Name: imelda reviewed Chapter Two on Mar 02, 2005 04:31 pm
I don't get why there is (by this chapter, anyway) only 1 review. My guess is that it's wildly popular on some other site where you've previously posted this. Because you're a good writer! In the first chapter, I began to roll my eyes when you started dissing Pansy, because everyone does it, and ever since reading Slytherincess' "Muggle Studies" I get annoyed whenever Pansy is yet again cast off as irritating. But then you went off into a whole background story for it, how Draco had initially expressed interest in her, and how of course at first her attention was flattering. It all seemed very realistic and in-character and you actually dug a little deeper into his feelings on it than most people do. So that right there grabbed my attention. As for this chapter, it was great seeing Draco and Ginny's interaction. Aside from how enjoyable it is to see Ginny get one over on Draco, you showed them both in really vulnerable moments that were totally believable. Can't wait to read more!!! So I will!
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