Name: libellule reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 19, 2010 03:48 am

“(...)I absolutely refuse to allow you to have sex fantasies about that Malfoy git in our office!”

No one can blame Ginny for daydreaming about Draco :)

I really like your story

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

Name: Jack Tamara reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 18, 2010 02:58 pm

This is so cute! I really loved the ending. this had the perfect combination of physical and emotional balance of chemistry between the two. I also wanted to tell you that I found your other story on ff.net Standing in a Circle of QUiet, and I really liked it! It had a really good mystery and I found myself questioning Draco's true loyalties. That story was just so cute and made me all fuzzy inside. I just thought I should tell you that. :) GOod job and please update soon!

XOXO, JT

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review! And I'm flattered that you tracked my other story down. I've been revising it for a while now and was thinking of posting it on here, too. If you have ANY suggestions, corrections, etc (I know there are some plot holes and I'm working on them) I would REALLY appreciate it!

Name: choravenclaw reviewed Chapter 4 on Jan 18, 2010 12:27 pm

“Dinner, maybe? You’re the one who said you had another story to write.”
“I do have another story to write, but I’ve been writing all day. Maybe we can meet up sometime early next week? I don’t mean to seem ungrateful for your cooperation, but it’s the weekend, and-” He raised a hand to stop her.
“I understand. I’ll contact you Monday morning,” he replied, turning and preparing to cross the street again. Was that disappointment in his voice? she wondered.

OH!
Poor Draco!
He really made an efforrt and she completely blew him off!
I hope she remedies things or i'll be really pissed with her!


“Wait!” she called out to him before she could change her mind. He stopped and turned to face her. “We, well, I suppose, if you aren’t busy or something,” she paused, feeling silly and took a breath before starting again. “I don’t have any plans, really. I was just going to go home and make some pasta. If you aren’t busy, you’re welcome to come along.”

YAY!
=D
i'm back to loving Gin-gin!
PLUS, i looooove when there's cooking involved in any fic, even if it's a batch of cookies it already makes me happy.
=)
I just think there's something really sexy about it.



Ginny had been cooking for a while now and everything was nearly finished. When they had first arrived at her apartment, she had felt slightly unnerved at having Malfoy in her personal space, but he had resigned himself to the living room, fascinated with the Muggle television set her father had given her when she moved in.

GRRR!!
I'm mad at Arthur for giving her the TV!
I thought she would be cooking and he would be sitting by the kitchen table or sth and she would ask him to taste the sauce or another thing like it taht would leade to a kiss.
[OOOHH!!! Could we have that scene later? PLLLEEEEEASEEE?????]


she had removed her robes and heels while she cooked, rolling up the sleeves of her white dress shirt. The topmost buttons of her shirt were undone, giving Draco a glimpse of her creamy flesh. Her shiny red hair was falling around her face in gentle curls.
The alcohol made his vision blur slightly and she looked almost angelic. He wanted to reach out and touch her face, but was afraid the action would break the spell she seemed to have over him.
“What about the youngest Weasley?” he whispered. “Is she happy?”


NOT BREATHING!
NOT BREATHING!
NOT BREATHING!

THIS is the kind of scene that even when a kiss DOESN't happen, it's totally worth living!
Just the rush of of having him look at her, aprasing her whole body.
Then he goes and says something like this!
I can't believe she's still breathing!
only under the infkuence of alcohol she would be able to take this without melting or throwing herself at him!


“You’re surrounded by people, but you’re lonely.You have the things you always wanted, but you’re lonely. You lie down at night, and you’re alone. I know, because it’s how I feel as well,” she said in a voice so low he had to lean towards her to hear.

WOW!
What an invitation!...and a confession.
It's nice to see them as equals instead of completely different people.
They understand each other and know how they feel.
I think it's great!


Everything was fuzzy and he knew it was hopeless to try to make sense of anything. The close proximity of her body was doing things to his mind, or maybe it was the alcoholic haze, or her scent. Or the way her impossibly soft hand lightly brushed his cheek, or the way she stole his breath when she pulled his head down to her smooth lips.

OH MY GOD!!!
i can't believe you stopped HERE!
THAT's a HUUUUUUUGE cliff!
The biggest one i've ever seen!
Can you please update soon?[preferably within the next hour or so]
I'm going insane here, trying to find out what's going to happen?
Is she gonna push him away?
Is he gonna "come to his senses" and stop?
Are they going to kiss?
If they kiss is he going to apologize?
Is she going to end it and say it was a mistake?

i'm too crazy with ideas of what could happen!!!
please don't take so long to update, now it's a crucial moment and i'll go completely insane if i don't find out what happens soon enough!
=S



GGRRRREAT chapter, loved almost everything about it
Scratch that, i loved everything aboutit, excpet the fact that Arthur gave Gin a TV and Draco just sat there watching it, the pasta sauce is not my favorite either...THe cliff got me crazy for more, but that's not exaclty a bad thing.


Thank you so much for this!
It was really really great!
=D
I loved every sceond she spent with him and with Lucy[i just love their talk/banter]

Please don't forget about us and update soon!
i'm dying to see what happens next!
=D



kisses

Author's Response: Worlds. Best. Reviewer. Thanks so much! This review actually made me laugh out loud a couple times! I really appreciate you taking the time to leave such a thorough review. You're the best! On a sad note: only one more chapter to go!