Wow. This story had me alternatively laughing out loud, sighing in a fit of empathy, or, at the very end, on the verge of tears. Mostly now though I just want to know what happens next! I sorely hope that this brilliance has not been abandoned. It was fascinating to watch the characters, relationships, and definitely your skill as a writer naturally develop throughout the chapters. 'Twas pure delight to read and hope, hope, hopefully part two will soon be upon us!