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Registered: Jul 03, 2007
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Reviews by detlefren

Caught by dragonsangel68    (Reviews - 188)

Draco is discovered in his girlfriend's bed after a party. Chaos ensues when her father invokes an ancient magical law, much to the mortification of the Malfoys.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Arthur Weasley, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Lucius Malfoy, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 10 | Word count: 22842 | Read count: 33836 | Published: Jan 03, 2005 | Updated: Jan 22, 2005
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Reviewer: detlefren Signed
Date: Aug 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Are You Ready?

This plot has such a good flow. You're never bored but it's like you're actually there.

Author's Response: Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: detlefren Signed
Date: Aug 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: Mrs. Malfoy

Great fic !!! Keep up the good work. Love ya, k

Author's Response: Thank you :)

A reason to visit her at work by JuliusCaesar    (Reviews - 22)

Draco gets in trouble with his Medi-witch
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 453 | Read count: 6866 | Published: Jan 19, 2005 | Updated: Jan 19, 2005
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Reviewer: detlefren Signed
Date: Jul 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: A reason to visit her at work

Great writing! It brought a smile to my face.

Reviewer: detlefren Signed
Date: Jul 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: A reason to visit her at work

Great writing! It brought a smile to my face.

Feast of Fools by Mynuet    (Reviews - 103)

Five Death Eaters in training meet utter defeat at the hands of a Weasley girl who knows the way to a man's heart is through his stomach.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 13551 | Read count: 28273 | Published: Jan 30, 2005 | Updated: Feb 07, 2007
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Reviewer: detlefren Signed
Date: Aug 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: or, How Ginny Got Her Minions

What a cute fic! It's adorable!

Reviewer: detlefren Signed
Date: Aug 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: The Reckoning

This had such a sweet ending. The whole thing was fabulous and well written. Plus, while slightly extreme, the plot is way believable. Teenaged boys are slaves to food; I can say from experience. So, food very well could make any normal teenaged guy pledge his allegiance to a cute, teenaged chef.

Baking Lessons by Embellished    (Reviews - 32)

Draco finds Ginny baking in the kitchens. Has he bitten off more than he can chew?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4372 | Read count: 6830 | Published: Jan 30, 2005 | Updated: Jan 30, 2005
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Reviewer: detlefren Signed
Date: Jul 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Baking Lessons

Well they do say the way to a man's heart is through his stomach...

Author's Response: Indeed it is! Thanks for the comment!

A Christmas Feast by Rainpuddle    (Reviews - 32)

The wind was cold outside, the snow falling lightly against the windowpane.

*An experiment in collaboration between Liss and Cindy for The Feast D/G Challenge*
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 1 | Word count: 7573 | Read count: 7326 | Published: Feb 08, 2005 | Updated: Feb 08, 2005
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Reviewer: detlefren Signed
Date: Jul 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: A Christmas Feast

Good writing! It's obvious that the author of this story was really passionate about writing it. Hard work is really such an important virtue and it's plain that anyone whoever writes like this has it.

The Eternal Gesture by torndeception    (Reviews - 30)

A series of interactions between Draco and Ginny. Something I wrote to get my creativity wheel turning.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1230 | Read count: 2438 | Published: Mar 20, 2005 | Updated: Mar 20, 2005
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Reviewer: detlefren Signed
Date: Aug 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Eternal Gesture

I definately enjoyed it. Fluff is really awesome.

Treason! by Sarea Okelani    (Reviews - 69)

Draco Malfoy learns that some mornings, he should just stay in bed.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 1 | Word count: 5533 | Read count: 10597 | Published: May 20, 2005 | Updated: May 20, 2005
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Reviewer: detlefren Signed
Date: Jul 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Treason!

Omg! That's such a sweet story. I actually got all teary eyed!

A Fate Worse Than Death by ragdollangel    (Reviews - 28)

It wasn’t half as bad as she thought it would be.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1316 | Read count: 4613 | Published: Jun 13, 2005 | Updated: Jun 13, 2005
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Reviewer: detlefren Signed
Date: Jul 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: A Fate Worse Than Death

This ficlet is written well, entertaining, and realistic. Plus, I think it's kinda sweet.

Staring Rites by Echo    (Reviews - 10)

Just a crossover drabble wherein Draco and Ginny have been sent on a mission together with disasterous results.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Crossover
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 247 | Read count: 3141 | Published: Jul 26, 2005 | Updated: Jul 26, 2005
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Reviewer: detlefren Signed
Date: Aug 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: drabbley

That was good, but I need more. You kinda a just stopped. How about a sequel?

She Will Never Know by Dan    (Reviews - 10)

Part II: "Bullies were something you were unfamiliar with, something that you weren't used to, but still a part of adolesences. And by sixteen, you'd thought that everyone your age had outgrown something as immature like that - bullying.
But, then again, this was Malfoy you were talking about."
Two-shot perspectives over a Quidditch game.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1935 | Read count: 2206 | Published: Aug 15, 2005 | Updated: Aug 15, 2005
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Reviewer: detlefren Signed
Date: Aug 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Part I

Awww... This was great. It's kinda sad, though. Not deperessing, just sad. I don't know; it's really complex. Anyway, good job on the fic!

Four Weddings and a Funeral by Maelyn    (Reviews - 67)

What happens a few years after you finish school? All your friends begin to get married. It's a great way to see old friends from the past and to form new... relationships. *Not based on the movie, just liked the title and the concept.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 5 | Word count: 7521 | Read count: 19969 | Published: Sep 25, 2005 | Updated: Oct 08, 2005
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Reviewer: detlefren Signed
Date: Aug 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Pansy and Neville

I'm lovin it so far.

Reviewer: detlefren Signed
Date: Aug 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Lavender and Blaise

I can't believe you killed off Hermione! But I think I can live with it; it does make sense. BTW, I loved the name for the new baby.

Reviewer: detlefren Signed
Date: Aug 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: The Funeral

Awww... I love it when Draco is all sweet.

Reviewer: detlefren Signed
Date: Aug 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Mr. and Mrs.

The ending was great. A tad predictable, but it was the perfect ending. I loved this fluffy fic. I do adore fluff. Thank you so much!

A Shadow of Doubt by andromeda77    (Reviews - 45)

An extended short story especially for Halloween. A Slytherin dare forces Ginny into the Shrieking Shack on Halloween...and during a full moon. Watch the events unfold as unexpected company arrives.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Action, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 3 | Word count: 10868 | Read count: 19944 | Published: Oct 28, 2005 | Updated: Oct 30, 2005
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Reviewer: detlefren Signed
Date: Jul 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1 - Millicent's Dare

oh, a cliff hanger. great way to hold your readers attention.

As Long As You're Mine by CharmedLife19    (Reviews - 16)

"...And just for this moment | As long as you're mine | I've lost all resistance | And crossed some borderline..." Even if it's just for one night, intended hate has turned to love. (HBP Spoiler!)
**based off the song by the same title from the Musical Wicked**
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4691 | Read count: 1122 | Published: Dec 12, 2005 | Updated: Dec 12, 2005
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Reviewer: detlefren Signed
Date: Aug 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: As Long As You're Mine

That's the saddest thing, but it hit me hard. It was truly the most romantic, pure story that one could create.

Merry Christmas Draco by Myanceris    (Reviews - 24)

A family Christmas. This is a very short holiday ficlet that is eye-bleedingly fluffy, horrendously cliche, and has absolutely no redeeming value past the warm and fuzzy feelings that come from reading it.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1692 | Read count: 3946 | Published: Dec 29, 2005 | Updated: Dec 29, 2005
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Reviewer: detlefren Signed
Date: Jul 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Merry Christmas Draco

awww.... that's really sweet. Fluffy albeit, but I am a sucker for fluff!

He Calls Her By Her New Last Name by blacksails1329    (Reviews - 12)

His only consolation was the fact that her eyes didn’t light up when she looked at her husband the way they lit up when she looked at him all those years ago. He had never seen Ginny look as positively alive as when it was just the two of them together, those times when they could pretend that everything was going to be okay.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 1 | Word count: 673 | Read count: 2258 | Published: Dec 29, 2005 | Updated: Dec 30, 2005
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Reviewer: detlefren Signed
Date: Sep 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: He Calls Her By Her New Last Name

Awww... that's heart wrenching.

Rules That Don't Apply by blacksails1329    (Reviews - 4)

In life there are rules that everyone follows. They aren’t necessarily written down or memorized by young children, but they are there all the same. They are well-known and they are adhered to. They aren’t particularly strict or unreasonable... There are also situations where the rules don’t apply.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 949 | Read count: 1957 | Published: Dec 30, 2005 | Updated: Dec 30, 2005
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Reviewer: detlefren Signed
Date: Aug 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Rules That Don't Apply

Awwww.... That's really sweet. Very romantic, realistic, a tad fluffy, and really sweet.

All I Want For Christmas by Embellished    (Reviews - 23)

What do you give a man who has everything?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3105 | Read count: 6014 | Published: Feb 17, 2006 | Updated: Feb 17, 2006
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Reviewer: detlefren Signed
Date: Jul 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: For Mynuet

I loved it! Absolutely heart-melting!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review!

As Always, An Admirer by distempered    (Reviews - 50)

Ginny’s being showered with gifts from an anonymous admirer…who just so happens to be a Slytherin that we all know and love.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3605 | Read count: 6873 | Published: Mar 09, 2006 | Updated: Mar 11, 2006
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Reviewer: detlefren Signed
Date: Jul 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: As Always, An Admirer

Awww... That's so sweet. Kind of like a Harry Potter-esque fairy tale.

If We Meet Today by tudorrose1533    (Reviews - 22)

Ginny Weasley and Draco Malfoy have an encounter on the Eiffel Tower, as a rainstorm begins to rage.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2117 | Read count: 3752 | Published: Mar 13, 2006 | Updated: Mar 13, 2006
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Reviewer: detlefren Signed
Date: Aug 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: If We Meet Today

That's great! Sweet and romantic, but not ridiculus or without an intelligent plot.