Name: lilactree reviewed Chapter 5 on Jan 24, 2010 12:59 am
I really liked the plot in this fic, fast paced and all. You absolutely nailed the fire and ice characters that we all love. They only thing that struck me as slightly off was Ginny's maturity. She had some mannerisms of her teenager self (heated/dramatic) rather than her mid-20s self (passionate/self control).
Though all in all it is an enjoyable read. Can't wait to read more stories!!!
Name: Dracogirl reviewed Chapter 5 on Jan 20, 2010 09:36 pm
A lovely story. I loved the ending, but I wish it was a little bit longer. I like your writing so I'm off to ff.net to read your other story.

P.S. I like the name you had for this story on ff.net, really cute.
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed Chapter 5 on Jan 20, 2010 08:28 pm
a lovely ending to a great story....
Name: libellule reviewed Chapter 5 on Jan 20, 2010 02:29 am
Draco Malfoy is whistling? Hehe... He must have a very nice day :)

Thank you very much for a great story!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Chapter 5 on Jan 20, 2010 01:56 am
I did enjoy it, though it was a bit too lovey-dovey for my tastes at the end. Still - great story!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Chapter 5 on Jan 19, 2010 07:42 pm
“We’re going to dinner tonight.” Lucy raised an eyebrow. “He left a note on my pillow.”
Lucy feigned gagging and both laughed.
“And you don’t remember what happened?” Lucy asked.
“Not entirely.” Ginny was blushing again. “But I woke up in my bed.”
“Wearing the same clothes as the night before?”
“Well, now that you mention it, I was wearing my pajamas this morning, but I don’t remember putting them on...”
Lucy whistled and Ginny had the decency to blush so severely her face blended neatly with her hair.


ok, you HAVE to write a fic about THAT!
Telling us all the minor dirty little details that made the night that much more amazing!
Also, it would be nice if Ginny could remember, having a night with Draco and forgetting about it doesn't seem all that fun...



He remembered the way they had stumbled down the hallway and into her bedroom, never breaking their kiss. The way her hair had fanned out around her head as they tumbled onto her bed made his breathing difficult. He remembered the restraint it had taken him to leave her when he had realized she was far more intoxicated than he. The last thing he had wanted was for her to do something she would regret.
He had pulled away from her lips and held her closely to him, gently stroking her hair. In moments, she had fallen asleep and he [ suspence song ] had transfigured her work clothes into pajamas and scrawled a quick note.

THIS!
Is pure evil!
Ok, so it's nice to know Gin didn't forget about an amazing night with him, but...We don't get a smutty biscuit!!!![whinning loud voice]
I wanna a smutty biscuit for this fic!
One just for me and my crazy thoughts and reviews and crazy dances and laughng, crying, gagging and all sort of amusing things i do in front of the computer while reading a great fic!


He smiled and took in her casual jeans and sweater.
“Am I?” he grinned, grabbing her hand and pulling her to him.
“Yes, and I just got home,” she protested, successfully dodging him as he bent his head for a kiss. “I won’t be ready to go for a while. I helped mum in her garden earlier.”
She stepped out of his embrace and turned towards her bedroom. In three steps he had pulled her back into his arms again.

ok, i HAVE to say this:
I LOOOOVE the banter banter banter between these two and you write it so greatly!
i just love it!
And i really love this playfull, i-know-i-can-have-you Draco.



“By the way, why did you leave last night? I seem to remember things being rather heated.”
“Ginny Weasley, you were very smashed. Are you angry at me for being a gentleman?” He was joking, but his casual response only added to her sudden anger.
“A gentleman? You left a very hot and bothered witch completely high and dry last night!” she snarled, trying to free her arms from his grip.

Now THAT's the Gin i know and love, the one with quite a mouth and a lot of atitude.
plus a gentleman acting Draco is just too great to pass up!
=D



He propped himself up on his elbows to protest her sudden departure, but stopped when he saw her hands move to the button on her jeans. He sucked in a breath as she slowly undid the zipper and pushed her jeans to the floor. He barely registered that her underwear matched her bra before she stepped out of her jeans and crawled back onto the bed.

Some time later they lay tangled together, breathing heavily and sweating. When his breathing had returned to normal he rolled to the side and pulled her against him. He wrapped protective arms around her petite frame and planted a soft kiss on her forehead.


ok, so i don't know how appealing this idea my be to you but...can i get an early birthday present and have the companion fic that shows what happens between Ginny crawling in bed and laying together???
I really love Ginny's attitude in this fic and Draco is just so so sweet i can't forget every little thng he does!
I really wanna see these two together for at least a little while longer!!!
Please????


It was Sunday evening and Ginny had just escaped her brunch with Hermione and Lucy. Draco had been waiting in her kitchen and was now dragging her to the bedroom.

I really wish they had started sth in the kitchen!
i loooove kitchen and shower scenes!
Can we please have one?
i know this fic is finito[which i totally disaproove of, because i think with 2 such great characters we deserve to see at least one more chapter that will be just about the two of them, maybe in a weekend get away or sth.]



“Well, Malfoy’s usually get what they want,” he answered. “Now stop smirking at me.”
“And what does this particular Malfoy want?” she asked, leaning back and looking into his grey eyes.
“You. All of you, and for a very long time,” he whispered, suddenly serious. He found her hand and laced her fingers with his.

AAAWWWW!!!!
He's too sweet!
I love the possessiveness and the cocky arrogance!
It's just so perfect!
=D
Have i mentioned i love Gin?
She's just the perfect woman for him!
This Ginny is absolutely amazing and simply great!



I think I may be falling for you.”
His eyes grew wide before a smile curved his lips.
“I believe that may be catching, because I could be falling in love with you, too.”
She stared at him for a moment, relief flooding through her chest.
He smiled at her then and pulled her to him, covering her lips with his and wrapping his arms around her.


AAWWWW!!!!!!
WHERE can i get one?
i swear, i want this Draco for at least one weekend, he could carbonize or self combust, or just disappear in the middle of the night but i'd be just too happy just for knowing such a perfect guy exists[of course i'd go insane and poor trying to track him down all around the globe but it would be totally worth it!]



THis was the most sweet, perfet chapter!
perfect to be the last one, or the one before last[crosses fingers and hopes you'll understand i'm asking for onw more].
This was really really perfect, thank you so much for it!
It was truly wonderful!
I love Gin's relationship with Lucy and even more the one she has with Draco.
He's strong, sweet, caring, hot, rich and absolutely perfect.
She's a strong, confident, independant woman and just perfect for him.
I loved every minute of this, every line, every word.
It was just perfect!
Thank you so much for it!
i can't wait to see the next[extremely naughty] fic!
=D
the best of luck and i hope it's out soon!
=D
Thank you one more time for the great chapter!

kisses
Name: darinmeg reviewed Chapter 5 on Jan 19, 2010 07:29 pm
Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful story!
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed Chapter 5 on Jan 19, 2010 05:48 pm
Bravo! Wonderful chapter...I can't wait to see what her family and his thinks about this. Good Luck! :)
Name: ChickbabeC1 reviewed Chapter 5 on Jan 19, 2010 05:38 pm
My highlight the past couple of days has been this story!! IN LOVE!! Great writing!!
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed Chapter 5 on Jan 19, 2010 04:58 pm
ahhh, draco is so cute! And you should definitely post your other fic on here, becuase I like that one even MORE than this one! I bet tons of other FIA people would love it too. Good job on this fic !

XOXO, JT
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