Reviews For The Competition
Name: Grneyedminx reviewed Exploder on Aug 15, 2008 03:16 am
Nice chapter. They just love tormenting, Ron!

Author's Response: Ron's an easy target, lol. But yeah, thanks for the review and the encouragement. Keep it coming!
Name: smarties101 reviewed Exploder on Aug 14, 2008 11:19 am
Noooooo! Please don't kill off Ginny! Please let it be a clever twist! I dont think I could take reading Draco's reaction! Please please please don't kill her!

Author's Response: Okay, before we get all weepy (because having to write that scene hurt), I will say that I love all the characters, but someone's going to bite the big one. Thanks for reviewing!
Name: yomoedmb reviewed Exploder on Aug 13, 2008 09:36 am
It's short! "Our slightly albino friend" I love Blaise, sincerely. I would love him to be my gay friend to protect me and love me like he does Ginny. Faster girl!

Author's Response: I know, I know. It's not a very long chapter, although it did provide some much needed info. But I will be updating much sooner and it will be a much longer chapter this time, scout's honor. Thanks for the review! (I want a Blaise, too!)
Name: hpfreaklk reviewed Exploder on Aug 12, 2008 11:21 pm
NO!
That cannot happen!
Someone will sacrifice themselves to save her. they have to. and when i say that i mean that it will be blaise as he knows!
=[[[[

still brilliant though =]

Author's Response: Yeah, it is a little depressing, huh? But we all knew this was coming, as it was in the warnings. Someone's gotta die! I really appreciate the review! Promises for a faster update!
Name: hotpinker23 reviewed Exploder on Aug 12, 2008 02:49 pm
even i got all teary eyed! you better not let ginny die! maybe make draco suffer like he did when she was in a coma or w/e but don't kill ginny!
Name: Len reviewed Exploder on Aug 12, 2008 11:18 am
The ''Character Death'' worrying me more every chapter.
Blaise sounded in a i'll-give-my-life-for-her-without-thinking-it kind of way, didn't he?
the final battle is there and I don't know if I'm prepared ;)

Author's Response: Well, Blaise has got a little too much martyr in him to be fully Slytherin, doesn't he? Thanks for the review!
Name: bee245 reviewed Exploder on Aug 12, 2008 09:52 am
noooooo!!:O:O
not ginny!!!:O:O

although it would be very poetic.....sigh....

good chapter :)
update soon pleeeease!:D



bee245

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Everyone seems very solid on keeping Ginny alive! Well, you'll all just have to see! Keep reading and reviewing!
Name: laylaelaine reviewed Exploder on Aug 12, 2008 08:52 am
I'm really into this story. I think it's great! I do have one question. Ginny's powers seem alot like Alice from the Twilight Series... Is that where you got it??? Not that it's a bad thing, I really like Ginny having this power.

Author's Response: I did get a lot of inspiration from the Twilight series! I love Stephanie Meyer's books, and so yes, I used a little of it in my own creative way. I'm glad you noticed! Thanks for the review!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Exploder on Aug 12, 2008 07:24 am
great chapter! update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Keep 'em coming!
Name: AutumnKisses402 reviewed Exploder on Aug 12, 2008 07:05 am
Oh my gosh. I really really really hope that Ginny doesn't die! I swear I'll cry. :(!!!!

Great chapter though and I can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement! I'm getting a real feeling that no one wants Ginny to die? lol. I'll try to update asap that way everyone can be one step closer to knowing for sure. Thanks again!
Name: Dracogirl reviewed Exploder on Aug 12, 2008 06:09 am
Okay, please,please,please the following people need to make it through this 'final battle' Draco,Ginny,Blaise,Ron,Hermoine and I guess it would be alright if Harry made it too.

Author's Response: LOL! I love how you added Harry last in that bracket! I can't tell you that everybody makes it through, but I will tell you that you'll find out soon. Keep reading and reviewing!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Daylight on Jul 27, 2008 10:54 am
great chapter update soon!
Name: smarties101 reviewed Daylight on Jul 24, 2008 12:17 am
Hate to be annoying but i cant help myself. In this chapter Arthur inrtoduces himself to Draco at Ginnys hospital bed and Draco says “Nice to meet you, sir" . But later you say they have already met.
Name: Dracogirl reviewed Daylight on Jul 23, 2008 04:03 pm
This was so cute.
Name: hpfreaklk reviewed Daylight on Jul 23, 2008 02:57 pm
hahaha.
Draco is so cute. He's such a softy.
=]
Name: bee245 reviewed Daylight on Jul 23, 2008 02:11 pm
erm.....a few too many 'i love you's'....it loses it's power if you say it too much. and i'm sorry but i kind of laughed out loud when you said that lucius malfoy was sperm doner......

its a good chapter though. you just might want to revise it to get rid of some of the continuity flaws (i thought ginny already told him she loved him?) and just simple stuff like that.

good chapter though :)



bee245
Name: Grneyedminx reviewed Daylight on Jul 23, 2008 02:01 pm
Great chapter!
Name: Nakita reviewed Prayers for Blue Skies on Jul 18, 2008 05:36 pm
AHHH!!! NO! Bad cliffhanger!!! I hope another chapter is up soon or I will go nuts. This was an awesome chapter I loved it!
Name: Dracogirl reviewed Prayers for Blue Skies on Jul 18, 2008 03:44 pm
This chapter was very exciting. I'm a total wuss about blood and fighting so I was okay with the fight scene, but I am a little worried about Ginny's condition.
Name: hpfreaklk reviewed Prayers for Blue Skies on Jul 17, 2008 06:43 pm
woah!
That was exciting and intense and i need Ginny to be better again thank you.
Name: ablaze reviewed Prayers for Blue Skies on Jul 17, 2008 04:32 pm
great story. absolutely amazing! this is the first time ive actually read thru it. i swear ive read the first five chapters six times now. anyway! please continue! i love how you have shoved draco and ginny together and how you have changed them. plus ron and hermione are adorable and its always amusing when harry decides to be a baby. please post soon!

Author's Response: thanks, i'm really glad you're enjoying the story. let me know what you think of the upcoming chapters...
Name: bee245 reviewed Prayers for Blue Skies on Jul 17, 2008 12:47 pm
ahhhhh!!!!:O:O:O

draco is honestly like.....wow. i wish he was real :(....

but the fight scene passed a little quickly. try expanding it.

please update soon!



bee245

Author's Response: Sometimes I drool just dreaming about what would happen if Draco was real... In the future I'll try to expand my fight scenes, sorry about that. But thanks for the review! Keep 'em coming!
Name: Ananyamous reviewed Prayers for Blue Skies on Jul 17, 2008 09:25 am
Wooo! That was a lot of action!

Author's Response: Thanks, I think... Please keep reading and reviewing!
Name: AutumnKisses402 reviewed Prayers for Blue Skies on Jul 17, 2008 07:01 am
Awwhh. I hope Ginny doesn't die. That would be way too sad. :( Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Yeah, no one else does either for some reason. You'll find out as soon as I can write the next few chapters, I promise! Keep reading and reviewing!
Name: Grneyedminx reviewed Prayers for Blue Skies on Jul 17, 2008 04:56 am
Good descriptions! I know you can be more specific though! Try to add a bit more detail to the fight scenes in the future. Maybe try branching out to some of the other characters as well. It flew by a bit too fast.

Overall, you did great! Keep up the wonderful work!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and the tips. This is the first extended fic I've written, so I need a bit of help. Keep reviewing!
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