Name: Cyrens_Myth reviewed Chapter 21 on Aug 20, 2009 06:54 pm
Cuteness. Wondering what will happen next? Can't wait to find out. What's everyone going to say around school?

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: Rosalie reviewed Chapter 21 on Aug 09, 2009 12:02 pm
I don't think it's choppy at all, really well-written in fact. Great job with this and I'm so glad that they're finally together!

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: psyche reviewed Chapter 21 on Aug 08, 2009 06:32 pm
Thanks a million for the quick update! And for making my day with this update. =) I don't think it's choppy at all. I LOVED it! My favorite part --> "Ginny grabbed his collar in both hands and pulled his face down to within inches of her own. She fought to keep a straight face as his eyes widened in surprise. “Don’t you think I had everything under control?” she asked in a low voice.

Before he could say anything in response, she leaned forward and planted a fierce kiss on his lips. He only hesitated for a second before pulling her tightly to his chest and returning her kiss."

Keep more of those coming! =D Great job by the way! Can't wait to know what will happen next.

Author's Response: That's my favourite part, too!! I had so much fun! I'm so glad you liked it, and I'll post again really soon.
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