Name: LuvMe4Me reviewed
Painfully Exquisite Irony on Aug 16, 2004 06:22 am
OMG!! What now??? Is she DEAD??? Holy shit, what's gonna happen next?? Is this story OVER or what???
Name: ciaryn reviewed
Is this how it ends? on Aug 16, 2004 03:36 am
Very good story. I hope you write more.
BTW babies do open their eyes the first day they are born, if they don't, the doctors tend to think there is something wrong with them.
I should know, I have had a few myself lol
Author's Response: I did think so. My mother is a Midwife and she is always going on about it. I was just temporarily thrown. Thank you.
I do intend to write more, there is already a chapter 15 (which I need to have betaed) and I am working on chap 16 (which is going everso slowly), but my time at the moment is dedicated to a not-so-little piece of Smut-fic that has been bouncing around my head annoying me INTENSELY. It started off as a one-shot but somehow has developed a rather predictable but entertaining plot with a nasty sniping Narcissa and a shrieking Ginny. It's quite worrying. I hate it when plot bunnies procreate! LOL
Name: drago del fuoco reviewed
Painfully Exquisite Irony on Aug 15, 2004 04:44 pm
I love your story. It's so sad yet so happy. And if you kill Ginny, a evil, nagging plot bunny should haunt you for the rest of your life! Just joking, but I absolutely love your story. It's so heart wrenching, and your writeing exquiste. I can't wait for an update of some sort.
Name: Rosaline reviewed
Painfully Exquisite Irony on Aug 15, 2004 03:42 pm
I love your story, but you should check some facts because a baby doesn't open its eyes the first day it's born. But otherwise, great story.
Author's Response: Artistic Licence. *Shrugs* I thought that a baby opened it's eyes whenever. Some earlier than others. I know my friend's baby opened his eyes fairly soon because she made a huge thing of it, but I'll have to check. If needs be I'll edit.
Name: Kelly reviewed
Painfully Exquisite Irony on Aug 15, 2004 11:48 am
Found your story the other night and read it today. Love the story line and how well it's written!!!
Please don't let Ginny die....her and Draco are just finding each other....please!!!!!!!!!!!!
TTFN
Kelly
Name: dragonsangel68 reviewed
Painfully Exquisite Irony on Aug 15, 2004 06:15 am
Well done, this was a really gripping chapter! She can't die though, they're falling in love! I guess I'll just have to wait patiently for the next installment :D
Author's Response: You'll have to wait very patiently indeed. There seems to be some sort of error somewhere that screws around with the punctuation marks in my story as well as human errors that I keep trying to correct and not having much success and thus every chapter submission is rejected. I am beginning to lose the will to go on!
If you like I'll add you to the mailing list for the 'raw' chapters because I have a few people I e-mail them to.
Myanceris
Name: Nakita reviewed
Painfully Exquisite Irony on Aug 14, 2004 08:12 pm
WOW! you've gotten me hooked on this story! I want updates please! I love this!
Name: nani51 reviewed
Painfully Exquisite Irony on Aug 14, 2004 06:49 pm
ohh god you just have to leave it at such a cliff hanger update too god i got know what happens
Name: Gianfared reviewed
Is this how it ends? on Aug 14, 2004 01:58 pm
What a way to start a story! It looks to be very promising and quite an emotional ride.
Name: Stephanie reviewed
Painfully Exquisite Irony on Aug 14, 2004 09:04 am
You must update ASAP! I am dying here. LOL. It is an awesome story.
Name: Naunet reviewed
Painfully Exquisite Irony on Aug 14, 2004 07:10 am
oh i hope ginny will live. i'll start to cry bad if she dies. sighs, that was so intense. it was brilliant. please update soon!
Name: Naunet reviewed
Reflections and Cocoa on Aug 13, 2004 06:10 pm
oh this is so sad and good, i can't wait till an update
Name: dragonsangel68 reviewed
Reflections and Cocoa on Aug 13, 2004 02:25 am
Your story is so wonderful, I am thoroughly enjoying it. I suspect that Ginny is very slowly falling in love with Draco??? Loving it totally and waiting for your next chapter eagerly :D
Author's Response: Yes, I do believe she is. This story started out with a definitive idea for beginning and end but now it has sort of morphed into Fluffy PWP but I am working on getting it back on track. It is mostly a showcase piece for the (numerous) progeny of the plot bunny! LOL
I am glad that you are enjoying it - I've had a really positive response from everyone so far. It's so encouraging, especially when you think that a week ago this story was hidden deep inside my computer only seeing the light of day when the Plot bunny started hopping around my head! LOL
Thank you.
Name: Aya reviewed
Reflections and Cocoa on Aug 12, 2004 06:26 pm
This was a wonderful story! I'm looking forward to more updates! If it isn't too much trouble would you mind e-mailing me when you do update? aya3_2_1@hotmail.com Wonderful job! ~Aya
Name: NiennaS reviewed
Reflections and Cocoa on Aug 12, 2004 05:07 pm
Well I've gone crosseyed now from reading that from start to finish nonstop, can't wait for more, Im not usually into fluff, but I love the angst you've thrown in.
NiennaS.
Name: nani51 reviewed
Is this how it ends? on Aug 12, 2004 03:55 pm
very very nice chapter i'm on the edge right now the suspense is killing me as i write this excuse me as i read the next chapter
Name: dragonsangel68 reviewed
Is this how it ends? on Aug 12, 2004 04:42 am
Wow, this is brilliant!! My eyes are hanging out of my head at the moment but I'm determined to read more tonight. Wonderful job, love your style of writing :D
Name: madalene3666 reviewed
Is this how it ends? on Aug 11, 2004 11:14 am
Glad to see that you've posted the story here on FIA. I've been absolutely glued to it for the past few days since I found it on the other site.
Great story and I'm enjoying your characterizations of Draco, Ginny and Narcissa.
Author's Response: I am glad you invited me here, I've been dying to post the 'unedited' version. I think the story loses something without the demi-smut!
I have also received some advice that my punctuation etc could use a little work. I know, it's terrible, I am inordinately fond of putting random capitals into the middle of sentances. My English teacher at school used to hate me - I used to wear out her red pen. Ha Ha. I will get around to editing one of these days but at the moment I am writing feverishly. I have several plot bunnies currently in residence and the one being the most loquacious at the present time is a naughty little piece of smut that has been driving me INSANE! So I have decided to write it and hopefully it'll get it out of my system. Make some room in my head for the Ex Ir, Immortal and Elemental Plot Bunnies.
Love
Myanceris