Name: bee245 reviewed Give Her Your Attention on Apr 27, 2008 09:50 am
haha thats great!:D

keep it up!:D



bee245

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you like it!
Name: oxymoron8 reviewed Give Her Your Attention on Apr 27, 2008 06:51 am
Great chapter. Love un-sure Draco. I like it. I read it over at portkey and didn't review. Poor Draco never had pizza before at least she helped him open his eyes to it. The quotes at the top is Blaise's advice right? When are we going to see him?

Author's Response: How could someone live without pizza? I had to intervene.rnrnThanks for the review!
Name: Hiddenangel reviewed Give Her Your Attention on Apr 27, 2008 04:34 am
Lol, Draco is so funny, loved the chapter.

Author's Response: Any life without pizza, is no life at all..
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Give Her Your Attention on Apr 27, 2008 03:37 am
hahahha. this cracks me up. lovin' it! update soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad I can keep you entertained!
Name: mahek210 reviewed Give Her Your Attention on Apr 26, 2008 09:45 pm
hey good going!!waiting 4 more incidents like these(smiles cheekily)lolz

Author's Response: I promise there will be more incidents!
Name: Rashonda reviewed Back Yourself Up on Apr 24, 2008 11:18 pm
I am really enjoying the pace of the story, especially the slight and realistic awkwardness that occurs during their conversations. GJ.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!rnrnI feel like the majority of my conversations are at least slightly awkward (often totally awkward)!
Name: Pipperstorms reviewed Back Yourself Up on Apr 23, 2008 08:39 am
Very cute story so far, and I like what Blaise has told him ;-)

Author's Response: Blaise is a pretty smart guy. Maybe he should teach a mandatory class to all with the Y-chromosome!
Name: 0630938 reviewed Back Yourself Up on Apr 23, 2008 02:15 am
ahhhh KAWAIIII would be my first reaction
but Oh dear lord Jesus, the confession draco made was just sooo deep like who would have thought some doctors could be having a power trip while saving a life, it's great to know it's not all about goodness of heart

Author's Response: I rewrote that scene a couple of times. I couldn't make Draco come out right. Eventually, I happily settled on the one you read.rnrnThanks for your review!!!
Name: joliefille reviewed Back Yourself Up on Apr 22, 2008 05:41 pm
Oooh that explains it. I'm really curious how the hell he figured out what number she was thinking of...Is Draco a Legilimens? Everything keeps getting curiouser and curiouser.

Author's Response: I'll never tell. Well, I take that back. I probably will. Just not now! :o)rnrnThanks for the review!
Name: aizak reviewed Back Yourself Up on Apr 22, 2008 02:55 pm
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! And I also admire the way you update so quickly! I just adore this fic! It's definetly goin on my Favorites! Thanks for such a wonderful fic!

Author's Response: I'd love to continue the charade that I am a quick updater, but it really just have to do with when I get an idea. I find it very difficult to write on cue (which makes writing papers a very big annoyance!).rnrnThanks for your review!!!
Name: ronlover reviewed Back Yourself Up on Apr 22, 2008 01:40 pm
*grins* I like this chapter too! Update as soon as you can.

Hope your finals go well! Good luck.

Author's Response: Thanks!!!
Name: kittykat91419 reviewed Back Yourself Up on Apr 22, 2008 08:58 am
:) I should pass this one on to my boyfriend!

Author's Response: I was thinking the same thing!! :o)
Name: TwistedPixie reviewed Back Yourself Up on Apr 22, 2008 08:32 am
another huge grin has appeared on my face again. you seem to have a knack for making it appear.

a lovely chapter, i liked the reason why draco went to be a healer, it was different from the usual, 'my father was killing them, so i saved them' or whatever normally comes out. but again, lovely chapter. well done, cant wait for more!!

xx

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!rnrnFor some reason, I love Draco as a healer. My favorite stories have him in that role, so it seems natural that I'd write him in the same role.
Name: dristi reviewed Back Yourself Up on Apr 21, 2008 11:11 pm
hi, pls update soon! the story is different and refreshing!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story! I'll definitely try to update soon!
Name: shaded reviewed Back Yourself Up on Apr 21, 2008 08:56 pm
Hehe, I like persistent!Draco. I'm curious to know whether Draco used legilimancy to find out Ginny's number.
Ginny was rather crafty to come out with the “So, Draco, I’m curious as to why you asked for this little dinner date,” so suddenly. I'd like to think she timed it so that he was drinking at that precise moment. :D

I like how Draco just burst out with his true motivations for becoming a Healer just as they were saying goodbye. It's clear that he wants her to think well of him, as she seemed rather disappointed with his previous answer.

By the way, there's a typo in the last line: "You're welcome," instead of "Your".

Good luck with those finals!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! (And for catching my typos... I used the right one just now, though. I like to think that I learn from my mistakes!)rnrnAlso, thanks for the well wishes with my finals! One down, four to go!
Name: babigurlchels reviewed Back Yourself Up on Apr 21, 2008 04:53 pm
i'd like to see the next chapter soon, looks good so far

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review! I promise I'll try to get that next chapter out soon!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Back Yourself Up on Apr 21, 2008 04:40 pm
yay! update soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad you want to read the next chapter! That's reassuring! :o)
Name: oxymoron8 reviewed Back Yourself Up on Apr 21, 2008 04:12 pm
I hope...Great chapter. I cannot wait to see what else you have planned... Maybe a never go to bed angry or something... Hope to see more...

Author's Response: You'll definitely see more!
Name: ronlover reviewed Follow Her on Apr 21, 2008 02:36 pm
Cute. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed Follow Her on Apr 21, 2008 01:44 pm
It is a bit sparse, and lacking in characterization, however I am going to stick with it and see where it goes, I can feel the romance floating in the air!

Author's Response: Thanks for sticking it out!rnrnIt's a bit sparse in characterization right now because I don't want the story to be bogged down with exposition. Therefore, most of the characterization is going to come from the glimpses into the relationship!rnrnI'd love to hear what else you have to say!
Name: shaded reviewed Follow Her on Apr 21, 2008 01:39 pm
*squeals* I love this story!

You've got Draco and Ginny's characters expressed so well. You did very well with showing just how volatile Ginny was at the beginning.

There is a faint line between getting angry and being in a blinding rage, and Ginny knew that she was flirting with it.

The dialogue is very natural and realistic and there's a great balance between that and the narrative thoughts of the characters. Although Draco singing Happy Birthday seemed quite odd, I totally don't mind, as the rest of the chapter was brilliant.

And Blaise truly is a genius; a man should never let a woman walk away from him mad; it'd give time for her to come up with countless ways for exacting revenge. ;D

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!rnrnYes, you never want to let the wheels turn to freely. Women are creative suckers!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Follow Her on Apr 21, 2008 11:45 am
brilliance! haha.

Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: TwistedPixie reviewed Follow Her on Apr 21, 2008 04:35 am
that was so cute. i had this huge smile on my face when it finished reading it. well done.
xx

Author's Response: I aim to please!!
Name: Iliana_r reviewed Follow Her on Apr 21, 2008 04:33 am
Don't worry for that, it was very sweet from him to sing!

Author's Response: Whew! I'm glad you aren't too angry! Thanks for the review!!
Name: joliefille reviewed Follow Her on Apr 20, 2008 10:07 pm
Aww, he's so sweet. And I can't wait for more of that character development; they both seem intriguing. How did they get to be healers? and he her boss?

Author's Response: If I told you, well, I think you know what I'd have to do. :o)
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