Ngaaaww. Poor bubba
Author's Response: They're both in a pretty awful state at this point. :( Thanks for reviewing!
That's sooooo adorable >.
Author's Response: Baby Luna and Ginny are super cute! ;_;
Uh...wow! The circle is officially complete. That was wonderful!
Author's Response: Thank you for all the lovely reviews! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! n_n
Luna's ministrations about their passion was just beautiful.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it!
Wow such a powerful chapter. Love the kiss, it deserved an award.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you liked it! :D
Good chapter. The varied time frames makes this story all the more interesting.
Author's Response: I was afraid all the POVs and settings would make the story seem too choppy or confusing, but I'm glad you think this format works! :D
Love the start and Luna's POV.
Author's Response: Thanks! This is actually my favorite chapter in the whole story. :D
This was very cute, and almost plausible.... :)
Author's Response: Well, thank you! I'm glad you think so! n_n
This is a wonderful, wonderful story! :)
Author's Response: Awwww. Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
I lovelovelove this. Can't believe I haven't managed to read this before. The bit where Draco was getting ready to leave because he didn't think she would accept broke me. This is beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it! n_n
I loved how you wrote this. I always thought kisses had to describe the action but by describing the emotion instead, you took it to a whole new level.
The idea that Luna would give this as a gift is very realistic. It's unconvetional, but a sturdy reminder of what they've been through, and how they did fall in love.
This was an amazing piece, Jess. I loved it, and I am so glad I decided to read it. You did an amazing job with the original request, and you deserved the rewards you got for it.
Author's Response: Thanks, Kristi! This is the story I think I'm most proud of, and maybe my favorite I've ever written. Somehow, it just fell in place and worked, even though I was working under a deadline, which I'm usually horrible at making. :P I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the review!
a great plot!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :D
This was amazing Idod, will be back to read this again.
STT
Author's Response: Thank you, STT! :D I'm glad you liked it. ^^
so great! thanks for the read.
Author's Response: You're welcome! I'm glad you liked it. ^^
This was so adorable! Very clever plot!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :D
I love this! This story is just so sweet and perfect for Draco and Ginny! I can't wait to read more of your stories! :)
Author's Response: :D Thanks so much!
Bravo! I really loved the ending. Good Luck with future writing! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :D
The picnic was awesome :D "Does she eat all your food?"
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Nicely written. Young Luna makes me smile, especially how she likes oddity in others. Cool teaser prologue.
Author's Response: Hee. Thanks! I really liked writing young Luna. :)
This is sooo beautifully written! *sigh* great job at capturing The Hallowed Draco Ginny chemistry! I loved your analogy about the wood and fire...very very deep and describes their relationship perfectly.
I just love the way you have written Luna, possibly the best Luna that I have read in years.
My favourite part is of their childhood though,their interactions were beautifully written...and I especially loved the way you described young Draco with slicked hair resembling a drowned cat Lol! Also kudos to you for writing Astoria's character so well :)
All in all, a fresh and novel attempt and very thoughtful with a twist . Loved it for sure! *big grin*
Author's Response: :D I think I like the short Deathly Hallows part best. I don't know, I kind of like Draco beaten down like that, which is why I was so disappointed when his character wasn't redeemed in DH. :( I'm glad you liked it! Thanks so much!
I will be sad to see it go. I really liked this chapter. I can't wait to read more. Good Luck! :)
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! :D
I agree with CCC when she says this is a very different and refreshing idea for a fic. I'm eager to read more! Slightly OOC, but I'm OCD about that...hahah. Great start!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Hahaha. Who do you think is out of character? This story was nominated for both Best Draco and Best Ginny, but I would probably agree with you. XD
Wow this is such a great story. I love how it’s all coming together through the memories Luna is collecting. I can’t wait to read more, please update soon :- )
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D
Another really great chapter! :) I've fallen in love with this story!
Just one small correction....
October 22, 1997
Pansy still remembered the unfortunate conversation she had overheard at the beginning of seventh year a few months later as she walked down the same corridor, with Draco by her side.
If the confrontational kiss took place in May, than it would have been in Pansy's sixth year not her seventh.
Other than that it was lovely! Looking forward to more soon! :)
Author's Response: Gah! How could I do that? Haha. I'll fix it as soon as the editing option is available again. I think the time line confused me. :) Thanks for pointing that out, and for the review! Author's Response: Oh! I see what I did there. There should probably be a comma before "at." She didn't overhear the conversation at the beginning of seventh year, she remembered hearing at the beginning of seventh year. But now I see that that's not very clear, so I'll change it when I can. Thanks again!
this is great, very intriguing, can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so. :)