Name: choravenclaw reviewed Revelations on Dec 16, 2009 10:33 am

RIght, well, i have read this fic about 5 or 6 times, whenever there was a new chapter or i just felt like it.
i don't think i have ever reviewed though.
So now that i finally have a vacation where i'm staying home i decided to do so.
i usually get this fic confused with Hasperied's apple because of the situation they are in...i dunno maybe you both got it from a challenge or eschange.
Anyway, here's the first[of many] review:



“I don’t want our son to make the mistakes I did. I don’t want him to receive the mark.”
“How do you know it’s a boy? I’m only about four weeks pregnant.”
“It’s a boy,” he said with conviction, “I can feel it.”
“And there was me thinking I was the pregnant one.”

this was one of the first times i actually smiled sincethe beginning of the fic.
It' finally some humor and it's a very nice change.

The first time i smiled was when she told him she was pregnant, it was not the usual thing for couples but i found it very beautiful and sweet and even his comand made it sound all the better!
So, yeah, i loved it!
=DDD
I feel kinda twisted for fincing this highly amusing, not to mention cute, fluffy and romantic but i just CAN'T see the bad in Draco!
I mean, i ddin't read the chapter when she was in the cellar, well, i ddi but only in the first time, and i skipped a few bits here and there.
And this is more likely the 7th time i read it so i already forgot about what happens there.

Anyway, called me sick or twisted but this is a very cute, fluffy chapter and i really loved it!
i think all the pain she went through was worth it just to get to this point, an even ground and even some banter!
=)

He gave her a ghost of smile, the first she had ever seen from him. It changed his face entirely from hard and cruel to vaguely boyish and appealing.
She smiled back and drained her cup.


I love boyish, cute Draco, that's what i missed abot the previous chapters, this banter with no ill intent and coming from both sides!
This is a changing point in this fica and i love it!
=D
Congratulations, by the way, on your writin, you do it superbly!


kisses

Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed Revelations on Mar 11, 2008 03:08 pm

This story is becoming one of my D/G favorites, I know I am going to cry when I come to the chapter where there is nothing left....I will hate myself for starting it, knowing you would never finish it...

Name: Kit reviewed Revelations on Dec 08, 2005 09:03 pm

some people are so dumb. they wouldn't know a good story it it bit them in the ass. anyway, woohhooo. this is great!!!!! i love it!!!!