ginny that I love. I think it's empowering that she doesn't try to delude herself into hyper-overdrive of girly excitement and over-analyzing of her first kiss with Draco. In fact, if I recall, she even slaps herself in the face. I liked that. I can't stand silly characters who have nothing better to do all day than to get wrapped up in thoughts of boys with no real life of their own. Also, she doesn't let Draco Malfoy walk over her. She gets angry at him, which I think is realistic in all relationships. And it may be heinous for me to say it, but conflict is interesting and real. Not something like out of the Twilight novels where Edward and Bella are always in perfect lovey-dovey harmony (excuse me, if you're a Twilight fan)

2) Draco Malfoy is very nicely done. I enjoyed seeing his sensitive side. True, he is not the nicest boy, but he is, in a way, innocent. I liked how you brought all his emotions together. We see snobby Draco, intelligent Draco, and caring Draco. Because, he's mean, but not heartless. I commend you on doing a fine job with his multiple personalities.

3) This is minor, but thank goodness Pansy was described as not very good-looking. It's very shallow, but I can't stand her. And if I remember, she wasn't described as particularly attractive in the books either.

4) Astoria Greengrass. I have wanted to strangle her so many times. Even though in the epilogue of the seventh book (which I do not intend on reading, because it shatters my D/G hopes) it comes out that Astoria is the one who ultimately marries Draco, I can not stand her. Please don't make them end up together. :)

5) I was so happy to know that you last updated this story on May 25, 2009. I've been a little worried after reading so many D/G stories that were written five years ago. I thought people out there were starting to lose faith in D/G just because of some silly epilogue. Seeing that this was updated a week ago made me feel so much better.

6) I also noted that you started this story two years ago (i think???) Please don't make me wait two years for another update! I'm curious and highly intrigued. I feel like I can't get enough and the suspense is killing me. So, please update soon! I promise to review faithfully for each chapter (though probably not as long as this one) Please don't wait another year or something, even though I know how hard it is to find spare time during school with schoolwork and everything.

7) Last (finally!) is that I am so glad that at least, even if you decide to give up on the story, that Ginny and Draco did it. I realize that I am being so horny, but I'm kind of a sucker for D/G er, physical action. The way you did it was nice. Simple and sweet.

That basically concludes it. I can not wait for you to update more so I can get this annoying feeling of suspense and waiting off my chest. :) Please update soon.

OMG!!!!!!!!
I feel like I'm gonna cry my brain out right now.
Your fiction is just amazing! And beautiful! And perfect!
Believe me, you're doing an amazing job in here. The way you're mixing the book's plot and yours is fantastic. Everything I wanted to know about Draco during the HBP (including the DG, 'cause they're just made for each other and JK is crazy for have written that Epilogue of Doom XD) is what you've written so far. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
And is also remarkable the references about Churchill, and the relationship with his wife during the WWII. You know, he really was na amazing guy!
Of course I don't need to mention all the DG interaction. Your picture of Draco is very close to mine and this is so cherishable to read. The relationship between them is so sweet and I'm looking forward (but not that much) the unroll of their love story. Hope, though, you write a lot more, since is has been a pleasure to read it!
Keep up the pace!
kissus
Nac

ah great chapter. this is a really good story. more updates please

Hooray! A new chapter! you have no idea how happy you have made me, i just love the way you write :) that was so sweet.... i love your Draco and Ginny! plz update soon....*pouts*