Name: b1elliot reviewed
First Dose on May 29, 2017 01:42 am
These first drabbles are amazing! I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you!!
Name: tinyriot reviewed
First Dose on Jun 22, 2013 02:34 pm
Drabbles are like a small window into our favorite characters most intimate moments. The majority of the time I'm quite content with what I'm given, then there are those times where upon completion, I feel quite bereft and I selfishly want more. 'Transition' falls somewhere in the middle for me, it's such a beautiful piece (the imagery!!!) that I fear what more will do, but it did leave me with many questions. Ginny has been gone for nine years and her daughter is referred to as a child, which leads me to believe she had a falling out with her family over Draco (sad face) and then another one (dagger) with just Draco? Maybe after an even ten years she'll make a return back home?
Author's Response: I imagined she had a falling out with her family and Draco over her child, so to make peace, she isolated herself from all of them. I also like to imagine that both her family AND Draco have been searching for her over the last nine years, and eventually they'll all be reunited. :( Transition is one of those stories I know I could never do justice if I tried to expand it. I think it's at a decent length, though I do wish all my writing in general reflected the writing I did here. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Name: SunnyStorms reviewed
First Dose on Jun 19, 2013 03:41 pm
You forgot to warn for addiction! :P
I loled at the image of Ginny and Hermione drunk together in the first one. Would love to read how that one plays out!
Beautiful imagery in the second and nice extended metaphor. I especially loved the description of the daughter's eyes as "snow-bearing clouds".
Loved, loved the third. Very nice choice of line to end the piece and sum it up.
Author's Response: Thanks, Sunny! For the second drabble, I wish I knew where that writing came from because I feel like I can't do it anymore. :P The "snow-bearing clouds" descriptor is one of my favorites, so I'm glad you picked up on it! As for the last drabble, I'm a fan of those lines that sum up the whole story or make the title relevant. I think they're especially important in small stories like these. They don't always happen for me, but when they do, I'm particularly satisfied with the drabble. n_n
Name: Marinka reviewed
First Dose on Jun 04, 2013 09:58 pm
very somber feeling after reading some of the parts above. MOre?:))
Author's Response: Yep! I have a few more. They should be up soon. :)