Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed Chapter 18 on Jan 02, 2011 12:52 pm
love the kitchen scene..
Name: Cyrens_Myth reviewed Chapter 18 on Aug 20, 2009 10:48 am
The kiss scene was pure perfection. Wondering what will happen between them next?

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you think it was perfect!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Chapter 18 on Aug 17, 2009 09:39 am
I DID like that. I knew it wasn't really Draco's birthday. :)

Author's Response: :) Thank you!
Name: vreggli reviewed Chapter 18 on Jul 28, 2009 06:15 am
wonderful, extremly wonderful :) Love your story!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Name: NB72 reviewed Chapter 18 on Jul 27, 2009 09:39 pm
I've been reading you story for awhile but can never write long reviews. If I enjoy a story I keep coming back and so here I stay. Awesome work! I love the little D/G action! Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I know what you mean. I'm glad you like it!
Name: merriza reviewed Chapter 18 on Jul 27, 2009 09:01 pm
Ha that's a great trick; I'm going to have to try it :)
I've decided I really like the lengths of your chapters as it makes them so much easier to read.
Brilliant chapter and the kiss wasn't quite as cliched as some, which was good.
Keep it up. Merry ;)

Author's Response: Lol! Thank you!
Name: 4everdandg reviewed Chapter 18 on Jul 27, 2009 12:00 pm
I love this chapter...

especially when Draco was waiting for the kiss. I think it was so sweet of him to wait & 'analyze' Ginny's eyes ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Name: readhead1755 reviewed Chapter 18 on Jul 26, 2009 07:12 pm
yay! finally!

Author's Response: Lol!
Name: xLovelyLollypopx reviewed Chapter 18 on Jul 26, 2009 06:47 pm
:]

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: psyche reviewed Chapter 18 on Jul 26, 2009 05:33 pm
*squeal* LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT! More please! Definitely my favorite chapter so far! Two thumbs up for you! =D

Author's Response: Lol! Thank you bunches!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Chapter 18 on Jul 26, 2009 03:05 pm
YAY!
Yes I liked it!
I liked it very much...the snake hug spell was a nice adition, different from the usual striding and holding, but a good different.
It was a great kiss, thankfully she fell for it, better yet he gave her a real kiss and better still...they kissed AGAIN!!!
It was great, really amazing scene!
You did a great job!
=D
The birthday trick is great...always works in real life so it's nice to know it works in fic world as well!
;)


i hope to see more soon!
Don't skip this scene, let them spend a little more time in the kitchen before leaving...in fact the next chapter should happen in the kitchen, they missed dinner after all, right? =)

HOpe to see more soon!!!

Kisses

Author's Response: Thanks so much! And your suggestion is a good one... really made me stop and think... but I already wrote the next chapter and didn't do that. Anyway, I'm glad you like it and I'll post again soon!
Name: marahlynn reviewed Chapter 18 on Jul 26, 2009 02:43 pm
ooooo i like that tension right before the kiss, something about the prowling draco just gets me every time! well done!

Author's Response: Thanks! I know what you mean! He's just so awesome like that!
Name: Rosalie reviewed Chapter 18 on Jul 26, 2009 01:02 pm
Yes, your kiss scene was very well written, especially as it is their first kiss scene. It was innocent and mostly chaste though Draco was eager for some tongue, which isn't a surprise. He is Draco Malfoy after all. Well done with the whole chapter really. I'm so glad they're finally getting somewhere and that you didn't make her concerns with her family too long and consuming. You got the point across without pointless prattle, OMG he's a MALFOY thinking. It was very cute and realistic. And can I just say how much I love your regular updates?

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! I figured she'd spent enough time in the last 17 chapters thinking about how he was a Malfoy and she and her family hated him so much that I didn't really need to beat it to death in this one. Besides... I wanted to get to that kiss! ;)
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