Name: deadsnowwhite reviewed
Eat Ice Cream. on Jun 06, 2008 05:45 pm
lol i love this chapter i think it should be in plated in gold and put on dispaly in every art gallray lol^_^
Name: D_Rad_88 reviewed
Eat Ice Cream. on Jun 06, 2008 04:29 pm
LOL. This chapter was just great. I'm REALLY loving this story. Draco's and Ginny's confrontations are just too funny. I can't wait for the next one!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Eat Ice Cream. on Jun 06, 2008 04:14 pm
haha. lovin' this! can't wait for more!
Name: graceliness reviewed
Uncover a Deep, Dark Secret. on Jun 06, 2008 11:53 am
HA.
Screw eternalhope08, that's my ff.net sn...but it's still me! AND YOUR FIC IS STILL AWESOME.
and it's also a featured story on dg.com. feel honored, love :).
re-reading it, it makes me smile as always. i love love love love loveee youuuuu!
Name: fairydust123 reviewed
Uncover a Deep, Dark Secret. on Jun 03, 2008 04:25 am
Ohh, I love it :)
So cute and sweet ^^
I hope you update soon! :)
Name: mahek210 reviewed
Uncover a Deep, Dark Secret. on Jun 02, 2008 09:39 pm
lolzz seriously now wht???love d way ur story is progressing!!gud work!!update soon!!:)
Name: slygal reviewed
Uncover a Deep, Dark Secret. on Jun 02, 2008 05:42 pm
that was funny! I love that he shows a weakness and they take direct advantage!
Name: CCC reviewed
Uncover a Deep, Dark Secret. on Jun 02, 2008 11:51 am
This is cute. I'm enjoying it . The idea of Draco being terrified of a cat is quite amusing.
Name: laylaelaine reviewed
Uncover a Deep, Dark Secret. on Jun 02, 2008 09:36 am
OOhhh I'm highly amused by Draco's prediciment.
Name: shaded reviewed
Uncover a Deep, Dark Secret. on Jun 02, 2008 09:22 am
“Hmm, I see, so you’re an acquired preference,” she said, nodding pensively, “Like Brussels sprouts. Or goat cheese.”
Oh how I love that line. :D Draco's nonchalant comment after his undignified shriek is also brilliant.
This story was one of my favourites on the dgfixexchange, so it's great fun reading it again. I'm glad you added this part to the story; it's definitely one of my favourite parts.
Name: PinkHotChilepepa reviewed
Uncover a Deep, Dark Secret. on Jun 02, 2008 09:13 am
I've just read your fic so far, and I think it's really good - I love your descriptions in the first chapter. I can't say that I've ever met anyone who was scared of cats but I think your portrayal of Draco's reaction is excellent - it really made me laugh!
Name: dristi reviewed
Uncover a Deep, Dark Secret. on Jun 02, 2008 03:00 am
hi, amazing story! but this chapter is way too short! pls update soon
Name: Deian reviewed
Uncover a Deep, Dark Secret. on Jun 02, 2008 02:36 am
Liking it so far. it's light hearted and definitely sweet. Good dialogue between the characters and Draco is believable
Name: ZSF reviewed
Uncover a Deep, Dark Secret. on Jun 01, 2008 06:45 pm
Haha! Great story! I love love love how Ron's Ginny's connection to Malfoy. I mean, usually he's the one who despises him with all his heart, and all that.
Great story!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Uncover a Deep, Dark Secret. on Jun 01, 2008 03:44 pm
wow really? that's great! hi-larious!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Make Mud Pies. Stick Pins in Voodoo Dolls. on Jun 01, 2008 02:42 pm
this is really good can't wait for more!
Name: snowfelon reviewed
Make Mud Pies. Stick Pins in Voodoo Dolls. on May 26, 2008 06:39 pm
haha hey just wanted to drop a note to say that I'm enjoying your story very much, especially that last adorable bit where she stabbed the doll =)
Name: shaded reviewed
Make Mud Pies. Stick Pins in Voodoo Dolls. on May 26, 2008 02:22 pm
Lol! That last part is great; a girl's gotta let out her aggression and anger somehow. ;D
By the way, just a little Britpick: in the UK, we don't call sports tops jerseys. They are called shirts (e.g. football shirt, or Quidditch shirt, etc.).
Name: shaded reviewed
Read a Book that You Love. on May 26, 2008 02:16 pm
He looked...human, almost. So she decided to act humanly in return.
That line is one I particularly liked. The whole scene is a great one; Ginny stiffening at Draco's remark and and the subsequent part was very well written. I could feel the awkward tension in the air.
Name: Grneyedminx reviewed
Read a Book that You Love. on May 22, 2008 02:55 pm
Another good one. I like how you use a different way to fall out of love as the chapter title. How fitting.
In the future, I would like to see some further character development in the case of our heroine.
Looking forward to more...
Author's Response: Thanks for taking note of how I titled the chapters- I think it's one of my favorite things about this fic :) Thank you for reviewing!
Name: Grneyedminx reviewed
Commencement at Dusk on May 22, 2008 02:47 pm
Good first chapter. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter or two is up, if you'd like to read more ^_^
Name: Citrus587 reviewed
Read a Book that You Love. on May 21, 2008 04:11 pm
I'm really enjoying this story. The overall topic is extremely relateable! :o)
Author's Response: Aw thank you! The plot bunny for this entire fic actually came from something my friend (who's also the beta for this fic, actually) said, and I put a lot of my own experiences into Ginny for this fic, so yeah, I also think that the overall theme is really relateable to a lot of people, especially overemotional girls like me :) Thanks for reviewing!
Name: D_Rad_88 reviewed
Read a Book that You Love. on May 21, 2008 02:31 pm
This is going great. I'm glad that Draco was actually nice and didn't make fun of Ginny when he realized that Harry did break up with her. It'll make it easier for them to be friends. I can't wait for the next chapter. Any hopes of it being longer?
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! And I just submitted the next chapter, so it'll be up soon- after it's approved. And I'm afraid that it's about the same length as the couple first ones. I made the opening chapters shorter so I could set up the scene and plots and all that jazz, but I promise, soon enough the chapters will be so long you'll be begging for something shorter. Thank you again for reviewing!
Name: Citrus587 reviewed
Commencement at Dusk on May 20, 2008 09:52 am
The chapter ended at the perfect spot! I loved it! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! The next few chapters are up, if you feel like reading more and, you know, reviewing too ;-)
Name: sly_princess reviewed
Commencement at Dusk on May 16, 2008 10:22 pm
I really like your first chapter! It is very interesting and will surely keep me waiting for your next chapter. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you for the review! I'm glad you liked the beginning. I'm working on getting other chapters uploaded so they'll be up soon :)