Name: slitherhither reviewed
The Game on Apr 05, 2008 05:14 pm
Off to a great start! (just read chaps 1&2 together) You have a very engaging writing style.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Please keep the reviews coming.
Name: linz7886 reviewed
The Game on Apr 05, 2008 03:13 pm
I like where this is going. Hope that you keep the updates coming, but I understand that creativity must not be rushed :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you get it, but for some reason, the juices are seriously flowing on this one. I hope you enjoy the next chapter, coming soon.
Name: suki_sam reviewed
The Game on Apr 05, 2008 03:07 pm
Your writing is amazing, and I am absolutely in love with the fic. Updates would be loved. =D
Author's Response: You're great, and thanks. I'm glad you like it, and I'm going to try not to be one of those authors who gets readers interested and then drops off of the face of the earth. Thanks for the review.
Name: aizak reviewed
The Game on Apr 05, 2008 02:41 pm
Great!!! I love how you updated soooo quickly!!!!! Im loving this story but I think the chapters should be a little bit longer!!!!
Author's Response: The next chapter is a lot longer, I promise. Also, I'll try to update as quickly as possible, but I am a full-time student and I work a lot so I can't promise they'll always be this fast. Thanks for the review. Hope you like Chapter Three.
Name: aizak reviewed
Give Me Danger on Apr 05, 2008 02:40 pm
Awesome job. I love where your going with this. Keep updating! Really, Really looking forward to this!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, and I'm glad you like it. I'lll try to update really soon!
Name: Almicene reviewed
The Game on Apr 05, 2008 02:34 pm
Very very promising and intriguing. I do hope you won't make us wait too long for the next few chapters. I've haven't been this excited about a new fic in a while! I'm glad you didn't go into significant detail about Ginny's looks - I admit I am curious, but when the author writes something like:
With her rich copper-red hair, form fitting clothes, long legs, Ginny had a body to die for, etc. It goes so much better and more natural when it comes out from other character's perspectives. Probably one of the best pieces of advice I've heard was a paraphrase from the Irish writer James Joyce - that you write things from the perspective of the character. That is things that are 'new,' that catch their attention should be written down, while everyday things should be ignored - the character is not going to notice the same old tables, hallways they pass through every day. When I see great writing it tends to follow this pattern - poor writing on the other hand writes down all the things the author 'sees' but the character would never notice.
Anyways, great work so far.
Author's Response: I hope it doesn't change your opinion of the story, but there is a tiny bit of explanation of Ginny's looks in Chapter Three. It is necessary, and doesn't go into extreme detail though. Anyway, I'm glad you liked the first two chapters.
Name: Hopeless reviewed
Give Me Danger on Apr 05, 2008 11:17 am
this looks like its going to be quite the interesting story! I'm very anxious to read your next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. THe next chapter should be up soon so I hope you like it!
Name: abby reviewed
Give Me Danger on Apr 05, 2008 10:06 am
Hmm--I love it! please, please, please update!! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I'll try to update as regularly as possible. Thanks.
Name: 0630938 reviewed
Give Me Danger on Apr 05, 2008 05:32 am
OWWWWWW, burn
Author's Response: Yeah, Draco's kind of a jerk, huh? But I still love him. Keep reading!
Name: Kalira reviewed
Give Me Danger on Apr 05, 2008 04:46 am
oh that was a lovely start. I'm definitely going to watch out for more chapters!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement. The new chapter should be up soon, so enjoy!
Name: shaded reviewed
Give Me Danger on Apr 05, 2008 02:07 am
A great first chapter and a promising start to the story. I'm looking forward to seeing what Ginny will make of that almost-kiss with Draco. I wonder why Ginny's hanging around with Blaise now that the Trio are gone.
I hope that there'll be a new chapter soon. :)
Author's Response: The new chapter should be ready soon. It will explain the Blaise/Ginny friendship and hopefully Ginny's plans on what to do about the kiss. Hope you like it! Thanks for the review!
Name: dmgirl1 reviewed
Give Me Danger on Apr 04, 2008 04:22 pm
yay! i love the beginning, please update soon :)
it's awesome :D keep up the good work
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on the second chapter, so it should be up soon! Glad you enjoyed it.
Name: Grneyedminx reviewed
Give Me Danger on Apr 04, 2008 03:27 pm
Good start! I hope you'll do more character depth in the next chapter. =)
Author's Response: Definitely. This first chapter was kind of like a prologue. Thanks for the review.
Name: sweetpop reviewed
Give Me Danger on Apr 04, 2008 01:48 pm
hmm.. seems like you have a good story going! nice first chapter I thought =)
Author's Response: Thanks, I really appreciate it. I love when people enjoy my stuff, so try to review the next few chapters. They will be up soon.