Name: Almicene reviewed
The Whispered Truth on Sep 23, 2012 09:24 am
Oh hello good story, plot, and in need of a sequel chapter. I wasn't expecting all of that, so it was a nice surprise.
It has such potential for the next chapter. Though I'm curious to see how you'll work it, because your Ginny seems very stubborn/damaged compared to the average. Just the right amount though from the plot events you seem to have put her through. I will say Draco as a ladies man is a tiny bit cliche though. I would have recommending the pretending approach because he does seem to have a thing for Ginny and doesn't seem like the type to stop until he gets what he wants. That would be my only criticism for the chapter.
Definitely expand it pretty please? I promise to review the next chapter too.
Author's Response: I'll hold you to your promise ;). Thank you for your review. This Ginny has really wormed into my head and is demanding that I tell her story, and you're right that to have it work, she has a long ways to go. As for Draco, when this is expanded on, I think you'll get a better sense of where he's coming from and why he's acting the way he does. He is the type to go after what he wants, but he is also a very prideful and perceptive man who knows just what will set Ginny off. :)
Name: pitzi reviewed
The Whispered Truth on Sep 23, 2012 06:14 am
Of course you should expand this! I would really like to read more of this story. But of course I'd rather they had a happy ending, even though right now the story doesnt suggest which ending it could be.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! It could go both ways, but I am a DG fan of course. ;)
Name: FrecklesForever reviewed
The Whispered Truth on Sep 22, 2012 07:06 pm
This made me chuckle a couple of times. I admit I'm a bit upset that it's "The End." I hope you really will expand it.
Author's Response: Thank you for review! I am working on an expansion, but we'll have to see how it goes.