Name: slitherhither reviewed Chapter 2 on Jan 20, 2010 02:52 am
Wow. That was delightful, funny, and, while about cheese, decidedly (okay, I can't stop myself; I have to say it) not cheesy.

Author's Response: Haha, thank you. Exactly what I was going for - although, would you believe it, that pun never occured to me in the process of writing it?
Name: Incognito reviewed Chapter 2 on Nov 02, 2009 01:27 pm
I must say, again, that I think you did a truly wonderful and creative job here. Your narrative is truly unique and original.

Needless to say, Vicky, you have a gift.

~Lia

Author's Response:

You are way too kind.

As if I care though, you can keep the compliments coming all you want. ;)

Thanks.

Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Chapter 2 on Oct 25, 2009 11:55 am
good story, interestingly written, but i enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Thanks.
Name: shaded reviewed Chapter 2 on Oct 24, 2009 04:40 pm
Yay, I love that you've carried on with this narrator. I had thought you were going to stop after the first chapter and go to "normal" prose. This is much more fun. :D

I look forward to reading more of the story.

Author's Response:

I thought it was way more fun too. ;P After writing the first part like that, it would have been so boring to go back to a normal voice. I just couldn't do it.

I'm sorry, but this is it. The story is now complete. I don't know where you got the impression that there would be any more, but I've got nothing more to give you.

Name: twiddlekinks reviewed Chapter 2 on Oct 23, 2009 11:16 pm
Very cute, in a whiling-beguiling-smiling sort of way. Tongue-in-cheek (as in... what's in this cheek?), too. hehe Great job! :)

Author's Response: Hahaha, just what I was going for. Thank you!
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