Reviews For The Dating Charade
Name: prilly1918 reviewed Eleven: A Pool Party (Part Two) on Apr 28, 2016 02:49 am
I like the idea of the Snitch tat! Will Draco be able to practice his seeking skills on it in the next chapter?

Author's Response: I don't want to get anyone's hopes up, so I'll go ahead and say no. But will he get the opportunity for some Ginny Weasley Quidditch practice in the future?? I can most assuredly say yes to that. :))) Thank you for reading! :D
Name: haniqua reviewed Nine: A Pathetic Sandwich on Apr 27, 2016 12:13 am
I loooove that we got so much more insight into Draco this chapter! And I adore how you've developed him - you can see he has a lot of flaws, but he's also come to terms with them. Also love how Ginny build those flaws up into positive things too (because she lurrrrves him).
Still laughing at Colin's comment regarding Draco's coworkers never being there - and Draco's response! I was thinking the same thing. ;)
I'm interested that Ginny hasn't shared the matter of the work trip with Draco as yet - surely there'll be a big to-do once he finds out about Junker's ploy? I'm quietly hoping Draco tags along for the trip, haha.
Great update, looking forward to continuing! :)

Author's Response: Much more Draco insight to come. :))) Re: Colin's comment about Draco's coworkers - Yeahhhhh, I may or may not have used that to patch over a plot hole. Well, maybe not a plot *hole* so much as a *Draco's coworkers don't serve my plot so I'm going to ignore that they exist* plot negligence. 0:) We'll just have to see what happens with the trip! :)))))
Name: bigreader reviewed Eleven: A Pool Party (Part Two) on Apr 26, 2016 03:43 pm
Just read it all over again! SO GOOD.

Author's Response: Omg??? I'm so glad it's readable a second time through! XD
Name: bigreader reviewed Eleven: A Pool Party (Part Two) on Apr 26, 2016 01:24 pm
That was wonderful. I'm dying to see what happens. I loved every thing about this chapter. The tension is so great! I love how your writing comes to life.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. ;o; Thank you for reading and reviewing!!
Name: CrimsonQuill reviewed Eleven: A Pool Party (Part Two) on Apr 26, 2016 10:36 am
Draco's Seeker line just about killed me! *swoons* I'm honestly surprised Ginny didn't jump him after hearing that. Lol. I am so happily frustrated with the slow burn. I'm on the edge of my seat and just as I start thinking they'll kiss, they get interrupted!! Ooooohhh. You better be writing one heck of a kiss! ...and beyond kissing. Oops. Write more!!

Author's Response: Ginny really wanted to jump him after that line (me too, in fact. ;)) I make noooo promises that anything you'd like to see will make an appearance in the next chapter, but I can guarantee that they are coming... eventually. >:D I loved this review so much. Thank you for reading!!
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed Eleven: A Pool Party (Part Two) on Apr 23, 2016 06:52 pm
like it!! can't read ginny's pov..

Author's Response: I'm so glad!! I'm hoping to have the next chapter out in the next couple of weeks! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Name: lily_malfoy reviewed Eleven: A Pool Party (Part Two) on Apr 23, 2016 12:10 am
fingers crossed! this is amazing!!!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so! ;o; Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed Eleven: A Pool Party (Part Two) on Apr 22, 2016 06:18 pm
I just love this story. The characters are very real and nothing feels forced.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you!! I'm so glad you think so. n_n Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Name: dragoncharmer79 reviewed Eleven: A Pool Party (Part Two) on Apr 22, 2016 09:37 am
The torture...Can't wait to see what's coming!!!

Author's Response: I'm so glad! Thank you for reading and reviewing!!
Name: champy reviewed Eleven: A Pool Party (Part Two) on Apr 22, 2016 01:03 am
Please update... love the tattoo story... Genius!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I plan to update as soon as I am able to. :D Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Name: haniqua reviewed Eight: A Determined Ghost on Apr 22, 2016 12:18 am
PANSY/THEO PREQUEL?? Where? Please say you finished it and link me immediately.
Colin is the sweetest, I almost think he's my favourite character. I totally ship him and Draco and besties, hahaha.
Also, Jason Junker is a c*nt of a man and I hate him. u_u

Author's Response: Alas, I have about seven pages written for the Pansy/Theodore prequel, but between the DPN sequel and new chapters of TDC, I haven't worked on it in a while. I will, of course, publicize its publishing when it's done. :) It's kind of funny how the sweetest of all sweet characters (Colin) AND the scummiest scumbag in the poop pile (the aptly and unoriginally named Junker) both exist in the same story. I rather like that balance, though, and I know Ginny appreciates Colin all the more with Junker around. :P
Name: haniqua reviewed Seven: A Delicate Conversation on Apr 21, 2016 11:25 pm
Great chapter! I really like how you've developed Ginny, and I so appreciate that she's decided to keep her relationship between her and Draco.
Sad for the lack of Draco in this chapter but I'm definitely looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank yooouuuuu!
Name: mickblake reviewed One: A Tiny Problem on Apr 21, 2016 01:18 pm
I'm always pleased to see this fiction updated. I love your writing style. You do a great job describing the scene and emotions of the characters. I'm enjoying this pool party and looking forwarding its conclusion in the next chapter. Thanks for the quick update.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! And you're welcome!! I am going to do my best to have the next chapter out as quickly as possible. :) I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and thank you for reading and reviewing!
Name: TwistedPixie reviewed Eleven: A Pool Party (Part Two) on Apr 20, 2016 01:07 pm
Whoops! Managed to write out a review for a completely different story!

Oh guys, you're having no luck!! All we want is some hot DG action and everyone is determined for it not to happen.

Really enjoying this story, I love how they're getting closer and only just coming round to the idea. I wish pansy would go away on a very long holiday though!! Can't wait for the next one, good luck xx

Author's Response: The universe (read: the author) is bound and determined to keep them from kissing! What's the deal!! I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Name: Rosy Denz reviewed Eleven: A Pool Party (Part Two) on Apr 20, 2016 09:38 am
I hope you update soon, this was an amazing chapter - all of it! So enjoyed it, love the tattoo.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it!! I'll update as fast as I can. n_n Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Name: Pan reviewed Eleven: A Pool Party (Part Two) on Apr 19, 2016 10:28 pm
I am really enjoying this story! The slow burn is excellent. Here's to hoping that the speedy updates continue - what a lovely Tuesday surprise!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Let's both keep our fingers crossed about that speedy update. ;) Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Name: balencestochexi reviewed Eleven: A Pool Party (Part Two) on Apr 19, 2016 08:52 pm
That seeker line! My god! Loved this chapter! Thanks for updating!

Author's Response: You're so welcome!! Thank YOU for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. n_n
Name: Lady Mischief reviewed Eleven: A Pool Party (Part Two) on Apr 19, 2016 04:52 pm
The tension between Ginny and Draco is fantastic. I almost thought they'd kiss after Draco's confession that he too was a seeker. I really like how his confession put a different contation on how Ginny could move on from the past and her regret of the tattoo.

Author's Response: Yes! That's what I loved so much about the tattoo. She originally got it for Harry, but it could just as easily represent Draco. Still a bit of a tragedy because she's not (or she *thinks* she's not ;) ) in a relationship with Draco, but the potential is all there. She just has to reach out and grab it. ;D Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. That tension, man. That tension was the best part of writing this chapter for me.
Name: Desertisle reviewed Eleven: A Pool Party (Part Two) on Apr 19, 2016 02:02 pm
Great chapter- really good! Looking forward to reading more :).

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad. :) Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Name: haniqua reviewed Six: A Night Out on Apr 12, 2016 11:00 pm
I loved this chapter! Drunk!Pansy has to be my favourite, and I loved her interraction with Ginny. I like how tuned in Ginny is, yet she's so oblivious at the same time? You can really see that she has different values to Draco in that sense (though I'm sure it helps that this chapter was from his perspective, haha).
Great job with Draco's inner monologue!! But I'm disappointing he managed to cock block himself, because I was enjoying that scene. Though I do agree with him that it does feel totally skeezy in light of the situation with Junker, haha.
Ps. I couldn't guess which line is your favourite, because there were so many lines in this chapter that I loved. I'll take a stab in the dark and say it was something either Colin or Pansy said, based on the fact they are both hilarious.

Author's Response: I think I know what you mean about Ginny having different values than Draco, and that starts here in this chapter, but it's going to come up some more later, particularly where friendships are concerned. This is one of my favorite chapters because Colin and Pansy ARE HILARIOUS IMO, but my favorite line was actually said by Draco to Colin, the one where they're in the bathroom together and Draco says the thing about having war flashbacks. Kinda sad, but I get a kick out of it. Thank you so much for rereading and for all of the reviews so far!! ;o;
Name: haniqua reviewed Five: A Troublesome Crush on Apr 12, 2016 09:32 pm
I love the Ginny/Astoria interaction here, and I'm so glad you expanded the story to include it - it makes for a much richer story, having all of these interactions that are external to the central plot.
Also super appreciative of the conversation between Ginny and Astoria - it's so true, what both of them have said, and it's so easy to be aware of those concepts but still fall into them regardless (not sure if that makes sense but whatever, I'm sure you get the gist).
It's so sweet how protective Draco has become, too! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE THEIR DATE (pretend date?)!

Author's Response: Yes, I know what you mean. ;) Lots more Astoria in the next few chapters!
Name: haniqua reviewed Four: A Casual Lunch on Apr 12, 2016 07:40 pm
Okay, so I've decided chapters from Draco's POV are my favourite.
I am suuuper appreciative of how you've characterised Harry - I get so sick of Harry bashing for the sake of developing a plausible DG relationship, lately.
Also, the Weasleys were hilarious. I loved Molly and Arthur - clearly no-nonsense when it comes to their children, not to mention Victoire's pink hair and the comments about Draco and Ginny having kids one day, hahaha.
Great chapter!

Author's Response: Yes! I just think Harry in canon wouldn't be so antagonistic towards Draco, not like Ron. Canon shows that he sees gray morality as white, so knowing that Draco was reluctant to do what certain people wanted him to do during the war, I think he would be sympathetic towards Draco. And I wanted to show that Harry and Ginny really don't want to be together anymore, that they prefer being friends. Harry getting defensive over Ginny's new boyfriends has its place in certain stories, but it didn't fit in this story. (And I don't like it!!!) I think Ron is antagonistic enough for everyone. ;)
Name: haniqua reviewed Three: A Stressful Morning on Apr 12, 2016 05:56 pm
Loooove this chapter - Draco is so thoughtful (almost in a calculating, serial-killer kind of way... but thoughtful, nonetheless).
Ginny was characterised well, as always; I like that she's so frustrated by her situation, because it just comes across so authentically. And LOL at Draco giving her a punching bag in his office to let off some steam. I'm sure it would have been very interesting for his coworkers to listen in on, haha.
Can't wait to see what happens at the Burrow!

Author's Response: Unfortunately, Draco shares his office with two other people. Conveniently, they're never there, so... :)
Name: haniqua reviewed Two: A Dinner Date on Apr 11, 2016 11:34 pm
Another great chapter! Really enjoyed reading this from Draco's POV - he's such a snob, but it's weirdly endearing. He's just so oblivious about it, which is my favourite kind of Draco.
It was nice to see Draco's reasoning here as well, and I like that he's upfront about the chemistry between the two of them - it's a nice change from the guarded, closed off archetype and I'm so interested to see how you've expanded his characterisation.
Ginny was great as well, and it was excellent seeing her from Draco's perspective to reinforce the type of character she is.
I also really appreciate the way you manage to elaborate on backstory - you give us a lot of information to set up the history of your universe without dumping it all at once. You have a really organic way of writing where everything feels like it unfolds on it's own, like a real person's thought process, which is a refreshing way to read from a character's perspective. :) Great job!

Author's Response: What you said about how I incorporate backstory makes me so happy!! (Honestly all of your reviews do, but shhhh...) Sometimes I worry about info-dumping, but I'm glad you think I incorporate need-to-know information organically. :) The Draco chapters are by far my favorite chapters to write because they way I envision him is so much fun. He's cool and suave and a snob and stuck up, but underneath he's a giant NERD in that he's not cool at all. He's just gotten better at pretending he is. ;) Thank you so much for the thoughtful review! ;o;
Name: haniqua reviewed One: A Tiny Problem on Apr 11, 2016 03:57 pm
Okay so I'm FINALLY rereading this, and it's even better than I remember!
I love the issues you deal with in this fic - it's sooooo hard to deal with unwanted attention as a woman particularly in a professional setting. And I appreciate you took the time to tackle feelings of being a failure that she hasn't been able to deter Jason, despite trying everything.
And I absolutely love your Draco already - he's cool, and he plays along with Ginny and I love how you managed to make him plausibly invested in her pretense. It's fantastic.
I totally forgot about Colin, though! He's so sweet, and you characterise him so well.
Anyway, this was by far my favourite fic of this exchange and I cannot wait to keep reading and see how you've expanded it.

Author's Response: Draco doesn't stay cool for very long. In my expansion of this story, one of the things I'm particularly proud of is how Draco's character evolved, too. He's got his own demons he's trying to hide behind a suave veneer. ;) And Colin, poor Colin. He's so lovable, but I always feel bad that I wrote him as a ghost. ;o; I hope you enjoy the parts I've added to the story! Thank you so much for reading (again!)!
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