Name: Kisou reviewed
Chapter 1 on May 02, 2006 01:06 pm
Could you give this chapter a name. It doesn't have to be original, but it's weird for the other chapters to have titles and this one not to.
Name: SoxzFan reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 03, 2004 03:44 pm
I am enjoying this story so far. you are doing a excellent job writing. update soon!
Name: pinksunryse reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 03, 2004 02:25 pm
i like it very much! I really do hope you continue!
Name: blissfulxsin reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 03, 2004 02:01 pm
the story so far is pretty good, keep writing it so i have something to read.. heh.
Name: SpartanGurl reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 03, 2004 10:15 am
I am liking the beginning of this story. I think your doing great and can't wait for the next chapter!!
Name: Murph reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 03, 2004 10:10 am
I love this story so far! It's a great beginning...hope u update soon!
Name: Lovely Lioness reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 03, 2004 09:30 am
Please update soon! That was an interesting start.
Name: Skye reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 02, 2004 02:53 pm
This is a great start! I think it is a great story...keep writing!