Name: choravenclaw reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jan 09, 2010 02:10 am
OH!
how could i forget?
GRRREAT baner!
you've got!
right on!
=D
you have the D/G formula, especially thanks to Ginny's tongue lashng and not taking his crap.
plus Draco's charm and ability to anoy, embaress and drive her insane in all the possible ways.
Not to mention hottiness and slytherin sides on both of them!
SEE?
You're the perfect D/G autor!
Dunno why it took you so long to figuree this out, but now that you know that you just CAN'T stop writing!
*yes, my compliments do tend to sound like threats*
kisses
Author's Response: Haha, thanks again. This story is already finished, it's just a matter of final editing and posting to the site. I should have another chapter submitted sometime in the next day or so. Thanks for the review!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jan 09, 2010 02:03 am
Oh please!
cheesy is what makes every romance move!
even in real life!
and if you must know i was expecting him to slam a fist against the door right by the side of her face and call her a bunch of names for insulting his mother.
then she would slap him and he would leave in a huff or she wouldn't control her weasley temper and would simply punch him and give him a blood nose what would lead them inside for some pain reliefing potion and a mending spell, plus an apologie from bothsides[she wuld demand one from him].
then maybe they would get on mor civil terms and would schedulle a meeting finally after one or two chapters we would hae a real date, proposed by him and then a chaste kiss from hi[to see her acceptancy] then a fiery kiss such as this one from both.
phew!
i said all that in a breath.
anyway, i liked that you decided to cut all that and go stright for the kiss, after all the title DOES say passion.
I was wondering though...how would you feel about changing the rating to extremely naughty?
I was just thinking about what a kiss between them could lead to...considering the title i'm expecting a scene wherre she'll be throughly snogged and nearly shagged in his affice amongst[more lke on top of] parchments.
So, as i'm not familiar with any other work you've done[if you have other fics posted somewhere else],i was wondering if you could change the rating, because really, it's infuriating to see them getting clothes off and kissing all the way to the waist line and then go into the next morning or say they "made love" or "had a night of passion" or suh a rot.
REALLY, it gets me crazy to see scenes cut and so far you haven't cut any and that'swhat makes me like you somuc
So...if you could consider this...i would really apreciate.
^;~
*plus, it's meant as an advice/request from a D/G reader who READS reviews and not only WRITES them*
Also...great work!
I dunno if you have more things written, but if this is you first fic, don't stop you're a natural!
;D
kisses
Author's Response: Wow, this is a very long and great review! I guess I'm a straight-to-the-point writer, at least in this story anyway. About changing the rating, well, it probably won't work for this story. I appreciate your suggestions and will tell you if you can hang on for this story (there are only two more chapters left) then hopefully I will be able to post another story and that one will be rated extremely naughty. I hope you still enjoy this story though, even if it doesn't go into explicit detail - it's just a fun little smutty thing. Anyway, thanks so much for the review and expect a new chapter very soon!
Name: Dracogirl reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jan 08, 2010 10:07 pm
This story is coming along so nicely. You know I never really thought about Ginny as "snarky"; although she is often portrayed as having the same type of qualities I usually think of her as feisty or fiery. I like how Draco is thinking so much about Ginny and how she's trying to impress him. What I liked the best was the passionate kiss they shared. It was so much better than either one of the stalking away mad. Thanks so much for the quick update.
Author's Response: My favorite portrayal of Ginny is the feisty version, which I imagine to be somewhat snarky. I hope it came off all right. Thanks for the review and expect a new chapter very soon!
Name: raistlin89 reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jan 08, 2010 09:27 pm
hahahaa squeeeeee! that was intense, i really thouhght after the argument in the elevator he would leave, but i liked the surprise kiss hehehehe cant wait for the next chapter! =D
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing!
Name: shezachica85 reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jan 08, 2010 08:46 pm
yumm! giggle
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jan 08, 2010 05:07 pm
oh no, not cheesy at all! I really liked it! You don't take a lot of time and get right to what the readers are waiting for...D/G action! And it was so nice that Ginny is the one to initiate it. Normally, it's Draco becuase ya know, he's normally all horny and everything. And I thought is was hilarious how only Narcissa Malfoy can manage to be mistaken for her son's girlfriend, since she's so beautiful and everything. Anyways, this was my favorite chapter by far, and I thought it was just so lovely. HOpefully, even MORE D/G action next chapter! Good job, and please update soon!
XOXO, JT
Author's Response: Thanks so much for leaving a great review!! I'm glad you liked it. This is a pretty short fic (only about 5 chapters) so none of it will be too drawn out. However, I have another fic I've been working on that is novel length. Hopefully you'll read it, too, whenever I get around to posting it. Anyway, keep reading and thanks again for the awesome review!
Name: Hiddenangel reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 06, 2010 03:11 pm
Definitely liking the fic, can't wait tp read more.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: scentasia reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 06, 2010 08:05 am
I just love ur Draco girl!thats all i have to say...u portrayed him brilliantly!he is witty and funny at the same time..:D:D love your work!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!
Name: Dracogirl reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 05, 2010 09:12 pm
Such a cute story. I thought Ginny's stages of grief were great; alcohol, crying and ice cream.
The D/G interaction was great. It was sad what happened to Draco's cousin. I love arrogant, snarky Draco who really has a heart.
An update within the week!!! Life is Good.
Author's Response: I love arrogant, snarky Draco, too. Thanks so much for the review!!
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 05, 2010 05:30 pm
Haha, i liked the last line. And this "Let’s see…denial, anger, bargaining, depression and acceptance" is dead on. Loved D/G interaction. good job and please update soon!
XOXO, JT
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I wrote this so long ago the humor seems very cheesy to me, but I'm glad you liked it!
Name: shezachica85 reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 05, 2010 04:58 pm
LOL this is pretty entertaining. i cant wait to see where it leads, very interesting.
Author's Response: Thanks! It's going to get much more interesting in the next chapter!
Name: like a falling star reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 20, 2009 08:10 pm
cute story! do continue!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 20, 2009 02:43 pm
Well, this is most certainly interisting!
This fic looks really promising!
Please tell me you have many more chapters written and you won't ive this up soon!
I'll be looking out for an update!
^;^
kisses
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Name: lilactree reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 19, 2009 06:21 pm
The stories that start off with a bit of drama are usually the best :) I'll definitely be keeping tabs on this one - it was a great first chapter! Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks and I hope you're still reading!
Name: ChicOnaBroom reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 19, 2009 05:53 am
What a great start! There's nothing more amusing than the Weasley temper, and Malfoy's incessant goading. Haha. I love it! I can't wait to read what you come up with next!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Of course I love her temper and his snarky replies! I hope you enjoy the next chapter! Thanks for reviewing!
Name: raistlin89 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 19, 2009 12:15 am
oooh i like where this is going, cant wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!!
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 18, 2009 09:23 pm
haha, I saw Thomas Pearson, and I remembered that he was also a main character in Kate Brian's Private, and that he was also a bit of a player/womanizer in that one. Anyways, i am loving the snarky banter that's going on. hopefully, thomas makes a play for ginny's affections later in the story, maybe coming back as a jealous ex, i don't know. anywyas, good job and i can't wait to see how this goes!
XOXO, JT
Author's Response: I've never read the story you mentioned and honestly, I can't even remember how I came up Thomas Pearson as he's not really based on anyone I know. As for him making another appearance, I guess you'll just have to read the rest and see! Thanks for the review and, considering I'm currently snowed in, you should expect another chapter very soon!
Name: shezachica85 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 18, 2009 11:48 am
Oh i love pissed Ginny. Drunk Ginny is funnier i cannot wait for more
Author's Response: She is feisty, isn't she? Thanks so much for the review! I'll try to add the next chapter very soon!