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Name: yanmaneee reviewed His Pain on Dec 24, 2021 11:23 pm
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Name: rowan_greenleaf reviewed His Pain on Dec 28, 2008 09:13 am

This fic was recommended to me! ^_^

I'm enjoying it very much so far. I like the easy D/G interaction you have going here. Very nice! You're a good writer.

I'm intrigued by this beat-up!Ginny bit at the end. Was it Jared? Hmm...

*scurries off to read more*



Author's Response: Oh, really? That's so flattering! Thank you so much, and I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm assuming you haven't finished yet?
Name: laylaelaine reviewed His Pain on Dec 22, 2008 02:20 pm
What an amazing story! It was great! I loved the plot, and the characters fit perfectly.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am so happy that you liked it, and I'm glad the story was executed well. Happy holidays!
Name: lookwhatidid reviewed His Pain on Dec 22, 2008 10:42 am
Fantastic story! I really loved how you portrayed the relationship between Ginny and Draco, their banter made the dialogue humorous and wonderful to read! The ending was very cute, I really enjoyed how everything was wrapped up. Amazing fic! =]

Author's Response: Thank you so-so much! I really appreciate your words, and I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!
Name: sweetpop reviewed His Pain on Dec 20, 2008 12:25 pm
I love the two contrasting characters of D and G, but how it doesn't get in the way of them being such good friends :) this first chapter has proved to be very interesting; eagerly awaiting the following chapters!

Author's Response: Thanks! I try hard to make sure they don't go OOC, but it's hard to develop a relationship without it. Thanks again!
Name: MemoriesToLast reviewed His Pain on Dec 20, 2008 07:29 am
Excellent, I think you've charactarised both Ginny and Draco brilliantly! Update soon!!

MTL

Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Name: laylaelaine reviewed His Pain on Dec 19, 2008 03:56 pm
Oooo, It's really really good, and I can't wait to read more! Are you going to be able to update on Wednesday? They're closing submisions for awhile.

Author's Response: Thanks so many time! Yes, I've been reminded about that, and I decided to just speed up the process and have the entire story up for the holiday break.
Name: AutumnKisses402 reviewed His Pain on Dec 19, 2008 11:13 am
Very interesting beginning. I like it. It leaves me with a lot of questions I'm sure you'll answer in later chapter. ;)

Author's Response: So many thanks! I hope I do answer them, but if I don't, please ask me.
Name: LiveLaughLove reviewed His Pain on Dec 19, 2008 10:25 am
I really like the idea of this- I love seeing Ginny and Draco as friends with sexual tension, haha. I like their relationship- keep it up.

Author's Response: Me, too! It's exciting to write and to read, in my opinion, but so scary to develop. Thank you, and I will try to keep it perfect.
Name: psyche reviewed His Pain on Dec 18, 2008 10:18 pm
Loved it! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! =)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Name: citrusabby reviewed His Pain on Dec 18, 2008 08:15 pm
Aw, great chapter. I like the idea of them starting off as best friends.

Author's Response: I like it, too, I think it's just more fun to work with. Thanks!
Name: katelyn_d_89 reviewed His Pain on Dec 18, 2008 06:09 pm
Okay, so this is intriguing. I'm really looking forward to your update!

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: lookwhatidid reviewed His Pain on Dec 18, 2008 03:47 pm

This is really intriguing so far, I can't wait to read more of your writing! I truly enjoy fics that involve Ginny and Draco as best mates; some consider it highly out of character, but I love reading it! Fantastic job!

Will you be able to post the rest of your chapters during the two week submission break? I hope so, I can't wait for the next chapter! =]



Author's Response: Thank you bunches! I didn't used to have as much of an appreciation for these plots as I do now, and I've been working hard on this one! It is out of character, I suppose, but stranger things happen! Someone else mentioned the posting schedule, and I'll have to check with the Cabals to make sure; if, indeed, FIA will be off-line, then I'll update these at a much faster pace!
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed His Pain on Dec 18, 2008 01:06 pm
I love this story. It is really wonderful. I do have a question about your posting schedule, are you going to be able to post even when submission is down?

Author's Response: Ha! Coincidentally, I love it, too; this is one of my more heartfelt pieces, because I really did it on a whim, and everything had an in-the-moment feel to it. Thank you for mentioning that, I completely forgot, actually. I'll check up on it, and if I am not able to update during that period, then I'll just post the chapters before it begins.
Name: doc_3 reviewed His Pain on Dec 18, 2008 11:30 am
Very interesting beginning. Look forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed His Pain on Dec 18, 2008 11:10 am
this is really good. i hope you're one of those people that update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! I do update frequently, and I check up on my readers' opinions often, because I've learned from the mistakes of authors who abandon their stories and frustrate their readers.
Name: LadySalmon reviewed His Pain on Dec 18, 2008 09:09 am
I like it. I like it a lot. Draco is sexy. Sexy sexy sexy. Well written, I liked Ginny's explosion about Fred, I liked the way you wrote it. Very very good. Five stars.

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! That is truly how I wanted to portray Draco, actually, and I'm so glad it worked! Draco is always sexy. I didn't belabor the Fred scene too much, because I thought it would pull focus away from the scene, but thank you! I can't thank you enough, that is the sweetest review ever!
Name: KG1 reviewed His Pain on Dec 18, 2008 02:33 am
WOW!
I can't believe she didn't tell Draco. Well, I mean, I can. But I wished she didn't.

Good job! Can't wait for the next update!!!!!

Author's Response: Yes! I like to think that there are still some things that they keep from each other, because, you know, they aren't D/G yet! Thanks so much!
Name: slitherhither reviewed His Pain on Dec 18, 2008 12:24 am
I love the contrast between Draco's gentle, if sometimes gruff, treatment of her and her obvious mistreatment by Jaret. The last two lines of the chapter are beautiful, as are many within it. Bravo.

Author's Response: Well, I won't go into it at the moment, because the story isn't finished yet, but yes, that is the idea! Ha! Thank you so much!
Name: Nakita reviewed His Pain on Dec 17, 2008 07:00 pm
I really like this so far!! I can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: Thank you! You're definitely getting one!
Name: silver rose reviewed His Pain on Dec 17, 2008 06:50 pm
omg! awesome! i love stories that start out with draco/ ginny being friends...can't wait for the next!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I like them, too, and recently something just really inspired me about the idea, so I put pen on paper, figuratively, as soon as I could.
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed His Pain on Dec 17, 2008 05:45 pm
I'm confused. What's going on here? I don't understand what's happening between the scenes.

Author's Response: These are vignettes, actually, and nothing special is going on in-between the scenes, therefore they aren't in the story.
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