Name: CharmedLife19 reviewed
Chapter 27 on Nov 16, 2011 08:38 pm
I think with a baby to care about, the train was the safest way to go.
Loved this chapter. So emotional and lovely. :)
Author's Response: Good point with the Muggle transport. Why didn't I think to point that out? Thank you so much for reviewing! And for the really nice compliments. :)
Name: Sleepless reviewed
Chapter 27 on Nov 14, 2011 04:11 pm
This was amazingly well written! Great work!
Author's Response: Thank you! That's so sweet of you to say. And I didn't get a lot of response to this chapter, so I will just keep re-reading your review. :)
Name: DwellingInDreams reviewed
Chapter 27 on Nov 13, 2011 05:48 pm
Great start to Part Three! I think it's perfectly reasonable for them to use muggle transport for their trip. It's probably safer considering they don't know what they're going into; and it seems to reinforce that tension of wanting to see their families, but wanting to delay the meetings as well. I never considered how frightened Thuban might be of other people. Poor baby! That was a nice detail. And I love the way the family clock tracked Ginny's progress, and prepared the Weasley's for her arrival. Great start! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad to hear your thoughts on the Muggle transport. I think you explained it better than me. :) Porr little Thuban, right? What a shocking turn of events for the little guy. I actually forgot to put the clock in that sccene and my amazing beta SometimeSelkie pointed it out. So glad too. I think it needed to be there after playing such an important role throughout Part Two. Thanks again for your thoughtful review!