Name: tinamarie reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jul 29, 2010 08:17 pm
Please update soon, don't let it end like this!
Author's Response: its not over yet! we still have 2 more chapter! thanks for reviewing :)
Name: cindy reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jul 29, 2010 11:45 am
i am a bit depressed after reading the chapter,but i guess that's what extremely well written stories do to you,connect to you on an emotional level.Good chapter.Can't wait to read more..
Author's Response: oh gosh. just wait till you read the end! LOL i'll be posting it very soon!
Name: erin noelle reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jul 26, 2010 11:36 pm
updateeee!!!
Name: Mungihead reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jul 25, 2010 07:24 pm
Awwwh.. I nearly cried. That was so sad, and full of so much raw emotion, but all the same it was beautifully written. Kudos to you for capturing emotions so perfectly!
But this line was so perfect, I cannot even believe. “Here's how it is,” he told her dryly. “I would die for you. If Tyger hadn't forced me inside that day Queens was lashing you, I certainly would have tried. I'm not going to live without you.”
Panifully beautiful, and very well written.
Name: openskys reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jul 25, 2010 03:39 pm
Hmm well that's a change and I have no idea why Zipes turned into zipeses in my last comment.
This story is just getting darker and darker. Is Zipes actually dead or was he just relocated? How are they going to get out of there? So many questions and I cannot wait for the answers!
Author's Response: lol, it happens!
yes, it does get darker. and darker. and then darker. and i cannot tell you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but the answers will come! there are only 2 chapters left.
thank you for taking the time to review! ♥
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jul 25, 2010 03:51 am
So sad. :(
Author's Response: i know. i felt sad writing it!
Name: BlackRaven reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jul 24, 2010 10:20 pm
I didn't notice this story when you first posted it. I remember seeing the title, and I think I assumed it was a song fic from AAR. But I really like this story! The idea of them both being trapped somewhere together, with the Order or DEs, has been done before. Nevertheless, you somehow make this exciting and fresh and unlike what I've read before. Excellent job!
Author's Response: thank you. i don't know who aar is and i despise traditional song fics, so i'm glad you read it anyway! the ending of the story was inspired by paper route (no relation to the title) but yeah, i don't do song fics!
i'm REALLY glad you find it unlike things you have previously read. i think that's a huge challenge in fanfic, is trying to find a original, creative plot line!
Name: dykeadellic reviewed
Chapter 3 on Jul 24, 2010 09:08 pm
Oh wow. I love this. I want the rest of it like, NOW. I saw it was updated and I was sooo excited. I check daily for my stories to be updated. This is amazing so far. How many chapters are left?
Author's Response: oh thank you! ♥ i really loved writing this story and I'm glad you're enjoying it. there is one full chapter and a shorter final chapter/ epilogue left, both of which i have already written, so you won't have to wait too long!