Name: Nakita reviewed
Out of This World on May 11, 2008 07:57 am
Yes!! Finally it happened, this chapter made me very happy. Cant wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. I'm glad you like the fic. I'm trying to get a chapter up every three days or so. Maybe I can stick to it.
Name: kksf1377 reviewed
Out of This World on May 10, 2008 09:52 pm
i loved it, i can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Hopefully you won't have to for long. I"m glad you liked it, and I hope you'll keep reviewing. Thanks!
Name: CharmedLife19 reviewed
Out of This World on May 10, 2008 08:28 pm
Aw... I love it! Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it! I'll try and do a good job on the next chapter (up soon)!
Name: Dracogirl reviewed
Out of This World on May 10, 2008 05:47 pm
I really liked this chapter, it was so cute. Ginny thinks Draco 'lost', but I think they both turned out winners!!!!(How did the softball semi-finals turn out?)
Author's Response: The game isn't nearly finished yet. ;) I'm glad you liked it, though, and I think they both won, too. We won the semi-finals, lost the finals. It sucked but now I have more time for Draco/Ginny goodness! Thanks for reviewing!
Name: yomoedmb reviewed
Out of This World on May 10, 2008 05:01 pm
AWWWWW *snuggles* I love fluff, I love Draco and Ginny FLUFF. It's so soft to land on and pretty. I loved it, it was cute, and sensitive and needed.
Author's Response: I'm in complete agreement. I'm glad you liked the chapter, and I hope you keep reading. Thanks for the review!
Name: aizak reviewed
Out of This World on May 10, 2008 04:57 pm
n0t up to your normal standards. the writing was pretty weak. if there was a little more description in the fic, it really would have been one of a kind.
Author's Response: Thanks for the honesty, and sorry to disappoint. I did, however, leave an author's note that this was a really hard chapter to write for me. I'll try to do better next time.
Name: Grneyedminx reviewed
Out of This World on May 10, 2008 04:10 pm
Ah! The hook up! Woot woot! Interesting revelations about their true feelings. Your use of dialogue was right on. Make sure you don't rush the plot. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: The real revelations are yet to come. I'm glad you like that dialogue, and I'll definitely try to keep up a good timeline. Thanks for the encouragement!
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
Out of This World on May 10, 2008 04:08 pm
AHHHHH, I just don't want this story to end. The climactic love scene was a bit rushed for me, and lacked a bit of emotion BUT, for some reason, I really like this story and want it to continue on and on...Let's see more Blaise!!! I really like this side of Draco...Great job.
Author's Response: The story is not close to finished, yet. The next few chapters will explain Ginny and Draco's attraction in more detail and show their reasoning. Blaise will definitely be in the next chapter, so enjoy! (He's just so cute.) Thanks for the review!
Name: darkloveangel reviewed
Out of This World on May 10, 2008 03:07 pm
awwwwww that was sooo cute! i love this story! please write more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review! I'll update really soon!
Name: pivotandsway reviewed
Give Me Danger on May 10, 2008 12:55 pm
wow that was really lovely and well done
Author's Response: I appreciate the nice review! Thanks, and keep reading!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Out of This World on May 10, 2008 11:07 am
aw cute!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Keep reading and reviewing, please.
Name: wiccawitch reviewed
Adrenaline on May 02, 2008 01:34 pm
I love it! Definitely favorited! Update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad everyone seems to be enjoying it. I'll update as soon as possible. Keep reading and reviewing!
Name: thehyperemokid reviewed
Adrenaline on Apr 30, 2008 10:18 am
NOOO the chapter ended!!! im totally obsessed with this story!!! keep going!!!
Author's Response: LOL... I'm glad you like it so much. I'll update really soon, I promise. Thanks for the review!
Name: lavenderab reviewed
Adrenaline on Apr 28, 2008 09:10 am
i like this story
Author's Response: Thanks! Keep reading and reviewing please. I'll update soon!
Name: lavenderab reviewed
Picking Sides on Apr 28, 2008 08:47 am
i like it i hope you update soon
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.... Keep reading and reviewing!
Name: Dracogirl reviewed
Adrenaline on Apr 27, 2008 07:56 pm
Good Luck with the semi-finals and hopefully finals of softball. I am really enjoying this story!!!
Author's Response: You're sweet! Thanks, and I'm glad you like it! Chapter Six up soon!
Name: Hopeless reviewed
Adrenaline on Apr 27, 2008 05:30 am
I'm really enjoying this story so far! keep it up
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Keep reading and reviewing! I love feedback!
Name: Kalira reviewed
Adrenaline on Apr 26, 2008 06:48 pm
haha entertaining :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it!
Name: Jordanza reviewed
Adrenaline on Apr 26, 2008 05:51 pm
oh man so want more!
Author's Response: Thanks! Please keep reading!
Name: sweetpop reviewed
Adrenaline on Apr 26, 2008 05:06 pm
:D thanks for the new chapter an interesting devolpment happening, its great! congratulations to you and your softball team!
Author's Response: Thanks. We've entered the elite eight so I'll probably be busier than ever, but I promise to update ASAP. Keep reading!
Name: Grneyedminx reviewed
Adrenaline on Apr 26, 2008 04:23 pm
The stakes are getting higher... I wonder who will break first? Nice chapter
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm trying to update as fast as possible because I'm just as anxious to hear your reviews as you are to read the chapters!
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
Adrenaline on Apr 26, 2008 03:07 pm
Ahh, the games are fun, the chapter well written, but MUCH too short. I was really shocked at the length. I enjoy your writing...and anxiously await the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm sorry about the lenght. It was shorter than I wanted. However, I promise to make up for it in Chapter Six if you keep reading. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: I'm sorry about the lenght. It was shorter than I wanted. However, I promise to make up for it in Chapter Six if you keep reading. Thanks for the review!
Name: readhead1755 reviewed
Adrenaline on Apr 26, 2008 01:02 pm
You have to give us more than that!
Author's Response: That chapter was short, huh? I'll make up for it next chapter, I promise. Thanks for the review!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Adrenaline on Apr 26, 2008 12:45 pm
haha. they're both just using people, and both of them know it! hahaha. update soon!
Author's Response: That's what makes it so fun! I'll definitely update sooner and have more to write. Thanks for the review!
Name: darkness_faerie88 reviewed
Give Me Danger on Apr 18, 2008 04:12 pm
LET THE GAMES BEGIN!!!!it's very good!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm hoping the next chapter will be way longer... Keep reading please. I love reviews!