Name: rowan_greenleaf reviewed
Someday Never Comes on Nov 06, 2008 08:01 am
Gosh, how sad! That was very well written,nicely done.
Name: shaded reviewed
Someday Never Comes on Mar 29, 2008 05:18 am
What a heart-wrenching ending.
It took a while to get used to the changing perspectives, but seeing both Ginny and Draco's points of view were interesting. Maybe if the two viewpoints weren't so identical in their wording it might have been easier to believe that the parallel walks could actually happen.
The scene when Draco notices the reddish-orange leaves being crushed was very well written. I particularly liked how Astoria found out who had her husband's heart for all those years of marriage.
Overal, it was a great ficlet. :)
Author's Response: I'm a sucker for parallelism, I have to admit. It's just so endearing to me that they might have done the same thing day after day, but not know the other person was. :] Maybe it is a bit far-fetched, I guess. I figured Astoria had the right to know who her husband was in love with; she's not as oblivious as Harry, after all. Thanks for the great review, and I'm glad you liked it.
Name: Eleoopy reviewed
Someday Never Comes on Mar 24, 2008 03:10 pm
That's it?! Ugh...i hate depressing ending >_< but it is a good story nonetheless. I like the way you use italic for Ginny and normal font for draco. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Yep, that's it. There really couldn't be a happy ending for this one, you have to admit. XD Thanks for the review!
Name: ronlover reviewed
Someday Never Comes on Mar 23, 2008 06:50 pm
Its so sad, but beautifully written. Great job.
Author's Response: I know it was terribly sad… It really made me depressed writing it. Thanks for the review!
Name: sevs_girl reviewed
Someday Never Comes on Mar 23, 2008 06:29 pm
Very nice! I liked it a lot.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!
Name: Nakita reviewed
Someday Never Comes on Mar 23, 2008 05:34 pm
That was haunting and beautiful. A very unique way of bringing them together. I really liked it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I wanted to write a fully compliant D/G fic, but look at how sad it turned out!